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 楼主| woshijialishi 发表于 08-3-18 00:22:51 | 只看该作者
(9)
        This picture show that love is a lamp which lead a bright light and hope when one involved in dark. In China, we can see many stories about love, for example. From newspaper we can often read about “The Project hope.” There are many people delvate himself to help others. In remote country, some children can’t go to school because no money. However, in other district, there are many people to provide money to help these children.
        From this picture, a small light bright some area. We can read much from it. As a university students, we can do much, do best. We can study hard science knowledge. We should improve our from all kind of aspect. As long as we devote oneself to help those troublesome man.

(10)
        The symbolic is a light, it will be more powerful when the circumstances is more dark. Everyone has symbolic and symbolic is a very good matter to us. It come from us and it can help us. The symbolic is not only a feeling, but also is a character.
        Mrs Bingxin is a good writer with symbolic. She gave all she can do to the society, include money, book and her heart. She tried her best to help those people who needs help.
        We should show our love to the people, furthermore, we should show our love by the best way. I believe we have we have to do is not only the word, but also is the action, not only the money, but also the heart. If all of us have give our symbolic, the world can change more beautiful.
As is illustrated in the picture that love is a lamp, the darker setting is ,the brighter lamp is. around all the feelings of human beings love is the noblest one, I think of course, everybody has their own understanding for it.
    I think that love seems as that give someone a hand in need, perhaps the help is too small to feel hardly, but it neccessary for the people that in difficulties. For instance, when a little girl lose her way just a hand that help her to find her family is the best help. when your friends in trouble probably a word which was filled with heartening will call out his strength or spirit to conquer the difficulties. the help is very small in your eyes, but do not don\'t give your hand, because it is very useful for them.
    In my opinion, we must give a hand to the people who are more unfortunate than us. you can imagine that if everyone give a help to them, the world will become a better place, the future of mankind will be more peaceful, people will live in a fine life. what do you hesitate to do it ?baby. well, let\'s carry out our \"nice plane\"!

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As is illustrated in the picture that love is a lamp, the darker the setting is, the brighter the lamp is. aroundAmong all the feelings of human beings, love is the noblest one,. I think of course, everybody has their own understanding forof it.
    I think that love seems as that is to give someone a hand in need, perhaps the help is too small to feel hardly, but it is neccessary for the people that in difficulties. For instance, when a little girl lose loses her way, just a hand that help helps her to find her family is the best help a precious help for her. When one of your friends are in trouble probably a word which was is filled with heartening love and care will call out his strength or spirit to conquer the difficulties. In these cases, the help is very small in your eyes, but do not don\'t give hesitate to extend your hand, because it is very useful for them.
    In my opinion, we must give a hand to the people who are more unfortunate less fortunate than us. you can imagine that if everyone give gives a help to them, the world will become a better place, the future of mankind will be more peaceful, and people will live in a fine life. what do you hesitate to do it ?baby. well, let\'s carry out our \"nice plane\"!
12#
 楼主| woshijialishi 发表于 08-3-18 00:23:14 | 只看该作者
(1)
        This is a very interesting picture of a lovely American girl dressed in traditional Chinese costume with a sweet smile on her face. She wears a pearl necklace, colorful ribbon, ear rings, and other decorating things that are characteristic of the clothes of a Chinese minority nationality. It is obvious that as a result of our open-door policy, more and more foreigners visit China and become interested in our national culture, which is making it go international.
        There is no reason to make a fuss about this phenomenon. With the rapid development of technology and economy, the world is becoming smaller and smaller, and international cultural exchanges have become more and more frequent, which is inevitably improving our mutual understanding and friendship with other countries.
        As Chinese citizens, we should respect our own national culture and learn useful things from the cultures of different nations, which will enable us to make great progress in many ways. I believe a happy and bright future is awaiting us if we make every effort to promote cultural development both nationally and internationally.

