（转）【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（第六期）

2.越来越多的人通过互联网进入了“信息时代”，针对这种现象，有些人认为i互联网移除了人与人交往的障碍，为人们提供了一个和即时的和世界交流的方式。但是他们有没有注意到，快速发展的信息技术已经导致对人们隐私权的侵犯了呢？
2.An increasing number of people are using  car.In reaction to the phenomenon ,some say the car  has convenience people\'s live and shorter the distance between two place.But do they realize that too much  cars  can lead to environmental pollution?
5.Most people  are of the pinion that wealth provide solutions to every problems .But inspite of the materal benefits wealth provide ,i believe  that one should abandon  the pursuit  of materialism and  instead concentrate of pursuit of happiness.

为什么第6期没有奖励

谢谢楼主提供的这么好的信息与资料
而且具有联系性~非常感谢
不过也希望大家认真看完哦~

1.越来越多的人通过互联网加入信息时代。针对这一现象，有人说互联网扫清了障碍，为人们提供了与世界即时链接的途径。但他们有没有意识到快速发展的信息技术业也能侵犯隐私？
2.Most  of   people   are   of   the   opinion   that  wealth  provides    solutions   to    all   problems.But  in  spite  of  materialism benifits  that wealth  provides, one  should  abandon  pursuits  of   materialism  and   instead  concentrate   on   the   pursuit  of   happiness

2越来越多的人通过互联网加入信息时代,针对这个现象,一些人手互联网消除了障碍,为人们提供了我世界连同的通道,但是他们认识到信息技术的告诉发展也导致了侵犯隐私.

翻译        越来越多的人认为通过互联网可以进入信息时代。对于这个现象有多种反应，一些人说互联网消除了许多障碍，为人们提供了了解世界的直接通道。但是，他们也意识到快速发展的信息技术也侵犯个人隐私。

越来越多的人太难通过因特网加入到“信息时代”里来。对这种现象的反映，一些人认为因特网扫出来障碍，并且为人们提供了通向世界的快速通道。但是他们发现快速发展的信息科技也可以导致侵犯隐私么？
3. A increasing number people are arguing  wether the computer should be widly spread to the fundemental school. In reaction to this  phenomen, some say that  computer played a significant roly in obtain wild range of  knowledge .But  do they raelize that  induldged in computer can also lead to the loose of self control  and lead to a negtive  consequence .   
Most people considered that  property is the  mean which can handle all  kinds of  problem. However, as my stand view,  although  wealth prove the  material  beneficial , men should abandon pursuting the materialism and resove to  concentrate to  pursuit the happiness.

2,英译中
An increasing number of people are joining the \" Information Age \" via the Internet . In reaction to the phenomenon , some say the Internet has removed barriers and provided people with immediate access to the world . But do they realize that rapidly advancing information technology can also lead to intrusions of privacy ?
越来越多的人通过互联网进入了\"信息时代\",对于这一现象,一些人认为互联网清除了障碍,提供给人们与世界即时连接的通道,当是,他们有认识到迅速发展的信息技术也能导致隐私的侵犯?

3,句型学习

An  increasing  number of people are .....
In  reaction to the phenomenon ,some say ....
But do they realize that ....can also lead to .....

4,造句
An increasing number of people are  rushing into the city  from  villages .In reaction to the phenomenon ,some say that  dose a lot of benefits to urban  infrastructure projects.But do they realise that  too many migrant  workers can also lead to the  population expansion  in the city and  the lack of the  talents in the  rural construction.

5,复习

Most people are of the opinion that  wealth provided solutions to all problems.But  in spite of the  material benefits wealth provides,I believe one should abandon the pursuit of the materialism and instead concentrate on the pursuit of happiness.

[ 本帖最后由 smilesky620 于 2008-11-8 11:33 编辑 ]

挺想通过翻译提高的，但感觉颜色太乱了。呵呵。

草稿本
越来越多的人正通过网络进入信息年代。根据其反应的现象，一些人说网络已经消除了障碍，提供给人们直接进入世界交流的途径。但是他们真的意识到了信息技术快速的发展可能导致个人隐私被侵犯？
An increasing number people are joining the ranks of idol worship ..In reaction to the phenomenon ,some say their idol imaging a kind fashion . But do they realize that passionate idol worship can also lead to mental lack .
前期翻译：
Most people was of the opinion that wealth provides solutions to all problms .But in spite of material benefits wealth provides,I believe one should abandon the pursuit of materialism and instead concentrate on the pursuit of happiness.
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