预测范文一 Computer games
首段描述图画，揭示现象危害
As is vividly depicted in the picture, the schoolboy indulges himself in computer game.The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, in class, he can not concentrate himself on what the teacher says, but just falls asleep dreaming about the thrilling computer games. Recently the phenomenon that the students suffer too much from homework burdens has aroused great concern and should be given enough consideration. This phenomenon of heavy burdens imposed on our students should be condemned severely or made illegal. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害，并举例论证，预测 危害的趋势
To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several effects have been put forward. To begin with, spending too much time on the games not only results in failure in their study but also does harm to their health since they keep still in front of the computer and watch the computer without blinking the eyes. In addition, some unhealthy and violent information will tempt the children to act just like what is indicated in the game,which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below .According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who are attached to computer games are in poor health or even drop out of school. If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of our students.
最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法；
From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, ne***sary that some effective measures are taken to prevent the children playing the games. On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect the students. On the other hand, it is demanding
for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving the students out of the evil hands of the internet bars. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.
预测范文二 一个学生在疯狂的做作业, 面前有一大堆模拟题,头上冒汗,老师又给了一大堆作业.
As is vividly depicted in the picture, a student was buried in the large pile of textbooks and rushed to do the surprisingly large amount of homework .The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, the student was wearing a lot of sweats and suffered great pains form the ex***sively heavy burdens caused by the pressure of enterting a high school. Recently the phenomenon that the students are tortured by the heavy burdens of assignments has aroused great concern and should be given enough consideration. This phenomenon of destroying the the health of students should be condemned severely or made illegal. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害，并举例论证，预测 危害的趋势
To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several effects have been put forward. To begin with,heavy burdens of homework not only results in the loss of interest in the study for students but also does harm to the physical and mental health since the children are overworked and have no time for rest or relaxation . In addition, so much homework will cause the students to spare no time for their hobbies or interests ,which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93%of young people who have once suffered the pains of heavy burdens of homework feel sick about what they did and had no free time to develop their talents such as sports, music and computers. If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of our students who maybe become dull or even goes insane.
最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法；
From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, ne***sary that some effective measures are taken to prevent the school damaging the the health of studdents. On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect the legal freedom of enjoying their spare time and allow them to do meaningful things. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of requiring the teachers to make the best use of their class time while leaving enough time for their students. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.
预测范文三 图画描述了很多游人在游玩和照相，在天安门广场游玩时，在吐口香糖，乱扔废弃物，广场上充满了污渍
As is vividly depicted in the picture, thougsands of tourists strolled on the Tiananmen Square,busily taking photos and enjoed themselves freely.The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, those people threw away the chewed gum and the smoked cigarette . Recently the phenomenon that the tourists destroyed the environment seriously has aroused great concern and should be given enough consideration. This phenomenon of destroying the environment should be condemned severely or made illegal. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害，并举例论证，预测 危害的趋势
To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several effects have been put forward. To begin with, destroying the environment not only results in the loss of sanitary maintainance but also does harm to the indignity of our national images internationally since Tiananmen Square as the most high-profile site represents the face-lift of China . In addition, some unhealthy or even poisonous wates will cause the peole to breathe the harmful air ,which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have once dropped wastes into the pla*** of interests do take it seriously. If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of our heritage left by our an***ters.
最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法；
From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, ne***sary that some effective measures are taken to prevent the tourist damaging the environment. On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect the cultural relics. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving the relcs out of the evil hands of destructioin. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.
预测范文四 Good neighbours 图画描述了两个邻居个领着一只狗,狗在互相打招呼,而人却很冷漠
As is vividly depicted in the picture, the two lonely neighbors seem to ignore each other while the two dogs greet each others politely and amiably.The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, the social interactions have been diminishing. Recently the phenomenon that lots of people loveto raise the dogs while neglecting the communications between the neighbors or relatives has aroused great concern and should be given enough consideration. This phenomenon of ignoring the human communications should be condemned severely or made illegal. Pet-keeping is becoming an increasingly pervasive because a pet may be a companion for old people, a friend for young couples and a playing toy for children. Believe it or not, pets are such an inseparable part in their daily life that they devote lots of energy, time and money to taking care of the need of their loved animals.There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害，并举例论证，预测 危害的趋势
To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several reasons have been put forward. To begin with, since most people have to live on an on-the-move lifestyle, they are denied to have opportunities to share their feelings with their friends and relatives. Whereas pets are good listeners.