(2)
        Nowadays, “national culture or international culture” has become a matter of great concern for the general public in our society, especially for those who are confronted with this problem. Now let’s take a look at the American girl in traditional Chinese costume. She looks very beautiful with a nice smile on her face. It seems that the girl is very fond of the Chinese costume.
        Obviously, the picture indicates that a culture of one nation may become international, which is beneficial to all the human beings. Since China has opened its door widely to the outside world, many people from different countries want to visit China. They will accept and love the Chinese culture as a whole. In addition, Chinese culture should be well shared with foreign people who have shown their great interest in it. Meanwhile, the Chinese people are also exposed to foreign cultures when more foreign people come to China. In this way people from various nations in the world will be able to acquire better understanding of each other and live peacefully in this world.
        My opinion about this cultural phenomenon is that a national culture should become international. This is because the culture of any nation is a kind of precious heritage, and belongs to the whole mankind.
13#
 楼主| woshijialishi 发表于 08-3-18 00:23:38 | 只看该作者
(3)
        As is shown in this picture, we can see clearly that a charming American girl who is in traditional Chinese costume is smiling to us. The purpose of this picture is that with the development of globalization, great changes have taken place in the world, and one nation’s culture has been accepted by the people from another culture.
        why does this phenomenon appear? I think there are several reasons as follows. First, with policy of opening the door to the outside world being well implemented in China, a large number of people from other countries like to visit China and become interested in traditional Chinese culture. Second, due to the easy and fast communications, the distance between various nations has been shortened, and people can get in touch with each other easily. Therefore, cultures from various nations can be exchanged and different cultures can merge together quickly.
        In my opinion, people from different countries should learn and share different cultures. Each culture has its own advantages which might be beneficial to another culture. Besides, there is a trend that globalization is going to be accepted in the whole world. Therefore national cultures should gradually become international.

(4)
        As the picture shows, an American girl in traditional Chinese costume, with a smile on her face, is presented. Obviously, the girl enjoys the culture of traditional Chinese, as many people do. It indicates that a culture of one country will go to international.
        Many advantages can be seen when a national culture becomes international. First, it can show the outside world its native culture. For example, China, as a country with a long history, may share her profound culture with the rest of the world. Other countries may benefit from the traditional Chinese culture in many aspects. Second, it will promote communications and exchanges between different cultures from various countries. From my experience, I was very exciting and astonished when I had a chance to know American culture through the English language. In my college life, I am lucky to have several foreign friends. Ideally, my foreign friends and I have learned a lot from each other about the cultures. Third, it is nice for people from different cultural backgrounds to live together and share the different cultures.
        In a word, man’s life will be made more colourful when national cultures have become international.
14#
 楼主| woshijialishi 发表于 08-3-18 00:24:06 | 只看该作者
(5)
        As seen from the above picture, an American girl in traditional Chinese costume is smiling to us with friendly looking. There are a lot of bright and beautiful accessories on her body. She dresses in Chinese costume, which is a symbol on behalf of the minority people in our country. From the picture we can draw a conclusion that cultures are national and international, and no limit between different countries. Even if growing up in various countries, we have still the same interests in cultures, not only in America, but also other countries.
        In my view, it is no exaggeration to say that cultures are the most important factor, which can make the mankind progress and benefit a great deal from the communication in cultures, other than economic development. I am of the opinion that, in reaction to the phenomenon of cultures tending to be national and international, China should hold the key to success in the 21st century both in economy and cultures. We are required by the world people to open our cultures. Only in this situation can China act in cultures as an important role in the world stage. Of course, faced with the entry in foreign cultures, we must take steps to keep up the alertness against bad minds. My argument to the point is that we can’t throw the baby away with the bath water.

