（转）【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（25期）

tangshufang · 发表于 08-11-2 13:49:05

26期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-331430-1-1.html

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往期链接地址在2楼

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1.从四楼开始对前一楼的习作进行批改，建议大家使用“引用”格式，并将前一楼的错误用“颜色”标出
2.英译中

Quite obviously , immediate action is needed to extricate 80 million Chinese people from the grips of poverty in order to remove the danger of social unrest and ensure continuing stability .

答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
(很明显，需要立即采取行动使八千万中国人摆脱贫困，从而消除社会动荡的危险，确保持续的稳定。)
3.学习以下句型，要铭记于心啊！
Quite obviously , immediate action is needed to...in order to remove the danger of ...

4.使用3给出的句型，写一段句子，题材不限
5.复习前一期：
中译英：
我们必须寻求立即解决引起地球臭氧层快速损耗的问题的办法。如果任其自由发展，这一问题无疑会加剧全球升温，并且正如今天我们所知道的那样危及生命。
答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
(We must seek immediate solutions for problems leading to the rapid depletion of the earth's ozone layer . If allowed to proceed unchecked , the problem will undoubtedly exacerbate global warming and threaten life as we know it today ..)
6.把给出要求仿写的句子背诵下啦，下一期会要求大家中译英哦～[answerfly]1[/answerfly]

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breathless

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http://224.cachefile23.rayfile.com/a8f1/zh-cn/preview/fc232fa4e65ede84bcff3da4984f85a4/preview.mp3

If our love was a fairy tale
I would charge in and rescue you
On a yacht baby we would sail
To an island where we’d say I do
如果我们的爱是童话
我会不顾一切去营救你
亲爱的我们可以驾着小游艇
去一个我们说“我愿意”的小岛
And if we had babies they would look like you
It’d be so beautiful if that came true
You don’t even know how very special you are
如果我们有小孩他们会长得像你
如果那是真的一定很漂亮
你甚至不知道你有多特别
Chorus
You leave me breathless
You’re everything good in my life
You leave me breathless
I still can’t believe that you’re mine
You just walked out of one of my dreams
So beautiful you’re leaving me
Breathless
你让我无法呼吸
你是我生命中所有的美好
你让我无法呼吸
我还不敢相信你就是我的
你从我的梦中走出来
如此惊艳你让我
无法呼吸
And if our love was a story book
We would meet on the very first page
The last chapter would be about
How I’m thankful for the life we’ve made
如果我们的爱是本故事书
我们会在第一页相遇
而最后一章会是
我对我们共同创造的生活如何心存感激

And if we had babies they would have your eyes
I would fall deeper watching you give life
You don’t even know how very special you are
如果我们有小孩他们会有像你那样的眼睛
我会更加深爱着你
你甚至不知道你有多么的特别
You leave me breathless
You’re everything good in my life
You leave me breathless
I still can’t believe that you’re mine
你让我无法呼吸
你是我生命中所有的美好
你让我无法呼吸
我还不敢相信你就是我的
你从我的梦中走出来
如此惊艳你让我
无法呼吸

You just walked out of one of my dreams
So beautiful you’re leaving me

You must have been sent from heaven to earth to change me
You’re like an angel
The thing that I feel is stronger than love believe me
You’re something special
I only hope that I’ll one day deserve what you’ve given me
But all I can do is try
Every day of my life
你一定是上帝派来改变我的人
你就像天使
我的感觉比爱情更加强烈
你是最特别的
我只希望我有一天我可以值得拥有你给予我的一切
但是我说能做的就是努力
在我生命的每一天

You leave me breathless
You’re everything good in my life
You leave me breathless
I still can’t believe that you’re mine
You just walked out of one of my dreams
So beautiful you’re leaving me
Breathless

[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-11-2 14:23 编辑 ]

tangshufang · 发表于 08-11-2 13:49:42

liangxianbo · 发表于 08-11-2 14:09:28

哥们，真有你的！！

tangshufang · 发表于 08-11-2 14:16:06

2、英译中
显而易见，为了根除社会不安定因素的危险，确保持续的社会稳定，有必要采取即刻措施来帮助八千万中国人民脱离贫困。

extricate 使摆脱困难，脱身
unrest 动乱，骚乱
3、记句型，自己打出来，加强记忆
Quite obviously, immediate action is needed to ... in order to remove the danger of ...

4、造句
Quite obviously, immdeiate action is need to perfect the machinery of the law about food security administration in order to prevent inferior food from flowing into the market.呵呵，把模板句型的尾巴改了一下

guoguogtj · 发表于 08-11-2 17:25:09

抢占地盘来啦！！

很明显，需要采取立即行动以使8千万中国人民从贫困中摆脱出来,来消除社会动乱的危机并保证持续的稳定！

Quite obviously,immediate action is needed to [s:10] bring down the price of property,in order to remove the misgiving of people.

甜心姐姐发的歌曲我都一一收纳那！嘿嘿嘿

[ 本帖最后由 guoguogtj 于 2008-11-2 18:33 编辑 ]

edoling · 发表于 08-11-2 18:18:04

相当明显的，我们需要马上采取行动使八千万中国人民摆脱贫困以此避免社会不安定和确保继续稳定

wuyongjiu9 · 发表于 08-11-2 19:37:38

2、很明显，需要立即采取行动使八千万的中国人摆脱贫困，进而消除社会不安定的危险以及确保社会稳定。
4、Quite obviously , immediate action is needed to work out stricter regulations to protect forests and other
creatures in order to remove the danger of the survival of our offspring.
5、we must seek immediate solutions for problems leading to the rapid depletion of the earth\'s ozone layer.
If allowed to proceed unchecked , the problem will undoubtedly exacerbate global warming and threaten life as we konwit today.

wuyongjiu9 · 发表于 08-11-2 19:45:01

哪个是甜心姐姐哦，我咋没听说过？？？

tangshufang · 发表于 08-11-3 18:18:54

[s:8] 就是楼主我啦，不过是天心，不是甜心

tan271708 · 发表于 08-11-4 07:30:34

才来看到25其的，补上
很明显，需要立刻采取行动使8千万中国人离开贫困的边缘，为了消除社会的危险和保证持续的稳定
很明显，需要立即采取行动使八千万中国人摆脱贫困，从而消除社会动荡的危险，确保持续的稳定。)
对比后发现……
quite obviously，immediate action is need to……in order to……
造句再想想
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