麻烦大家帮我看看一篇出国留学简历的简短自我介绍

Since my father, a mentor in university, devoted himself to his research, I cultivated great interest in scientific research since I was a child. After achieved my Bachelors degree in Huazhong University of Science and Technology (Applied chemistry), I study for master degree in Shaanxi University of Science & Technology (School of Material Science & Engineering) now. Different experiences of studying and research in universities not only provide me advancement of experimental skills and ability of scientific research, but also teach me how to learn, make summarization and keep an open mind during work. I, permeated with passion and confidence, am eager to strive for science while young. I believe that no pains, no gains. And only in this way, can I never be unworthy of expectation of my teachers and family.

[s:5] 先谢谢大家了！

去GTER问吧，这里的人估计不太懂这些。

实在不懂楼主的意思。
楼主是想请人帮忙翻译，还是想要人提意见，还是想热心的为他人提供一个模板呢？

这里的人估计不太懂这些

写得不错，还应详细点。

写得不错，还应详细点。

写得不错，还应详细点。