Dear Editors:
Please consider the manuscript titled “XXXXXXX”, which we wish to be considered for publication in your journal. All the authors have approved to submit to your journal. All the authors would like to declare that the work reported is an original study that has not been published previously, and not under consideration for publication elsewhere, in whole or in part. There are no conflicts of interest in the research recorded here.
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Li Ming
本人写的，不知道能得多少分啊？有没有什么问题需要修改？谢了。
作者: Blair 时间: 14-7-1 18:19
笔笔好厉害。我觉得就是有些单词和词组，重复性太高，读起来有点学生气。尝试着小修改了一下：
Dear Editors:
Please review/find the manuscript titled “XXXXXXX”, which we wish to be considered for publication in your journal. All the authors have approved the submission and would like to declare that the work reported is an original one that has not been published previously, and not under consideration for publication elsewhere, in whole or in part. There are no conflicts of interest in the research recorded here.
We deeply appreciate your consideration of our manuscript, and we look forward to receiving insightful comments from the reviewers. If you have any queries, please don’t hesitate to contact us at the emails address below.
Thank you and best wishes.作者: Blair 时间: 14-7-1 18:21
最后一段里的consideration，换个词更好，但一时想不出了作者: 笔为剑 时间: 14-7-5 16:39
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