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fan2ren 发表于 08-7-30 13:12:19 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
这是本人写的1991-1998历年真题写作部分的作文,请有心人及各位高手帮忙修改或提意见都行,可以直接回复

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1991~1998年全国硕士研究生入学统一考试英语试题写作自写部分
1991年
DIRECTIONS:
[A] Title: WHERE TO LIVE -- IN THE CITY OR THE COUNTRY?
Time limit: 40 minutes
[C] Word limit: 120-150 words (not including the given opening sentence)
[D] Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence.
[E] Your composition must be written clearly in the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)
OUTLINE:
1. Conveniences of the city
2. Attractions of the country
3. Disadvantages of both
4. My preference
Where to Live——IN THE CITY OR THE COUNTRY
Where to live ,in the city or the country? Many people may have confronted with such a question.
Living in the city means an easier access to a comprehensive medical care and educational system. Besides ,you can enjoy the feeling brought in by convenient transportation and diversified infrastructure facilities.
However ,living in the country can also be attractive to all of us. With fresh air and mild sunlight in the morning , certain it is that you can feel comfortable and wonderful. Furthermore ,everything in the country is so natrural that you can be more close to nature than anyone in the city.
Of course , living in the city will not have the original life that our parents once had in the past, while living in the country let you can’t gain the joy that modernized life deserves.
In my personal view, weighing against the pros and cons , I prefer to live in the city in my youth and live in the country after my retirement ,which can both obtain the benefits from living in the city and the country.(182 words)
1992年
DIRECTIONS:
[A] Title: FOR A BETTER UNDERSTANDING BETWEEN PARENT AND CHILD
Time limit: 40 minutes
[C] Word limit: 120-150 words (not including the given opening sentence)
[D] Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence.
[E] Your composition must be written clearly in the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)
OUTLINE:
1. Present situation: Lack of communication between parent and child
2. Possible reasons:
1) Different likes and dislikes;2) Misunderstanding;3) Others
3. Suggestions:
1) For parents;2) For children
Eliminate Generation Gap
When we tell our parents that we have a great ideal to develop ourselves, they just say “no” to our wonderful blueprint. Having been admitted into the university, the only advice from our parents’ mouth was not to have a girlfriend ,which ,we thought , added more ingredients to their stubbornness .
How on earth does this “generation gap” come? It is likely to take place for the following reasons. Firstly, defferent backgrounds we live in make us perceive the same matter with different views. The majority of our parents were born in a relatively closed and poor society, which leads them to  be a little conservative to our deeds. Secondly ,being lack of mutual understanding makes it worse. Both our parents and ourselves impose our own thought on the opposite side from their real purpose. Of course , other factors such as different likes and dislikes also contribute to the generation gap.
Not surprisingly , as long as parents adapt themselves to their children’s deeds and we express more respect to our parents, the delemma will go broken. Only in this way can the generation gap between parent and child be gradually eliminated.(194 words)
1993年
DIRECTIONS:
[A] Title: ADVERTISEMENT ON TV
Time limit: 40 minutes
[C] Word limit: 120-150 words (not including the given opening sentence)
[D] Your composition should be based at the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “Today more and more advertisements are seen on the TV screen.”
[E] Your composition must be written clearly on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)
OUTLINE:
1. Present state;2. Reasons;3. My comments
Advertisement on TV
Today more and more advertisements are seen on the TV screen. When we are watching the highlight of a film, an advertisement suddenly transfers our attention. Commercial TV of nearly all kinds of products are to be seen in the course of any TV programmes.
It can be well explained by the following reasons. Firstly ,with the development of market economy, more and more businesses are participating the competitive line of market. Anyone who wants to survive the fierce environment have to resort to advertisement to achieve such a goal. Secondly ,few people can be aware of a new product if it has not beed advertised on the TV screen.
From my point of view, certain it is that advertisement will exist if there is competition among producers. Besides, consumers needs advertisements on TV because they should be informed that what products can be chosen and which will be best suitable for their requirements.
In a word ,advertisements are necessary for both parducers and consumers and ultimately for the development of economy.(172 words)
1994年
DIRECTIONS:
[A] Title: ON MAKING FRIENDS
TIME LIMIT: 40 minutes
[C] Word limit: 120-150 words (not including the given opening sentence)
[D] Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “As a human being, one can hardly do without a friend.”
[E] Your composition must be written clearly on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)
OUTLINE:
1. The need for friends;2. True friendship;3. My principle in making friends
Making A True Friend
No one can deny the fact that “As a human being ,one can hardly do without a friend”. As a man living in the society ,all of us have shortcomings and drawbacks, which means that we need someone to make up for them. A true friend is the very kind of person who can do such things. Moreover ,one needs a true friend to appreciate his success and understand his failure.
True friendship can be a driving force towards our great ideals, as well as a dose of effective but bitter medicine to our spiritural deseases. Life without a friend will be dull.
Just as the old saying goes “A friend in need is a friend indeed”, not only should my friend share my happiness, but also he or she should undertake my sorrow and pain with me through the life. If he or she refuses to help or even comfort me when I’m in trouble, he or she will be just a person who passes in front of me ,leaving no trace in my life.(176 words)


