标题: 请良师益友指正，谢谢 [打印本页] 作者: xiaoying2325 时间: 10-4-9 23:35 标题: 请良师益友指正，谢谢 这些是我看书的时候遇见的句型啊什么的 学着自己造句的 这是我造的两个句子：
the fact that more and more college studengts have no alternative but to turn for getting a MA degree to obtain a better suitable work is a reason to hope that new measures should be taken to sovle it .
the fact that mankind has sense to contorl population ,protect environment and avoid disposable tableware is in itself a huge victory .
第一个句子我的修改为：
The fact that more and more college studengts have no alternative but to get a MA degree for a better job calls for due measures.
原句的主结构the fact is a reason to……拖沓，语意重复（或者说就是中国式思维的英语应用），简化为现在的结构the fact calls for……
为了避免介词for过多的使用用get替换掉了turn for
为了避免过多的动词短语也将to obtain……替换成了for a better job
[s:9] 睡觉去作者: xiaoying2325 时间: 10-4-10 11:31
sudapapa ( 趴趴) 分析的是
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记住啦
谢谢作者: wjtcm 时间: 10-4-11 18:27
来学习学习~~~作者: xiaoying2325 时间: 10-4-12 23:47
cyberspace 造句:
faced with so many setbacks ,he just turned to crberspace for self confidence and overlooked the necessity to solve all the problems .
outrage 造句:
she was outraged by the company\"s unreasonable assignment .
be not simple a matter of造句:
children\"s rude attitude toward their parents is not simple a matter of unpolite manners .
