接受Zidance的建议，更改一下。
另外，我把whether you are a president or an ordinary man, a genral or a soldier, a teacher or a student ,a millionaire or a poor中的后面的a都省略了，不知道对不对。下面是修改后的文章：
As is indicated in the picture, the sons and the daugher all are pushing their father out ,like throwing off a football. How sad and regretful it is!
In this day and age, there is no denying that the condition of our society in the aspect of reverring parents deteriorated steadily .In fact ,we should take care of our parents well rather than disregard them totally.To start with,they are so old that can not support themselves.Next,they had ever rear us and gave a life and a good situation for us to live .In addition,whether you are a president or an ordinary man, ageneral or soldier, teacher or student ,millionaire or poor,we are all children of our parents . If there has no them ,where are we?Perhaps,that\'s is the last thing you want to do when your parents is dead you are relecant to support them.
Obviously, it is high time that we did something for our parent ,including all ways .What time?at once. |