(6)
        From this picture we can see an American girl who was wearing a Chinese costume. This girl may be a foreign student or a traveller. She seems to like this costume very much. This picture shows a common phenomenon in China even in the whole world. The phenomenon is that the culture becomes international. The phenomenon is not only in China but also in many other countries. Many people begin to go to many different countries and learn different national cultures.
        As far as I am concerned, I think this phenomenon is good to us. Firstly, we can learn some good cultures from other countries, and also can make our good culture confront the world. The international trend of culture can promote our cultures proceed. Secondly, the cultures become international, which can make more people know our country. So many people will come to our country to have a jurnal. That can rise our travel economy income. Finally, if the culture becomes international it can contact the people of whole world. That will make the world better.
        In a world, the phenomenon of the culture-international can benefit to us. That is a good phenomenon.
In the picture, a beautiful girl is dressed in traditional Chinese costume. It’s easy to find that she is an American girl, with a sweet smile on her face. From her expression, we can deduce that she may not only like the costume, but also like the Chinese cultures.
This phenomenon shows us a further meaning—cultural exchange and communication. It’s true that there is a variety of cultures in different countries in the world. But in essence, there aren’t obvious bounds in those cultures. Secondly, because of the need of the development in human society, communication plays a more important part now that it did before. The world has become more smeller than it was. Furthermore, when people learn more cultures of other countries, they will be able to avoid international misunderstanding.
In my opinion, we should magnify and expand those kind of cultures the scope of culture exchange may be extended from traditional costume to custom, social life, education and even economy. In addition, it is necessary that government should promulgate some decrees to promote the cultures-national and international. I wait a day that cultures will be mixed together. In future, the word “country” will no longer exist people from different areas will live in a whole family.
15#
 楼主| woshijialishi 发表于 08-3-18 00:25:16 | 只看该作者
(2)
        As is show by the two pictures. A flower was cowerd with room. It was raining out of the room. The second picture, There is only one dead flower. It’s clear, If move the flower out of the room, That the servere reforestation resulted the flower, dead.
        Obviously, The dawer, Through the two pictures, Aims at revealing to us the serious qustions, The children like the flower.
        To solve te problem, I think the teacher and the parents and society make a sustained effort. The teacher and the parents sould not only make plans but also ensure rational study lessons of the children. As dor the bread masses of the people, They should fully important the question. In a word, If the teacher and parents and society have really lalizesed and worked on it, There is certain to be an encouraging respect in children glowing.
(1)
        The two picture describe the flower in the warm-room can’t endure the bad invirnmental. It is most likely that the drawer intends not only to tell us the fact but to set us thinking what is under the iceberg.
        For the time being. The entrance of WTO has become the hot topic. Different people have different idea about the entrance of WTO, there are advantages and disadvantages. There are some possible reasons why China important reason for this issue. The most important reason is that the development of China can’t leave nation’s economic will stop developing and will not have a chance to take part in the world economic. Another reason for jointing WTO is that the entrance of WTO could be of great benefit to our nation.
        Of course. The coin has two sides. The entrance of WTO has other harmful aspects, but to some extent. It has more advantages. If we can’t take pat in WTO, our country will lost the chance that enhance our power of competition. In my opinion, our nation should be take effect measure to avoid the harmful aspects by ourselves.(3)
        The flower is warm house can’t stand on rain and wind There are two pictures, one is said that a flower can’t be hurt by rain and wind, she grows wondful. The other picture is said that, the flower was took out of the warmhourse, then she died.
        The two pictures tell us a turth, our children like the flower. They beautiful and lovely. They have a lot of time and change. They have the future. Parents love their chrildren so much that they keep them under their arms.
        But they don’t know their chirldren will never grown up like this. When they go into the sociality. They will find it was so weak themselves for doing anythink. Like the flower in the warmhouse was bring out. It man no experience as a child, he can not almostly make successes. No progress for him. He is fail in study and work.
        In my opinion, parents should give the free space to their chirldren. They must learned sovling problems by themself and face to every difficulties in brave. Chirdren can grow better by themself they will be sthrong and healthe.
(4)
        The flower growing in the warm house can’t bear raining day. There has been a discussion recently about a pictures---the flower growing in the warm house can’t bear raining day. There are many persepectives about the picture.
        I am attracted at a glance of a flower which is growing healthily. Looking at it carefully, I find the flower is protected from the rain outside the warm house. When the warm house is removed, the flower is going to be dead. It looks so slight that couldn’t stand up in the raining day.
        Simply designed as the picture is, the symbolic meaning the picture conveys is deep and profound. By drawing the picture, the artist intends not only to tell us about a flower but also to set us thinking about why the flower couldn’t bear the raining day. Nowadays, most families have only one child. So parents are very need, protect them from all things that may be hard to them. Crowing by parents’ protecting, some children are independent, and can’t have the ability to face hard problems.
        Thinking about the picture, I think we should encourage children to face some hardship. Only like this, we are able to face the problem we will meet in our lives.
16#
 楼主| woshijialishi 发表于 08-3-18 00:25:48 | 只看该作者
(5)
        As we can see from the first picture, there is a flower in a greenhouse which is blooming and growing well while it is raining and thundering outside. But in the second picture, the greenhouse is removed. This time, the flower can’t stand in the heavy rain. Compared the two pictures we can conclude that the flowers in a greenhouse are too weak to bare the worse outsetting.
        These pictures describe a common social phenomena in China today that children are taken care of and protected by their parents and grandparents so well that they can’t even do anything themselves. When children are young, some reasonable protection and care are acceptable becausee they still have not the ability to live and do things on themselves. But when children grow uph, it is better to let them handle things on their own. On the other hand, ass children grow up, their parents become old too, and it will be children’s turn to take care of their parents. We can’t image a society full of adults having the ability like seven-year-old children. It is harmful to the social development.
        Chiinese parents should give their children more opportunities to deal with things themselfves, push them to uncomfortable enviroments to some extent, make them dure some trouble, and so on, all of these will benefit their growing. Only through these, they can tke on greater responsibilitie and have more abilities to fulfill themselves and serve the country and society when they grow up.

