（转）【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（第一期）

When asked about the phenomenon that more and more people like surfing the internet , most people say it is of importance to learn useful things, but many other people regard it as a waste of time. I personally think that Internet is a two-edge swored!

当被问及有关美国总统比尔克林顿的那场正在进行的喧嚣的讨论，大多数人认为那是一个单纯的私人问题，但是另外有许多人认为他的行为值得谴责。我个人认为总统的犯了值得弹劾的罪行


when asked  sbout  students in minddle school going to surfing too much  ,some  people may say young people shoud study new things as many as possible,many other people regard this as waste time.I personaly think we shoud limit  the  time spending on going to surfing .

当被问及有关美国总统比尔克林顿的那场正在进行的喧嚣的讨论，大多数人认为那是一个单纯的私人问题，但是另外有许多人认为他的行为值得谴责。我个人认为总统的犯了值得弹劾的罪行


when asked  sbout  students in minddle school going to surfing too much  ,some  people may say young people shoud study new things as many as possible,many other people regard this as waste time.I personaly think we shoud limit  the  time spending on going to surfing .

当被问及有关美国总统比尔克林顿的那场正在进行的喧嚣的讨论，大多数人认为那是一个单纯的私人问题，但是另外有许多人认为他的行为值得谴责。我个人认为总统的犯了值得弹劾的罪行


when asked  sbout  students in minddle school going to surfing too much  ,some  people may say young people shoud study new things as many as possible,many other people regard this as waste time.I personaly think we shoud limit  the  time spending on going to surfing .

当被问及有关美国总统比尔克林顿的那场正在进行的喧嚣的讨论，大多数人认为那是一个单纯的私人问题，但是另外有许多人认为他的行为值得谴责。我个人认为总统的犯了值得弹劾的罪行


when asked  sbout  students in minddle school going to surfing too much  ,some  people may say young people shoud study new things as many as possible,many other people regard this as waste time.I personaly think we shoud limit  the  time spending on going to surfing .

当被问及有关美国总统比尔克林顿的那场正在进行的喧嚣的讨论，大多数人认为那是一个单纯的私人问题，但是另外有许多人认为他的行为值得谴责。我个人认为总统的犯了值得弹劾的罪行


when asked  sbout  students in minddle school going to surfing too much  ,some  people may say young people shoud study new things as many as possible,many other people regard this as waste time.I personaly think we shoud limit  the  time spending on going to surfing .

当被问及有关美国总统比尔克林顿的那场正在进行的喧嚣的讨论，大多数人认为那是一个单纯的私人问题，但是另外有许多人认为他的行为值得谴责。我个人认为总统的犯了值得弹劾的罪行


when asked  sbout  students in minddle school going to surfing too much  ,some  people may say young people shoud study new things as many as possible,many other people regard this as waste time.I personaly think we shoud limit  the  time spending on going to surfing .

when asked  about the  passion on suffering on line,most people say  it  is impostance to collect usreful information ,but many other people regard  it as waste of time .i personally think every coin has two sides,so does internert.
稍微改了几个单词，水平有点汗，包涵包涵

When asked about surf the internet,most people say it will cost a large of valuable time
But many other people regard internet as a significant way to know what had happened outside
I personally think both side has something right but we must maxmum the health influence

非常感兴趣！\\(^o^)/~
请问楼主，兄弟们造的句子哪位高人帮忙修改啊？要是写错了，修改也出点小问题，不会形成一错再错的恶性循环吗？