[魔女训练营]作文篇----动词的联用

大家好，由于现在在进行研英真经研习小组的活动，所以对于真题的研究，海豚认为还是大家自主性的进行会效果更好，所以出魔女训练营阅读篇的频率可以不用太高，同时完形和新型阅读也是，大家平时多在英语台里就每一年的真题进行讨论就可以了，模拟题出得好的不多，我们基本上就是只以真题进行讨论了，当然，假如以后海豚遇到了好的题，一定会召集大家讨论的，嘻嘻。
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       所以现在海豚得以闲空来出关于作文的练习。
       不可能要大家对着电脑太长时间，写很长的应试作文，但是，作文是由句子组成的，所以我们可以练习句子的写法。由此来提高写作的能力（我所指的能力是，[color=red][b]指哪打哪[/b][/color]的能力，就是说你的脑子里想写出什么就是什么，不会写到一半，词穷了，或者发现自己不会写等等）

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     但是，如果您对着一个题目，连中文都想不出来应该怎么写的话，那么你要试着锻炼自己的思考能力了哦，还有就是没话  找话说的能力，呵呵（政治上也许也会很有用的）

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       好了，多余的话，我们就不说了。
       每次的活动我会有不同的专题，大家按照我的提示去进行中翻英，虽然说是中翻英，但是随便你怎么写，只要你表达出来的意思和我希望大家表达的意思相近，就可以了。

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[b]今天这一期的内容是：动词的联用[/b]
       一个句子里，出现了很多的动词，我们很想用好它们，使我们的句子看起来丰满一些，不会总是一些简单而简短的单句组合，可是总是不小心在一句话里出现了两个谓语，或者是没有谓语，或者是用错谓语，或者是……等等等等的问题啊，呵呵
        所以，到底应该怎么样用谓语呢？
        要海豚专门拿一期来讲，可能都讲不完（语法的东西也不是考研主要的考核对象），但是，希望大家能从例子和练习当中，揣摩出使用谓语的感觉。在描述图画内容的时候，也许会很有用哦~

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[quote]1、在焦急地[color=darkorange]等待[/color]高考成绩的那些日日夜夜，我的心中[color=darkorange]充满[/color]了迷惑，不知道未来[color=darkorange]带给[/color]我的[color=darkorange]会是[/color]什么，惊奇、兴奋，还是失望、悲伤？
英文翻译为：On those days and nights when I [color=darkorange]was waiting for[/color] the results of the Entrance Examination , [color=darkorchid]my heart was [u]filled with[/u] wonder[/color] .[color=darkorchid] I [u]wondered[/u] what[/color] the future [color=darkorange]held for[/color] me ,of surprise and excitment or dissappointment and sorrow.
紫色部分都是主句部分，其他的都是修饰。黄色是动词[/quote]
大家先看这一句，看看人家是怎么写的，假如要你写的话，你会怎么写呢？
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下面大家来自己试试怎么写吧~
[quote]2、那个女孩跑着赶上了妈妈，并伸出手抓住妈妈，哭着让她买更多的糖果、饮料，但母亲坚持说她们已经买的够多了。
可能要用到的单词：strech
[/quote]英文翻译为：**** Hidden Message *****
[quote]3、在同事们的注视下，他神情尴尬，满脸通红，低下了头。他随手拿起一张报纸，假装看报，用它遮住了脸。
[/quote]英文翻译为：**** Hidden Message *****
[quote]4、他们所有的注意力都集中在手头的研究项目上，他们相信，只要不灰心，迟早会取得这些试验的成功。[/quote]
**** Hidden Message *****
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[[i] 本帖最后由 海豚宝贝 于 2007-11-6 14:33 编辑 [/i]]

来试一下，海豚不要笑话偶啊

2，That girl ran has been catching up with mother, and stretched out the hand to hold mother, cried to let her buy more candies and drinks, but the mother persisted said they already bought sufficiently.

3,Under the colleagues gazed, he looked embarrassed, with her face blushed and lowered his head. He readily pick up a newspaper and pretend to read newspapers, which cover with a face.

4,All their attention has focused on the research project at hand, they believe that, if not discouraged, sooner or later, they will achieve the success of these tests.

That girl,who catch up with her mother at a run and .....
不会！！！em29

2、那个女孩跑着赶上了妈妈，并伸出手抓住妈妈，哭着让她买更多的糖果、饮料，但母亲坚持说她们已经买的够多了。
可能要用到的单词：strech
the girl ran to keep close to her mother ,stretched hands to scratch her mother and let her but more sandy and drinks for her crily,but her mother insisted that they had bought too much

3、在同事们的注视下，他神情尴尬，满脸通红，低下了头。他随手拿起一张报纸，假装看报，用它遮住了脸。
at the glare of colleges,he was embarassed ,put his  head down.He with abandon picked up a piece of newspaper,pretengding to read it,....


4、他们所有的注意力都集中在手头的研究项目上，他们相信，只要不灰心，迟早会取得这些试验的成功。
They focus on these research programs in hands,they believe that only if they don't say die,the success of these tests will be achieved sooner or later

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em60 貌似不会哪~~

顶顶卧室新人!

That girl catched on her mother, streched   and asked for more suger and soft-drink, but her mother said they had bought enough .
At the sight of comrades , he looks  embarassed ,with a red face and fall the head .Then he takes a piece of newspaper by hands ,disguises as reading it and   covers his face.
With all attension forcused on this handful program ,they believe that these experiement will succeed sooner or later if only  non-discourage.

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That girl catch up with her mother,streched  and asked for  more sweets and beverages,but her mother insists that they had bought enough..

支持楼主，锻炼我的翻译能力。

2 That girl run to cathc up her mother strech her mother's hand crying for more sweet and breavege, though her mother insisted they have bought enough.

3 Under the watch of his collegaue, he fells shame. He take a newspaper pretented reading it, and cover his face.

4 They pay all attention to the research project, they believe, if only they are not give up, they wil sucess in this research sooner or later.
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That girl was running to  catch up with her mother and streching out her hand to her mother ,crying for buying much sweets and juice,but her mother said that they had bought enough.
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[[i] 本帖最后由 yjrsmile 于 2007-11-7 13:05 编辑 [/i]]

有点难啊！谢谢海豚姐姐！

谢谢海豚！期待下一期的内容！

The girl ran to catch her mam, hold her, cryed to bed her for more suger and drink, however, her mam insisted it was enough.
Watched by his collegues, he was embarssed, his face was totally red and he low down his head.He get a paper pretended to be watching, but covered his face.
They put all their attention into the research, believing, as long as not losing their heart, they will achieve the success of the test earlier or later.

丢人现眼一下
2.The girl ran to catch up with her mather, streched her and cried for more candies and drink. But her mather insisted that they had bought enough.
3.Stared by the colleagues, he lowered his head, embarrassed and blushing.  He picked up a piece of newspaper which he pretended watching and covered his face with.
4.They concentrated all their attention on the research project on hand. And they believed that these experiments would success sooner or later as long as they didn't lose heart.

That girl catched up with her mother, streched the hands and asked for more suger and soft-drink, but her mother insisted that  they had bought enough .

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2.The girl catched her mother and streched her with her hands,crying for more sugar and drink, but her mother pesisted that they had holded enough.
3.Under the staring of his colleage, he put down his head ,red of his face,with embarrasment. He hold up a newspaper aside and pretent to read newspapers, folding his face with it.
4.All their attention are focused on the following project and they belive that the success will come sooner or later if they insist on it.
好不容易可以上网了，请老师批阅一下吧！

我的翻译一直很差，谢谢海豚做的这期节目，感激