(6)
        As depicted in the pictures, the flower in green house cannot stand for the severe storms and may be dead in the near future. What does the author realy want to tell us? In my opinion, the real implication of the author is that everyone has to meet difficulties in their life experiences, so we have to make adequate preparations for them.
        There is no denying that a majority of young people, especially who are endored by their rich parents, take their happiness for granted. I am fully convinced that they may inevitable suffer from failures in their future. For the simple reason is that they like the flowers in green house. Therefore, it is necessary for those parents to take some measures to control this trend which may lead to their children’s failure. The best way to solve this problem I think is to give young people opportunites to do things independently. Only in this way can young people confront with difficulties and deal with them easily.
        As far as I am concerned, I am greatly in favor of the idea that encouraging young generation practice in hard environments. Because young people can benefit a lot from their own experiences in hard times and earn enough confidence to face their future challenges.
17#
 楼主| woshijialishi 发表于 08-3-18 00:26:10 | 只看该作者
(7)
        It goes without saying that the drawings aim at revealing a common and serious problem in China: how to educate and cultivate the young. Let’s take a closer look at the drawings. In an ideal condition, the flower blooms. But when moved out of the green house, it perishes under the rain and storm. It is obvious that the flower in greenhouse can’t withstand wind and rains.
        Nowadays the young generation in China, like the flower in the greenhouse, live under the full protection from their parents. Parents want to show all their love to their children. They give their children all the best things they can afford and do not let their children do anything at home. Self-centeredness and arbitrariness have become a trait of the young generation. Once leaving their parents, many young people cannot make a living of their own. They get lost when stepping into the complex reality and cannot face any hardships and difficulties.
        Child education has become one of the most popular topics discussed not only by educational experts, but also by people in all walks of life. The failure of child education does more harm to the development of our society and our civilization than to the children themselves. Thus, it’s high time that parents, educators and the government made concerted efforts to put an end to this situation.
18#
 楼主| woshijialishi 发表于 08-3-18 00:26:37 | 只看该作者
(1)
        The cartoon depicts a vivid picture in which an athlete, dripping sweat, is rushing to the end. Obviously, he wins the match, but this is not the key message conveyed by the picture. The most striking feature of the drawing is that the same line is marked as both “the start” and “the end”, which indicates that although the athlete came to the finish, a new race is waiting for him.
        The idea conveyed by the cartoon is apparent: the end is a new start. It is widely accepted that we should not be satisfied with the present achievement, for nowadays new challenges and competition never stop. The market economy and competitive society drives many people studying hard for higher academic degrees, some of them even seeking the opportunities to study abroad. We should spare no efforts improving ourselves, master high technology and professional skills. The we can make use of it to devote ourselves to society.
        Take my father as an example. He was denied higher education for historical reasons. But by self-study he became a technician in a factory. Many people thought he was content. But he never stopped studying. He took courses of law in his spare time. Later he became a lawyer. “The finishing point is just a new starting point”, he said to me.

