这个是我上次做“讲座”的时候写的，然后我自己再做点修改，添加，给快考试的大家提点建议。（写的会很详细，请细心看完，会有一点收获的）
就拿上次我们四级的作文先做个解析。如何写作文？1，我们得读题目要求：a brief description of the picture ///// express your views on the importance of learning basic skills.2,思路:A：简述图片内容，B：表达观点3，就本题而言，我们先要简述图片，然后围绕题目给的论题写（表达学习基础技能的重要性）注：千万不要主观臆断，看了图片后就以自己的思维理解，然后脱离论题写作文，肯定走题，如果你看不懂图片，但是给的论题看明白了，围绕着论题写，肯定不会走题。例文 The importance of learning basic skills（开头描述图片）What we can see from the cartoon is that the teacher is instructing the students some basic mathematic skills. However, some students are wondering that if it will be outdated in the future. The picture implicitly raises the question of the importance of the fundamental skills us students learn in our classes.（中间，此处省略N字，例文给的不好，太啰嗦了） （总结：再次强调）To sum up, we should think highly of the importance of basic and fundamental skills that guarantee our wonderful and brilliant future. Furthermore, we should make full use of those elementary skills, consciously applying them in our works and life. Basic skill will never be outdated.解析：我是如何写的呢？第一：简短有力第二：阐释明了第三：关联词第四：句型第五：强调主题 (我来写)The importance of learning basic skills
第1段（开头）What we can see from the cartoon is that the teacher is instructing the students some basic mathematic skills.However, some students are wondering that if it will be outdated in the future.（对图片描述）The picture implicitly raises the question of the importance of the fundamental skills us students learn in our classes.（引出话题：是否学习基础技能重要？）50词第2段（阐述现象）With the development of our society,more and more people are think that learning basic skills is useless compared with primary skills such as computer skills .（对比，与现象相反）As we all know,it’s an obvious truth that we could not build a magnificent mansion without solid foundations.Thus,what should we do to increase people's awareness of learning basic skills?(衔接下文）(58词）第3段（关联词）To begin with ,we should cultivate the habit of learning basic skills during our daily life.Moreover,more chances and cares should be given when children at home in learning basic skills.Last but not least,schools should set relative curriculum s to build up our basic skills. (47词）第4段（句型结尾）Only in this way can we learn the basic skills well and won't be outdated when we are in the job market (and have a better life in the future) (22词)四段一共177词 ，在120~180之间，但是，即使你写到 180~190，老师会去数么？而且结构很严谨，句子很精炼，即使多了10个词也不会有问题的！！！ 可以有模版么？这个可以有！！！但不是死模版！！！第一步：抓住题干，不要走题。第二步：简述所给的内容，顺带出主题（现象）。第三步：描述这一现象，并且如何解决，这里的解决方案往往可以分为3部分，1，个人，2，社会，3，国家（总的由小到大顺序）也不要举太多例子，3点正好。我们上文学习basic skills 就是 1，个人，2，家庭，3，学校，或者当谈到一些什么浪费的时候，可以是1，个人，2，社会，3，国家，由小到大。第四步：再次强调主题（最好的就是来句 Only in this way can we ......) 既简短有力，又强调主题，还是个倒装句，这个结尾是万能的！！！我是如何改模版（符合我自己的模版）（六级作文） 再介绍一篇六级作文，因为怕大家疲劳，就直接把我写的摘来了，不多废话了。 Say No to Temptation第1段（开头）We are living in a world full of temptations. Due to lack of experience and determined will, many people cannot discriminate right from wrong and make bad decisions.For example, some students wallow in internet and lose themselves. （举例）Finally, they abandon their studies and ruin their future 第2段As the saying goes, good habits result from resisting temptation. For us college students, it is particularly important to say no to temptation and form good habits.第3段what should we do to achieve this?To begin with ,we students should have a strong will to say no to temptations and focus on meaningful issues.Moreover,society including schools ,adults and so on should give courses and lessons to us on resisting temptation.Last but not least ,countries should set relative laws and regulations to punish those who launch temptations.第4段Only by resisting adverse temptations and developing good habits can we achieve happiness and success. Otherwise, we would pay a heavy price.改过后共160词。我相信大家看了以后肯定会有所感悟，字数在160~180都可以的，如果字写的太小的人，可以写到180，字太大了，就写在160多点，不能给老师明显少字或者明显多字的感觉。 当然，在考试的那种情况下，字如果写的好看点就很好了。 以上就是我总结的四六级作文解析了，希望能给大家带来帮助，有错误的地方请谅解。 Rose.Washington
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