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标题: 又一次练习英语作文，标题：parenting（红包截止到12月30日晚上8点） [打印本页]

作者: 笔为剑 时间: 08-12-7 23:51
标题: 又一次练习英语作文，标题：parenting（红包截止到12月30日晚上8点）
以parenting为标题，写一篇大作文。红包截止到12月10日晚上8点。

[ 本帖最后由 louis21 于 2009-12-23 13:43 编辑 ]

作者: mini0112 时间: 08-12-8 00:47
标题: Parenting.
What ,in everybody\'s life, is a profound subject is parenting. While some people don\'t acknowledge the conception that they will be parents sooner and later, the others in my age are willing to witness the advent of a new life.
   As an abstract but remote knowledge,parenting is ancient but modern. Love is an eternal emotion wherever around the planet,meanwhile children are always the elderships\' hope for the future. They have been assimilated to be the flowers or the dawn of a new epoch.However, the fast growing seedlings also need the sunshine and rain to be fed. The more children are being focused on, the more knowledge about how to raise the posterities  is desirous for parents.
   Then the coming question which seems that many of the people who have been a parent do not quite sure about is,how to foster a child technically?We have learned oceans of Developmental Psychology concerning the whole life of a man.What do you suggest?Following the principles of every stage in one\'s life, predicting what is going to happen to the child then,and helping them out of trouble and the wrong way is absolutely requisite.BLARBLARBLAR..
   In sum,parenting is fundational to all of us.Nothing is impossible!Just be one!!(just making nonsense)

[ 本帖最后由 mini0112 于 2008-12-10 21:15 编辑 ]

作者: nvzhan 时间: 08-12-8 16:57
Sophia,an office lady,who is working in ABC Corparation（拼写错误）（这里需要一个逗号） intends to have a baby  when faces（用she faces，或改成facing） the financial crisis.\"you konw,once i  conceived,the law will protect me from being dismissed by the company\",she said.when the financial crisis comes,lots of workers were dismissed by companies,which leads to many of them having difficulties to support themselves.but is this the reason why \"Sophias\" could have babies?Certainly not!

Everyone has the right of having a baby,but it dosen\'t mean that we can treat our babies  just as instruments to keep our jobs,make money or  others.For our（改成we） human ,having babies which  is not only  a mean we  can multiply from generation to generation,but also could certify the love between  we and our lovers.we should dedicate ourselves to bring  them up.
When i have a child ,i \'ll try me（my） best to make friend with him and work with him. Maybe his dreams have no ceiling,i\'ll  listen to his goals and idears instead of  dening his dreams. I\'ll show my support when he meats（meets） problems or makes mistakes.

At the end l,i\'d like to go over well--trodden ground which is \"having a baby just for loving him,not for others\" to finish my talk.

低级语法错误还是不少啊。把这些错误改掉，你可以拿个中上的分数。——笔为剑

[ 本帖最后由笔为剑于 2008-12-10 19:47 编辑 ]

作者: vanny 时间: 08-12-10 19:14
Parenting, originating from an instinct of us humans, is nevertheless a thing can be taken as granted. Of course we are born to have the ability of being parents , however, it doesn\'t mean we have the gift to be perfect  ones.
   Actually, there are serious parenting problems nowadays. It is well known that the spoiled child, the little emperor or the little princess in Chinese family, and the sharply went up rate of  adolescent crime. Without proper parenting, how could we get our next generation prepared for  the future, especially in this highly competitive world ?  Furthermore, Chinese family is much smaller than decades ago, thus it is essential to teach the only children what is cooperation and team sprits.
   Fortunately, increasing attention has been given to this issue, such as, there is a famous TV show named Parenting , which teaches people how to be qualified parents.  Besides, classes which discuss parenting skills are available for new married couples. Being parents in the near future, we should keep in mind that parenting is our responsibility and opportunity to bring our country a brighter tomorrow by means of getting our offspring well-educated .

[ 本帖最后由 vanny 于 2008-12-10 20:07 编辑 ]

作者: 笔为剑 时间: 08-12-10 21:09

原帖由 vanny 于 2008-12-10 19:14 发表
Parenting, originating from an instinct of us humans, is nevertheless a thing can be taken as granted. Of course we are born to have the ability of being parents , however, it doesn\'t mean we hav ...

编辑得还真快啊。现在把错误都改没了。

[ 本帖最后由笔为剑于 2008-12-10 21:15 编辑 ]

作者: nvzhan 时间: 08-12-10 22:39
版主，看我的文章开头像不像阅读理解的开头。考研的时候以我那样的方式写大作文估计够新颖，也够呛

作者: 笔为剑 时间: 08-12-10 22:57

原帖由 nvzhan 于 2008-12-10 22:39 发表
版主，看我的文章开头像不像阅读理解的开头。考研的时候以我那样的方式写大作文估计够新颖，也够呛

这个我不敢说。建议去英语版问问高手。

作者: mini0112 时间: 08-12-10 23:28
谢谢老大。。向大家学习！！

作者: 适应 时间: 08-12-10 23:36
都写的不错…

作者: 林小小 时间: 09-12-22 23:17
Never in our history has the far-reaching topic of parenting been debated so frequently as to how it function in perspective with the growth of the first only-child generation.
Just as a popular saying goes,“every coin has its two sides”.Parenting is of no exception. As is known to us, parenting is part and parcel of every human being. It provides everyone substantial conditions that is essential to be a person. And at the same time, it makes us feel we are on safer ground all the times and spaces. There is a certain amount of truth in this, however, we still have a problem with regard to the way we use to put it into effect. It will play the opposite role in maturity of teenagers.
Voices come from many experts attribute the growth of children solely to the way we put in parenting. I would not go that far. As for me,I share the view that parents should set their children free to get ready to confront with the problems that may occur in years to come, rather than protect them in all respects and become useless in turn.

作者: jeanmirage 时间: 09-12-24 09:20
楼上的写的真好，做笔记ING

作者: ziyufeixiao 时间: 10-1-1 14:54
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