我写的07年大作文，请大家拍

The drawing depict a scene in a football match that one player is trying to kick the ball in the same time the defencer is trying to do the opposite job. Both of them are overlooking each other in their mind.

This picture shows us that sometimes we will overlook the difficulties.We all suffer from this situation during our daily life now and then. When we are too desire to do something, the obstacle will become more and much bigger. All the roads to success is not easy. The bigger the success is, the bigger the it becomes.

The difficulties are not avoidable, however, if you just focus on the pessive side, maybe you can no t giving out all your protencial srtength. But once you judge the difficulties as a nesserary and normal factor to success, and only look them as they are, things could be much better. All the obstacles are produced or overlooked by ourself, that is to say, we are the very enemy of ouself. So, if you think you , and keep still toward any hardness, you can.


希望能得到指导，谢谢。

[ 本帖最后由 wxmzw 于 2008-1-15 23:20 编辑 ]

楼主用Overlook这个单词，应该忽略、忽视的意思，用错词了吧
应该用Exaggerate表示夸大吧

字数大概在180到190之间，刚刚好吧。我第一次正式写，有点潦草，希望指出。^^

有好的就有弱项，一同努力取长补短。嘿嘿。

一同努力，抓住最后两天多时间！

字数是不是超200个了？ 超字数虽然不扣分，但决不是明智的做法，字数越多错误越多

比我写的好，支持下[s:2]

写得很不错，我的written english很烂

你太强了~!
强烈佩服一下

本来写到中间还记得要加的，后来就忘记了，呵呵，回头再好好看看格式。谢谢提醒。