They are so busily scheduled that they have no time even for a drink with some friends.In addition, While there are so many dishonesties going around, they must stay with a dog, which is likely to be faithful to them. Since a pet is loyal to his master and acts as the instructions of humans, a person has no need to get along with his neighbors who may have different opinions about his or her ideas,which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see.No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have once dropped wastes into the pla*** of interests do take it seriously. If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of our heritage left by our an***ters.
最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法；
From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, ne***sary that some effective measures are taken to prevent the pets damaging the the relations between the neighbors. On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the social contacts between neighbors. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of communications between people instead of staying with a dog alone. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later
预测范文五 一个人总在忙碌,工作压力很大,要承受很多社会的压力,包括买房子和车子
As is vividly depicted in the picture, there are so many things that the man has to bear or to seek.The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, it is like him that alost everyone of us feels tired or even exhausted . Recently the phenomenon that lots of people have to suffer great pains from the stress from all aspects of family and society has aroused great concern and should be given enough consideration. This phenomenon of being seriously pressured should be condemned severely. Everyday we jump out of bed with the ear-splitting ring of the alarm-clock, swallow the quick breakfast and then rush to catch the bus. When arriving at the workplace, we have to work every minute to its full value. Besides, a lot of people have to sacrifice a high pay to earn money to feed their family and buy houses which are too expensive to afford.
There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害，并举例论证，预测 危害的趋势
To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several reasons have been put forward. To begin with, the first stess-maker is competition.
Nowadays may people, who have a strong career-mind are involved in a fierce competion for money, ranks,and fame. In the rat race, they try every means to stay on the top and keep on working until they can hardly breathe.In addition, the reason why they are suffering a great pain is that they have such a great ambition to succeed and want to accomplish their goals in the shortest possible time. Just because of their ambitionw, they put great great pressures on themselves and have no time for relaxation to enjoy themselves.No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have once tasted the stress are becoming physically or mentally ill. If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of our heritage left by our an***ters.
最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法；
From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, ne***sary that some effective measures are taken to prevent the stress damaging the the health of most people. On the one hand, we should be sensible to develop a positive attitude towards competition. That is, competition is not the ultimate goal of life, but a driving force that motivates us to fulfill our dreams On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of developing a schedule which includes enough time for rest and other important values. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.
人类社会的永恒话题, 对比论述突出好处,比如坚持不懈, 打败自我,团队精神,为人真诚,实事求是从正面列举该积极事物的好处,克服困难, 征服挑战, 完善自我,走向成功,创造辉煌从反面列举没有这个积极事物时的不好, 郁闷迷茫, 无成就感和前进动力, 失败挫折感最后要谈两点建议措施和联想美好未来.
话题：坚持不懈---------------在失败的时候坚持, 做好每一件小事为成功做好准备.
首段：四句话，描述图画，表明图画发人深思。
As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述图画. The most striking feature is 图画重点信息.
描述图画两句，第一句宏观表明图画的视觉效果。 第二句表明的图画的最大特色是什么。
There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
此句子表明图画所微妙传达的象征含义，发人深思，十四个单词增加亮点，弥补首段字数不足，为下文点名观点作好铺垫
Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon that which plays an active part in our society.
二段：七句话，揭示象征含义，从正反两方面论述该积极事物的重要性。从正面列举该积极事物的好处,克服困难, 征服挑战, 完善自我,走向成功,创造辉煌从反面列举没有这个积极事物时的不好, 郁闷迷茫, 无成就感和前进动力, 失败挫折感，而且要举例证明使观点具体化，并以倒装并列句结尾，画龙点睛。
As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that 重复上面的图画信息
profoundly indicates that perseverance is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds.任何积极话题必然与成功有联系，成功是衡量该话题是否积极的唯一标准。该段首句设置爆发力句型，增加气势，让老师给出很高的第一印象分，借此开头很有特色。
Perseverance means that people can persist on when they face the difficulty and prepare every detail for the coming suc***s.定义法论述：毅力—在困境中坚持，做好细节，准备成功；
It is perseverance that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable , that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming suc***s.强调并列句是英语的极品句型，大气磅礴。此万能句子是任何积极事物都可以帮助我们克服困难,征服挑战,走向成功.
