作文是各类英语考试中得分较低的一种题型，究其原因，除了平时缺少练习之外，同学们还缺乏作文得分技巧。同学们需要掌握一定的作文模板和熟悉大量的话题作文，纯模板会很僵化缺乏弹性，而话题作文可以更好的拓展思维，例如话题写作160篇里的高分佳句很实用。考研英语写作的提高需要大量细节的分析和磨练，其中一个重要的主题是关于英语创作的重要规律--seeking variety (追求语言丰富多变)。如何追求变化?文都小编在此整理了以下要点，从各种角度给出句型转换的方式，提供一些思路。如果能在作文中设置一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定使你的作文如虎添翼。
一、注意段首句式的变化
图画作文的段首句往往是"如图所示"或"从图画中可以看出"之类，下面为经常采用的一些句型：
As is shownin the picture, 和As can be seen from the picture,是经常能看到的首句话，但是模板迹象过于明显，所以应该稍加升级，比如添加一些结构和修饰语：
It is ofconsiderable interest to see in the bizarre picture that…
当然还可以添加一些引出话题的句子：
No one canskip the issue of…(图画表现出来的意图)。Justas what is illustrated in the above drawing,…
二、适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观地反映事实。
句子开头不要总是用we/ I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attent
ion shouldbe paid to. ) 举个经典结尾的例子：It is, therefore, high timethat some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry likethat. By doing so，its competitive edge will besharpened effectively。
三、一句话用不同的句式来表达
为了加强同学们对语法知识在写作中的灵活应用，下面给出一句话的14种句式及语言
调整的效果，内容上没有太大差异，但是请同学们仔细辨别每句话所侧重的句式：
1.使用表语从句
The pictureshows two people reading the announcement on a billboard, and being shocked atthe message. The reason is that the billboard is advertising a "sale ofthe dead bodies"。
2.使用介词短语
In thepicture, two people are reading the announcement and they are being shocked atthe message of "a sale of dead bodies" on a billboard。
3.使用疑问句
The pictureshows two people reading the announcement on a billboard. Why are they soshocked? The reason is that the billboard is advertising a "sale of thedead bodies"。
4.使用原因状语从句
The pictureshows two people reading the announcement on a billboard. As the billboard isadvertising a "sale of the dead bodies"， theyare shocked at the message。
5.使用结果状语从句
The pictureshows two people reading the announcement on a billboard. The billboard isadvertising a "sale of the dead bodies" so that they are shocked atthe message。
6.使用时间状语从句
In thepicture, while the two people are reading the announcement on the billboardabout "a sale of the dead bodies"， they arebeing deeply shocked。
7.使用分词短语
In thepicture, reading the message of a ‘sale of the dead bodies" advertised onthe billboard, the two people are deeply shocked。
8.使用主动语态
In thepicture, the announcement on a billboard advertising a "sale of the deadbodies" shocks the two people reading it。
9.使用There be 结构
In thepicture, there is an announcement on a billboard advertising a "sale ofthe dead bodies" and shocking the two people reading it。
10.使用倒装句
On abillboard is an announcement advertising a "sale of the dead bodies".The two people reading it are being shocked。
11.使用定语从句
In thepicture, the announcement on a billboard which advertises a "sale of thedead bodies" shocks the two people reading it。
12.强调句
In thepicture, it is the announcement on a billboard advertising a "sale of thedead bodies" that shocks the two people reading it。
13.虚拟语气
In the picture,were it not for the announcement on the billboard advertising a "sale ofthe dead bodies"， the two people would not be soshocked。
14. 尽量复杂作文中的句式
It is ofconsiderable interest to observe in this bizarre caricature that a couple ofcitizens, reading an announcement issued on the billboard, are taken aback as aresult of the astounding message which informs people of a "sale of deadbodies"。
句中使用的词组包括：beof considerable interest, a couple of, taken aback, as a result of, inform sb.of
长句采用的特殊语法包括：宾语从句+分词结构做插入语+分词作后置定语(issued)+被动语态+原因短语+定语从句。
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