(2)
As is shown in the picture, on arriving at the finishing line of a race on the playground, the lovely young man has to continue his new journey in no time instead of stopping to take a rest. He has successfully settled the puzzle of “stopping or going on” which might have confused many others.
With the increasing pace of modern life, perhaps no change has characterized the past decase more dramatically than that of people’s view on their own life. It is generally agreed upon that people have to adjust themselves to this new change. On the one hand, no doubt, people will gain a lot by setting new goals in their daily life. take the famous scientist Thomas Edison for example. He had done very well in his early life, but continued to pursue something more difficult all through his life. On the other hand, if one is obsessed with the success he has achieved, he would lose the chance to pursue new success. What is more, he may become the slave of his success. There are many cases showing that people lose their courage to better themselves after becoming successful.
To sum up, one’s view on his success determines his future. In my opinion, it is necessary to carry out a nation-wide campaign publicizing people who have a burning desire for more and ever greater achievement when they are already well-known. So that people in the society will develop a forward-looking attitude and make their life worth living and the world more beautiful as well.
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 楼主| woshijialishi 发表于 08-3-18 00:27:06 | 只看该作者
(3)
        Here is a drawing of a running boy who is reaching the finishing line. He looks tired but happy because we can see he will be the winner of a race. But just before the finishing-line which is decorated beautifully by flags and trees, writes two Chinese characters which mean “Start point”. Under this drawing lies its title “finishing-point is a new start-point as well.”
        We can easily understand what this drawing wants to tell us. Our life is just like a race in which we will have many short-time aims. When we achieve our aims, we will be happy and think we have finished the race. However, we will soon realize that a finishing-point is just an new start-point. We don’t have much time to stay and take a rest. The race is still going on, and we have to run. We will soon have new aims and join new races and try our best to be the first place.
        I have learned this when I was a child. When I got the first place in a singing contest in my primary school, my teacher told me to forget it after informing me this good news. I did not understand at that time. But soon I met more girls and boys who could sing better in other contests and when I was lost afterwards I understand that if I fulfilled what I had already got, I would not always be the first. So I kept on running. I kept on running when I got to the middle-school with the first-class score, where I met new classmates and joined a new race. Similarly when I got to university I didn’t stop. A finishing-line just means the past. Maybe you were the best, but that does not mean you can always be if you don’t know a new race has begun.
        A finishing point is a new start point as well. We shall always remember.

(4)
There’s always no real end of a road for a person. Endpoint may also be a start point. As the drawing describes, having reached an end point, one should not stop. For it’s a new start at the same time, and he has to continue to run. It reveals that one the way of our life, we have to forget what we have got, look forward and run straight to another point.
Take myself for example, I’ll finish my college education in this summer. It’s an end of my four years’ study, but it’s also a new start of my life. I could choose to pursue my study or to find a job. Both mean a new start. If I just stand at the point without doing anything, others who were behind me will catch me up. So all I have to do is to forget the past and to continue running. As I want to pursue my study, I will choose the graduate entrace examination and becoming a graduate as my new start point. For the new aim, I’ll not stop for a minute. Perhaps someone will ask: “Won’t you feel tired while there is no end?” My answer will be:”Run further, Get more and Be happier”
Time is limited for everyone of us. We could not waste it hesitating about what to do next at an endpoint. Look forward, a new way is waiting for us. Let’s go!
评分:14分(3)15分(4)
评语:内容切题,条理清楚,句式有一定变化,用词与结构有一些错误。

(5)
        The drawing depicts that a boy after a long distance running, is just hitting the ending rod. There are two marks on the ground. The one after the boy marks “ending” and the one in front of the boy marks “starting”.
        From the drawing, we can conclude easily that “Ending Means Another Beginning”. Defferent races that come around one after another consist our lives. We have no choice but to face them. In college, we “run” with our classmates. In company, we “run” with our colleagues. During the race, we must always try out best for if you are lazy you will loss your position. To “run” faster and to keep up with the quick development of modern technology and our society is the principle of future society. The early you end the race, the early you can begin the next one the more chances you may held.
        Now days with the quick development of technology, we scientific college student must try to keep up with it. We shouldn’t satisfied with what we have achieved. Developing is the first principle. The only thing we can do now is running and developing.

