考研英语写作常见语言错误与修正 第二期

b为推荐的句子


2．主语和谓语，名词和代词，以及人称是否保持一致


例 4

a) The eating habit of Chinese people have changed in the past decade.

b) The eating habit of Chinese people has changed in the past decade.

不管主语和谓语隔开多远，主语当中还有修饰成分，谓语要和真正的主语在数上保持一致。


例 5

a) Now fruits and vegetables can be seen everywhere when it is in season.


修改参考:

b) Now fruits and vegetables can be seen everywhere when they are in season.

例 6

a) I feel proud to come to our university.

b) I feel proud to come to this university

our和主语 I不一致，或把 our改成 my，或改成 this。而这里用 this 较妥。


任务:
修改例五的句子

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写作的痛苦很大啊，希望还来得及

考研英语写作常见语言错误与修正 第一期


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a）表示错误的或不宜提倡的句子，b）表示正确的或值得模仿的句子。

1．动词谓语的时态是否有错



例 1

a) We college students had enough time to take a parttime job, no matter how busy we
were ...

b) We college students have enough time to take a parttime job, no matter how busy we are ...

命题作文一般都是议论文，而写议论文一般都是用现在时态。只有举例，提到过去的事才会用到过去时。



例 2

a) Riding bicycles had more advantages than taking a bus.

b) Riding bicycles had more advantages than taking a bus.

考生中用过去时写作与他们教材课文体裁（大多为叙述文、说明文）和平时写作练习（大多写个人经历的故事）有关，也与他们过度概括有关，认为所有文章都用过去时。


例 3

a) There are so many countries using English that it had been regarded as an international
language.

b) There are so many countries using English that it has been regarded as an international language.

在论述同一事情，即发生在同一时间里的事时，前后半句或相邻的几句在时态上要保持一致。
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考研英语写作常见语言错误与修正 第一期


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a）表示错误的或不宜提倡的句子，b）表示正确的或值得模仿的句子。

1．动词谓语的时态是否有错



例 1

a) We college students had enough time to take a parttime job, no matter how busy we
were ...

b) We college students have enough time to take a parttime job, no matter how busy we are ...

命题作文一般都是议论文，而写议论文一般都是用现在时态。只有举例，提到过去的事才会用到过去时。



例 2

a) Riding bicycles had more advantages than taking a bus.

b) Riding bicycles had more advantages than taking a bus.

考生中用过去时写作与他们教材课文体裁（大多为叙述文、说明文）和平时写作练习（大多写个人经历的故事）有关，也与他们过度概括有关，认为所有文章都用过去时。


例 3

a) There are so many countries using English that it had been regarded as an international
language.

b) There are so many countries using English that it has been regarded as an international language.

在论述同一事情，即发生在同一时间里的事时，前后半句或相邻的几句在时态上要保持一致。
欢迎来到免费考研网www.freekaoyan.com

感谢楼主啊

when they are in season.

Now fruits and vegetables can be seen everywhere when they are in season.

they are......

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谢谢 太好了