【经典范文】
The result of an employment survey conducted among postgraduates is explicitly conveyed in the above pie chart. The conclusion safely drawn after an analysis of the statistics is that facing the most important life decision, postgraduates still hold various views and make different choices. Two main professions favored by the majority of postgraduates are the education research and financial industry, which take up 59.05% and 21.32% of the total respectively.
The possible contributors behind postgraduates’career choices can be as follows. For one thing, it is still the development space and opportunities of future career that the postgraduates concern most, especially for those who choose to work as academics in a technical field, in which they could make good use of their specialty and bring their talents into full play. For another, salary, among many factors, is also of significant value, which results in the second largest group of postgraduates who decide to work in the financial field. Besides, though stability is no longer their main concern, it also plays a part on postgraduates in their job selection.
Whatever occupations you pursue, I still want to remind you that choosing a job is choosing a sort of life style, and you can’t be too careful when making your own career choices.
【范文精译】
上图清晰地反映出了研究生毕业后就业情况的统计结果。对数据进行分析后，我们可以看出，面对人生最重要的选择，毕业生们的观点和选择都是迥然不同的。教育科研和金融行业是大部分毕业生所青睐的两种职业，选择这两个行业的学生各占总数的59.05%和21.32%。
影响毕业生职业选择的因素可能有以下几个。首先，未来职业的发展空间和机遇依然是毕业生们最为关注的，尤其是选择科技领域的学生们，只有这样他们才能充分发挥自己的特长和才智。另外，在众多因素中，收入的多少非常重要，这一因素使选择金融业的毕业生人数占居第二。再者，虽然稳定性不再是研究生们考虑的主要因素，但这在他们的择业中也起着一定的作用。
不管选择什么职业，我还是想提醒大家：选择工作也就是选择了一种生活方式，择业时，越谨慎越好。
【高分解析】
1. …is explicitly conveyed in the above pie chart. 意为“上图清晰地反映了……”，此句为图表类作文的常用句型，考生应适当整理积累，灵活选用。
2.The conclusion safely drawn after an analysis of…is that…表示“对……进行分析后，我们可以看出……”，其中，safely drawn的使用是一个亮点；that引导的是一个表语从句，后面为所得出的结论。
3.The possible contributors behind…can be as follows. 表示“影响……的因素可能有以下几个”，其中文章使用contributor的抽象含义，意为“原因，因素”，比reason的表达更有新意。
4.此句的主干是一个强调句型it is…that…，强调the room and opportunity for further professional development。句中bring…into full play的意思是“充分发挥……的作用”，它和make good use of表达的是同一个意思。
5.句中you can’t be too careful表示“再怎么小心也不为过”，即“越谨慎越好”。
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