(6)
From the picture, it can be seen that a boy is rushing through the termination in the playground, with rainy sweats on his head. But he can not stop and continue to run forwards, obviously, he know that it does not mean that he has completely succeed, ahead of him there will still be a long way to go.
Clearly, the drawer, through the picture, aims at revealing to us such a opinion that whatever things people are engaged in, always, exist as a course and striving for grand ambitions should not be put to an end. As the title goes, termination just signals a newer scratch.
We can take as one example the economic development of our country. We, as is known to all the world, have experienced such large amounts of changes in the previous twenties years, as GDP’s ever-lasting increase and people’ living standards’ drastic improvement. Faced with these honorable achievements, however, our government again lay down new planning for agriculture and industry. Another case in point is that we, like the two little trees in the picture, today participate the test of graduate admission with a purpose of furthering our tomorrow’s studies. Entering graduate’s education is not the eventual aim, but a new beginning of a longer journey. Only if we persevere to work hard and go all out to do everything we like to do, in a lifetime, will we be successful persons.
评分:10分(5)11分(6)
评语:基本切题,句子结构与用词有许多错误,其中一些是严重错误。

(7)
        The place of end point is also the starting point. From the picture, we can see a young man who is running toward the end point, it’s very clearly to show that everyone of us must effect and can’t stop for the aim of us in the fierce competition society. As we all know, firstly, a young man who study and work in he modern society need have a spirit of to study hard and activity, to keep a good situation and position.
        For instance, this year is my ninth year after when I graduated, after nine years, I’m always feeling need to continue study to improve my knowledge of major. because, this society developing is so rapidly, if I can’t catch more knowledge of now about my major, I will can’t keep the continous developing society. So I think, personally, It’s like the sportman of the picture that only continue to run and effort toward the place of end point, that is necessary to young people in the society.
        In summary, my final conclusion is only t continue running toward end place and the place is also a new starting for another aim, only so. It’s a spirit of all young people. although the road is very hardship. but this is very important to us.

(8)
As is known to all people should never give up hard working. Just like a drawing has told us. In the drawing, there is a runner who has reached the end, but he doesn’t stop, he is keeping on running. The runner doesn’t have a rest because of he knows the end is also the new being.
Different people, however, have different opinions on whether we should keep on running or have a rest at the end of a job. Some people think we should keep on running, because the end is also the new being. In their opinion if one want to be a successor must always works hard. Others think we won’t keep on running, we should take a rest. In their opinion they can’t do a painswork. To my view, I think the end is also the new being, we must do our best to keep on running, working. For example, Chinese people has fight against SARS for several months, and we got a stage success, but we shouldn’t have a rest, because if we don’t take care of SARS and if we don’t keep on working hard, perhaps we will be ill again.
As far as I am concend, I think we should keep on running at the end becase the end is also the new being, and I believe if we want to be success keep on running is both soundable and well-grounted.
评分:6分(7)8分(8)
评语:基本包括题目所要求的内容,但条理不清,语言错误很多,其中多数是严重错误。
(9)
        The runner get to the end of the run-way but he get to the began of the run-way too.
        The over is the begain, it is not meaning that the begain is not according the end. The begain is wew level’s begain. It means that the other thing begainin to do.
        The thing must go to the other begain of one the begain. The success must base on the other success, if not, the world would not develop.
        To me, it is this sureacion.
        I have finished minlity school, it is the end, but I begain to study, university lass, it is the begain. I begain to study university class is base on that having finished the minling school class.
        If not, I can’t study university class.
        The begain is new begain.
(10)
it can be seen from the above picture that a body is running in the playgount, and his right foot is on a line. At the right od line is written end, and at the left of the line is written beginning. And there is no sign that he want to stop.
One line is the end of one thing and also is the beginning of the other thing. In my opinion, there is the meaing of the picture that things are again to again. We complicated something, the other is start.
There are many in point case about this. When we completed the middle school, we need a beginning of the university. When we completed the work of one source, it is time to beginning of do other source. Because the before source is the base of the ofter source. There is no end in the world, you must run again and again, that is the meaning of life. life can ofters a thougsand chances that is one beginning of something, but you have to do is to come to the end of another things.
评分:2分(9)4分(10)
评语:思想混乱,支离破碎,语句不通,错误百出,只有个别词可理解。
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