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 楼主| fan2ren 发表于 08-7-30 13:18:30 | 只看该作者
1995年
DIRECTIONS:
[A] Title: THE “PROJECT HOPE”
[B] Time limit: 40 minutes
[C] Word limit: 120-150 words (not including the given opening sentence)
[D] Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “Education plays a very important role in the modernization of our country.”
[E] Your composition must be written neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)
OUTLINE:
1. Present situation;2. Necessity of the project;3. My suggestion
The Project Hope
With the development of economy and the progress of society ,more and more “Project Hope”, which aims to help those who can’t go to school because of poverty of their family or other reasons, are being established in China. Nevertheless ,there is still a long way to arrive at such a tremendous task.
“Everyone was born equal ,”therefore ,every child ,no matter how poor he or she is ,has the equal access to basic education. Being lack of material support, many children living in the poor area are losing their opportunities to receive education. China, which is still a developing country and devotes to being a powerful country in the future ,needs science and technology that can be primarily obtained through education to accomplish its ambitious ideal.
Thus ,we need more and nore “Project Hope” to be set up in China. From my personal point of view ,not only should the government pay attention to this issue ,but also we ,as a happy youngster who can enjoy higher education at college should make our own contribution to the “Project Hope”. To donate our spare money to the project or to be a volunteer to help the children and so on can contribute to the achievement of the “Project Hope” to a certain extent. Only in this way ,I believe can our country solve the problems existing in the poor area.(
230 words)
1996年
DIRECTIONS:
[A] Title: GOOD HEALTH
[B] Time limit: 40 minutes
[C] Word limit: 120-150 words (not including the given opening sentence)
[D] Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “The desire for good health is universal.”
[E] Your composition should be written neatly on the ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)
OUTLINE:
1. Importance of good health;2. Ways to keep fit;3. My own practices
Good Health
The desire for good health is universal. Everyone ,especially those who once had been sick ,is well aware of the importance of good health, just as the old saying goes “ Good health is better than good health”. Without good health ,one will lose his basic resources ,leaving them out of reach to what they want to get in their life. They can not fight for the ambitious ideal ,nor can they enjoy the happy and meaningful time that they had dreamed of .
There are many ways to keep fit, as long as you can bear in mind that you will cherish your good health. Doing an appropriate amount of exercises is helpful for your good health. To keep a healthy and balanced diet also contributes to your fitness. Besides ,what is ussally ignored by many people is to maintain a stable mood for anything you happen to in your life.
When I prepare for the entrance examinations of postgraduate school ,I can be in good shape due to my plan to integrate boring study with health-friendly activities, such as playing basketball after I had completed my daily task. Certain it is that all of us can keep fit if we can take it seriously
.(206 words)
1997年
Directions:
[A] Study the following set of pictures carefully and write an essay in no less than 120 words.
[B] Your essay must be written clearly on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)
[C] Your essay should cover all the information provided and meet the requirements below:
1. Interpret the following pictures.
2. Predict the tendency of tobacco consumption and give your reason.


As we can see from the picture ,there is a total loss of 200 billion dollars per year and 3 million people die directly or indirecthly from the diseases caused by smoking, both of which are bad news to our world. So far ,there are nearly 1.1 billion smokers ,accounting for about 20% of the world population of 5 billion. Fortunately ,the world witnesses a declining total quantity of tabacco, from 14.364 billion pounds in 1994 to 14.2 billion pounds in 1995.
Needless to say , I believe that the tabacco comsumption will gradually decrease. Firstly ,more and more attention are being paid to health. It is commonly thought that a long happy and healthy life dwarfs a short enjoying one brought by smoking. Secondly ,more and more governments ,realizing the serious social and economic problems induced by smoking ,have taken positive and effective measures to prevent the number of smokers from increasing.
Nevertheless ,there is still a long way to radically eliminate the adverse influence caused by smoking. The world can be smokeless only if everyone contrubute to make the world better.(
183 words)
1998年
Directions:
[A] Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in no less than 150 words.
[B] Your essay must be written clearly on the ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)
[C] Your essay should meet the requirements below:
1. Write out the messages conveyed by the cartoon.
2. Give your commentsn.


注:图片上的文字是:
本母鸡承诺:
①本鸡下蛋不见棱不见角
②保证有蛋皮,蛋黄和蛋清

Virtual Guarantee
As we can see from the cartoon ,a hen ,holding a piece of paper ,promises that its eggs will be of the ordinary shape and contain all the necessary parts of a normal egg. It seems very aggressive and proud of making such a guarantee.
It looks interesting at first sight, however, it is thought-provoking on a second thought. Nowadays ,more and more industries compete to guarantee to promote their products. It is not uncommon to see a vegetable vendor to claim that his or her vegetables comprises no poisonous substance and a TV seller promises that his TV set will be used under normal conditions. What’s worse ,a doctor in a private clinic claims that the medicine he gives to the patient will by no means do harm to the health of the recipient.
Generally speaking ,it is the responsibility of a man to provide healthy and helpful goods or services to others. Nevertheless, those people mentioned above take it as a selling point to promote their services or goods. Certain it is that our society will experience a moral crisis if we do nothing to prevent such a trend. Only everyone in our society voluntarily make their own contribution to better quality can we enjoy a real civilized business society.(
212 words)
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lxh0218630 发表于 08-7-31 00:40:28 | 只看该作者
楼主的作文整体来说写的还可以,缺点在于套话太多,在有些地方的考研阅卷中会吃亏的
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 楼主| fan2ren 发表于 08-8-1 12:12:29 | 只看该作者
感谢楼上的中肯意见!!希望有更多的人不吝赐教哦!!
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 楼主| fan2ren 发表于 08-8-3 11:46:00 | 只看该作者
怎么没有其他人帮忙修改提意见哦?
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