愚蠢作文模板展示
什么是愚蠢模板？愚蠢模板就是不实用的模板、不能为我们拿到较高分数的模板。这种模板在市场上不计其数，所以必须揭露它们的真实面目。它们要么共性太强，要么个性太强，要么两种毛病兼有。相反，优秀的模板应具备以下特点：共性个性平衡、分类适当、提供现成的动词词组和句型、逻辑清晰、相当的字数、高级的词汇和句型等。
一、空话连篇
这种“模板”有三宗罪：其一，内容极其空洞；其二，无法覆盖目前题型下所有可能的情况，比如价值观、正面社会现象（从这个角度又显得共性不够）；其三，竟然要求自己举例子，自己组织句子则内容和句式容易出错，也不易写出有水准的句子（若水平高也就不用模板了），除非题目要求举例才不得不自己写整句。
What an instructive and interesting picture it is! As is vividly presented in the picture above, 描述图中现象.
What on earth can we learn from the picture? It is far beyond any doubt that what the drawer really intends to convey in the picture is far-reaching. By illustrating the above image, the drawer attempts to arouse our awareness to the serious problem of 图中现象, and such phenomenon is not rare in our society and life, but rather common. 举一个例子. An increasing number similar events happened and happening have been heard or reported in many aspects of our society as well as life.
Judging from all arguments offered above, we can safely come to the conclusion that great significance should be attached to图中现象. Only by doing so, I believe, can we end such phenomenon. It is hard to imagine that our society would be like without our taking effective measures. Few watching hours and more constructive program may be the first step in the right direction.
二、空洞无物
这种“模板”名为模板，实为一堆关联词。关键的动词词组、句子和逻辑关系基本全靠自己发挥。
It is true that图中现象. For example, 举一个例子. But 主题 is still valued in our life and it is beneficial to us if we 按照主题做. There are three reasons.
In the first place, 原因一. In addition, 原因二. Take the example of 一个例子. Last but not least, 原因三.
From my point of view, 作者观点. On the one hand, 观点一. On the other hand, 观点二. Consequently, everyone should 建议
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三、分类过细
针对某一狭窄领域专设模板，或者设计一些适用范围不宽的逻辑关系，结果八百年也用不上。以下是针对身体健康关系领域的模板（此模板有的地方又显得共性太强）。
The picture ___________. What is strikingly noticeable is ___________, but it can be easily explained by ___________ shown in the picture.
The discernable unhealthiness ________ discloses a prevalent phenomenon that has long existed in the China’s ___________. On the one hand, __________. On the other hand, __________. As a result, the integration of poor living conditions and work pressure leads naturally to their poor health and short life-span, just as the picture tells us.
The situation is rather depressing because __________, and it is largely owing to _________. To solve the problem, I think there should be a thriving social trend ________, and those who should be rewarded with good living and working conditions.
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