(转)【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（38期）

tangshufang · 发表于 08-11-14 16:39:24

出最后一期了http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-335240-1-1.html

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1.从四楼开始对前一楼的习作进行批改，建议大家使用“引用”格式，并将前一楼的错误用“颜色”标出
2.英译中
Reading does good to our mind.

答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉

( 读书对心灵有益。 )
3. 学习以下句型，要铭记于心啊！
do good to（对...有益）
do harm to（对...有害）

4.使用3给出的句型，写一段句子，题材不限
5.复习 前一期：
中译英：
污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。

答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
( Pollution poses a great threat to our existence. )
6. 把给出要求仿写的句子背诵下啦，下一期会要求大家 中译英哦～ [answerfly]1[/answerfly]

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今天推荐的歌，S.H.E的《恋人未满》的英文版，不过开头的低音……
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在脑海中搜索那个曾经热恋的人，你会想到些什么？嫉恨？心酸？还是那些甜甜蜜蜜的点点滴滴？记得他第一次向你表白的样子么？记得你们第一次出去约会的青涩么？记得那个遮遮掩掩、脸红心跳的初吻么？记得他深情款款凝望着你的那双眼睛么？记得你们小小的争吵、小小的和解么？——虽然已经分开，心底那纯纯的依恋仍未褪去，因为，他让你懂得了“爱”。《褐色的眼睛》是他印在你心里的痕迹，是你生命中再难抹去的一段记忆……

　　美国女子乐队“命运之子”（Destiny's Child）的代表作品，S.H.E.《恋人未满》英文原版，选自2001年专辑《幸存者》（Survivor）。三个女孩，两度格莱美最佳蓝调乐队，目前全球最畅销的女子组合之一，主唱就是大名鼎鼎的碧昂丝（Beyonce）。

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Remember the first day when I saw your face
Remember the first day when you smiled at me
You stepped to me and then you said to me
I was the woman you dreamed about
Remember the first day when you called my house
Remember the first day when you took me out
We had butterflies although we tried to hide
And we both had a beautiful night

The way we held each other's hand, the way we talked, the way we laughed
It felt so good to find true love. I knew right then and there you were the one

(Chorus)
I know that he loves me 'cause he told me so
I know that he loves me 'cause his feelings show
When he stares at me you see he cares for me
You see how he is so deep in love
I know that he loves me 'cause it's obvious
I know that he loves me 'cause it's me he trusts
And he's missing me if he's not kissing me
And when he looks at me his brown eyes tell his soul

Remember the first day, the first day we kissed
Remember the first day we had an argument
We apologized and then we compromised and we haven't argued since
Remember the first day we stopped playing games
Remember the first day you fell in love with me
It felt so good for you to say those words
'Cause I felt the same way too

The way we held each other's hand, the way we talked, the way we laughed
It felt so good to find true love. I knew right then and there you were the one

(Chorus)

I'm so happy, so happy that you're in my life
And baby now that you're apart of me
You showed me, showed me the true meaning of love
And I know he loves me

(Chorus)

He looks at me and his brown eyes tell his soul
记得那天，我第一次看到你的样子；记得那天，你第一次向我微笑
你走向我然后对我说，我就是你梦中那个女人
记得那天，你第一次打电话到我家；记得那天，你第一次带我出去玩
我们亲昵相拥，虽然你我都试图遮掩。我们都度过了美妙的一夜

我们手拉手的样子，我们交谈、欢笑的样子
找到真爱感觉如此奇妙。那时我就知道，你是我的那个人

（合唱）
我知道他爱我，因为他这样告诉我；我知道他爱我，因为他表现如是
当他凝视我，你看他的关心；你知道他陷于爱中是多么深
我知道他爱我，因为那是显而易见；我知道他爱我，因为我正是他所信任的人
如果他没有吻我他会想念我；当他看着我的时候，他褐色的眼睛诉说着心声

记得那天，我们第一次亲吻；记得那天，我们第一次争吵
我们道歉而后和好，从此我们再未争吵
记得那天，我们第一次不再玩游戏；记得那天，你第一次说爱上我
听到你说那些话感觉如此奇妙，因为我也是一样想

我们手拉手的样子，我们交谈、欢笑的样子
找到真爱感觉如此奇妙。那时我就知道，你是我的那个人

（合唱）

我如此幸福，如此快乐，你在我的生命中
宝贝，既然你与我分离，你已经展现给我，展现给我爱的真谛
而且我知道他爱我

[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-11-15 12:46 编辑 ]

tangshufang · 发表于 08-11-14 16:40:01

zhangjinze · 发表于 08-11-14 16:44:08

我来了，不错，谢谢。

蓝希 · 发表于 08-11-14 16:46:08

读书有益于我们的身心健康~
Walking does good to my slimming.
Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.
沙发~~~
O YEAH~~

tangshufang · 发表于 08-11-14 17:22:25

2、阅读有助于我们思考。
￥#@！%！￥心灵@！￥#@！

4、造句
Smoking does harm to health.
简单句:吸烟有害健康。

Smoking, although brought enormous benefits to our country\'s tax revenue, obviously does harm to health and are supposed to prohibit, not to advocate.
让步状从+并列：尽管为国家税收做了重大贡献,吸烟对身体有害，应该禁止而不是提倡。

5、Pollution poses a threat to our exisitence.
惭愧，existentce.

wuyongjiu9 · 发表于 08-11-14 17:57:08

2、读书有益于增进我们智慧。
4、All work and no play does harm to a child.
5 、Pollution poses a theat to our existence.

shenjuhua · 发表于 08-11-14 18:08:45

阅读开拓我们的思想。
Watching too much do harm to our eyes.

Pullotion pose a great threat to us.
不好意思没有复习好呀呵呵
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xuyanjun · 发表于 08-11-14 18:18:41

读书对心灵有益。
Doing a crisis himself do good to his progress .
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s03211076 · 发表于 08-11-14 18:56:05

1.读书对心灵有益
2. There is a general debate on whether taking up part time jobs does good to college student or not.
3.Pollution poses a great threat to our existance.

s03211076 · 发表于 08-11-14 18:58:34

不好意思，写错了，existence

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