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陈梦熊 发表于 13-12-23 23:48:49 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |正序浏览 |阅读模式
抱歉,前天发的时候以为都发上去了,结果只发了消极篇的,现在来补上,基本差不多。
漫画作文模板【英语一专用】积极型  (如环境保护,遵纪守法,素质教育等)
第一段
I was extraordinary astonished by what is shown in the provided illustration which is very shocked/characteristic and educational/instructive. In the above picture/drawing/cartoon, 描述图片内容(如有两幅图,接着写 the other picture informs us that…), As is symbolically revealed in the picture,折射生活中的意义(素质教育,精神文化的重要性等). What a representative and thought-provoking scene it is! Although universal/general/widespread and intelligible at first glimpse, the picture does embody profound implication.
第二段
Obviously, the drawing mirrors a phenomenon about图片意义which is both revelatory and educational. The reasons of this phenomenon are not far to seek. There are numerous reasons and I would explore a few of the most pivotal ones here. For one thing, 如中国传统美德,社会价值取向等 China has a splendid culture of more than 5,000 years. And from of old, diligent and thrifty/ mutual help/ complying public morality is Chinese fine tradition. This spirit will be passed generation to generation. To building-up a harmonious society, every citizen has responsibility. Certainly, 如优良传统、社会风气 is not the sole reason education/culture propaganda also contributes to the situation. A certain extent, spiritual civilization is more important than material civilization. As Herbert Spenser said, Education has for its object the formation of character. (教育是以造就人的品质为其目标) So it is necessary to raise moral consciousness amongst the general public through school education. At the present times, either school education or family teaching focuses on the moral development in order to keep with the demand of social development.
第三段
In every community, there is work to be done. In every nation, there are wound
to heal. In every heart, there is the power to do it. As far as I’m concern, this phenomenon can’t do without the struggle and payment of all orders of society.
In a word/To make a long story short/All in all, the hole society should pay close attention to the circumstance of 文章主题. And we should carry forward the fine traditions and keep fighting for a better future.(或其它主旨) Only in this way, can we live in a world peaceful, colorful, and vigorous.
翻译如下:
所示图片令我非常吃惊,图片内容很典型/令人震惊并且很有教育意义/有教育性。在如上所示的图片/绘画/卡通中__________。图片中象征地揭示了________。多么典型又令人深思的场景啊!/尽管第一眼看起来很简单/普遍而且易于理解,但图片包含深刻的含义。
显而易见,图片反映了一个典型且有教育意义的现象。产生这个现象的原因不难发现并且有很多,这儿我将阐述其中重要的几点,首先,中国拥有五千多年灿烂的文化历史,勤俭节约/互相帮助/遵守公德就是中华民族的传统文化,并且这种精神还将代代相传。为建造和谐社会,每个公民都应尽其所能。当然,传统文化的影响并不是唯一原因,如教育/文化宣传也很重要。一定程度上,精神文明比物质文明更加重要。所以提升公民的道德意识十分重要。比如斯宾塞所说:教育是以造就人的品质为其目标。在当今社会中,不论是学校教育与还是家庭教育,都应关注道德发展,这样才能跟得上社会发展的要求。
我认为,____离不开全社会各阶层的努力和付出。每个社会都会有缺失待补。每个国家都有创伤待愈。每个人内心都有补缺愈创的力量。所以我们应继承优良传统并为更美好的未来奋斗。

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