Unless we stick to our dream,(适当把主题词进行同义替换)we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated.
双重否定句子从反面论证宏观说明危害性，如果缺乏该积极事物就生活郁闷挫折被竞争所淘汰。
To account for the above mentioned topic, several reasons can be put forward as mentioned below.
To begin with
In addition
Last but not the least
No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below.
(举例证明把for example 写成十四个很有特色，而且表明下面的例子很重要，又增加一分，老师看了这么多for example，审美疲劳，老师一看该句，一定激动。
Many capable people who have the burning desire to win fail to achieve their goals just because they don’t persist (是坚持的同意改写)especially when they face the music.
Many people who。。。。。。just because。。。。。。想成功但失败因为他们不能坚持特别是遇到困难的时候，
Only by being perseverant can they guarantee a suc***s and have a strong will to always challenge themselves.指的是永远成功
倒装并列句在段落末尾写，增加气势，第二段结尾很重要，不要晚节不保。倒装句在结尾补充再好不过。此句很万能，表明只有该积极事物让我们永远成功；
三：5—6句话，承上启下总结上文，两点建议，展望美好未来
From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to persevere than to despair.
From 。。。。。。。。。。承上启下, 引起下文, 多达二十五个单词的总结句 表明无论做大事小事，难事容易事，都需要积极事物支持我们。
It is therefore, ne***sary that some effective measures are taken to cultivate confidence and to pursue the coming goals.
建议措施的总起句子, 引起下文，被动句子很有风采.
On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to imagine about the colorful future. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to punish ourselves in certain ways if we fail to hold on to our dream.
结构很清晰,sensible 表明建议很理性, 从反方面再谈很辨证.
However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.
这个闪光的万能句多达25个单词，强调实践的重要性.而且还有谚语,表明建议用于实践。
话题二：打败自我，不断改正自身缺陷吸收别人长处，完善自我，自信面对人生；
1Defeating ourselves or Defeating others
Defeating ourselves------------fight with our defects-------------------perfect ourselves------confident--------perseverant----------------have a better understanding of ourselves
As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述图画. The most striking feature is 图画重点信息. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that 重复上面的图画信息 profoundly indicates that defeating oneself rather than the other competitors is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. You have to fight with your own shortcoming and perfect yourself as much as possible. It is defeating ourselves that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement , that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming suc***s. Unless we defeat ourselves, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. Many people who do not have faith in themselves always lose the match. Only by defeating ourselves can they make full use of their advantages and have a strong will to always challenge themselves.
From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to have a better understanding of oneself. It is therefore, ne***sary that some effective measures are taken to make yourself more competitive in the society. On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to enrich our minds. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be more perseverant. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.
3. Team work 一个人盖楼房很辛苦, 很多人在一起建, 他们脸上有很多笑容.
As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述图画. The most striking feature is 图画重点信息. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that 重复上面的图画信息 profoundly indicates that team work is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement , that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming suc***s. Unless we cooperate sincerely, , we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.
From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work. It is therefore, ne***sary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be active in taking a more tough job and always helpful and honest to other people. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.
4. 对别人真诚，有礼貌，无私奉献，谦虚为人
Genuineness and cordiality are rewarding
As is vividly depicted in the picture, a young man with a suitcase under his arm is stretches his hand to greet himself reflected in the mirror. The most striking feature is his image in the mirror is smiling at him sincerely. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that his smile can be reflected as tenderly as his real smile profoundly indicates that genuineness and cordiality are momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. It is corporation with the team with great zeal that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming suc***s. Unless we are genuine to others, we will not be acknowledged, appreciated and respected by the others No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. Many capable people who always care about his way of thinking will be living a dull, depressing life.Only by being genuine to others can they win other people’s trust and can they reward the support, sympathy .
From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to cooperate with others with great zeal It is therefore, ne***sary that some effective measures are taken to make it work. On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to imagine everyone to be our friends not enemies. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to examine our behaviors to make sure they will not hurt others. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.
5.选择工作，实事求是，量体裁衣，因地制宜
The fittest is the best
As is vividly depicted in the picture in the left picture a man A carrying a spanner. He seems very delighted and energetic although wet over with sweat. The most striking feature is……………..There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that the two man in different social positions have different attitudes toward life profoundly indicates that the fittest is the best to anyone who wants to enjoy their life. It is fitting the job that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement , that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming suc***s. Unless we choose the job that fit us, we will make a mess out of our life. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. Many capable people who have the burning desire to win choose a admirable employment and suffer great illnesses.
From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to choose job that can be done within his capability. It is therefore, ne***sary that some effective measures are taken to make it work. On the one hand, we should be sensible to find what we are skillful at and make a plan about the future. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to change to another job if it does not fit us.However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.
第一段(描述现象)Nowaday there is often a lack of understanding between A and B.On the one hand, A find it difficult to...。On the other hand, B complain that ... are too "old-fashioned"(to)...。So whenever... are in trouble ,they will seek help from ... instead of from...
第二段(分析原因)There are some possible reasons for the problem.In the first place,...。In the second place,...put too much pressure on ...and spare little time to ...。Finally... (参考原因：Even if A listen to the explanation of B, A often disagree with B.) As a result, the problem is becoming more and more serious.
第三段(对症下药，给出建议。)To bridge the (gap) between A and B, both of them should be co-operative. For A ,they should be considerate of ... ( for the sake of ... ). As for B, they should ...。With joint efforts, A and B can reach a better understanding...
笔者注：模式中的每一段基本都由首句，扩展句，结论三部份组成，此后模式中此类注释将部份同前省略。
类比型
1，立足两事物间的共性，阐述二者之间的相似之处(比较法)
2，立足各自的个性，阐述二者之间的差异 (对照法)
第一段(A的好处)Many people appreciate the convenien*** of A。...。Also,...。
第二段(B的好处)But B is also attractive。...
第三段(A，B各自的不足)However, either A or B has its own disadvantages. A are confronted with many problems. Such as... and so on. But B...
第四段(我的选择)As for me, I prefer to A. First,...。Second,(参考原因：compared with the undeveloped factors of B, A is an adeal... for me to...(最后谈对A不足的补救措施)Of course...
对待某事物与成功的关系(以机遇为例)
第一段(首句引出机遇--机不可失，失不再来)Opportunities don`t come often.(扩展句1机遇常常悄然离去)They come every once in a while. Very often, they come quietly and go by without being noticed.(结论珍惜机遇)Therefore, it is advisable that you should value and treat them with care.
第二段(首句说明机遇的偶然性) When an opportunity presents itself(来到时),it brings a promise but never realizes it on its own. (扩展句1抓住机遇，实现成功的途径)If you want to achieve something or intend to fulfill one of your ambitions you must work hard, make efforts and get prepared.(扩展句2反证法)Otherwise, you will take no advantage of opportunities when they come to visit you. (结论必须做好一切可能的准备)It is clear that it order to be highly qualified for our future jobs. We should make every possible preparation.
第三段(Relationship between opportunity and suc***s--首句说明处理机遇的态度是成功者与失败者之间的区别) The difference between a man who succeeds and one who does not lies only in the way each treats opportunities.(扩展句1成功者的态度)The suc***sfull person always make adequate preparations to meet... as they duly arrive.(扩展句2失败者的态度)The unsuc***sful person, on the other hand, works little and just waits to see them pass by.(结论)Obviously, the two different attitudes towards opportunities may lead to quite different consequen***.
第四段(我的观点) In my opinion, there are plenty of opportunities for everyone in our society, but only those who are prepared adequately and qualified highly can make use of them to achieve their purpose.
笔者注：(1)全文选取该文做为自己的一个模式，是认为此类文章有一定的普遍性。考研时此类作文虽给出题纲，但短时间内不好扩展，有时甚至无话可说。所以对与此类文章，还是该早做准备----加以总结归纳。
(2)此模式中大部份诸如“If you want to achieve something... make efforts and get prepared.”等的句子实际也是模式说理句型，可运用于多种环境之中。平时要注意此类说理句型的总结，将其纳入模式之中。
(3)特别像此类不好说具体道理的文章，尤其要注意文章的开头，结尾以及中间段的头尾的启，乘，转，合之处。因为考试中说理部份大家都可能差不多半斤八两。
(4)“presents itself”= come,但在文中最好多用此类的新词(大学学的词或短语)，这样就有可能成为亮点。 |
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