（转）【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（第十三期）

第一期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-322828-1-1.html
第二期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-323211-1-1.html
第三期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-323609-1-1.html
第四期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-324155-1-1.html
第五期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-324663-1-1.html
第六期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-324886-1-1.html
第七期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-325420-1-1.html
第八期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-325772-1-1.html
第九期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-326154-1-1.html
第十期的链接地址： http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-326660-1-1.html
第十一期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327038-1-1.html
第十二期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327411-1-1.html
第十三期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327599-1-1.html
前十三期小结，见附件：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327616-1-1.html
14期：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327934-1-1.html

1.从四楼开始对前一楼的习作进行批改，建议大家使用“引用”格式，并将前一楼的错误用“颜色”标出
2.英译中
Perhaps it is time to reexamine the idea that college degrees are a guarantee of intelligence .

答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉

（也许现在是应该重新考虑以大学学位为智力的保证这种想法的时候了。 ）
3.学习以下句型，要铭记于心啊！
Perhaps it is time to reexamine the idea that ...
4.使用3给出的句型，写一段句子，题材不限
5.复习前一期：
中译英：
历史上，人口过剩的问题从来没有比现在更加突出。
答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
(Never before in history has the issue of overpopulation been more evident than now .)
6.把给出要求仿写的句子背诵下啦，下一期会要求大家中译英哦～



笔记:这一句型中有2个闪光词汇,分别是
1. Perhaps,用在句首,表示自己的观点,使语气不那么绝对.

2.大家知道重新检查,重新审视该怎么说了吧!对,就是reexamine.它还有复试的意思.
希望大家能多记忆一下这种精彩词汇,把简单词汇升级喔.

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今天推荐的歌，是owl city的the saltwater room，一首很不错的英伦曲风的歌，听得很舒服。owl city在写这首歌的时候才大二哦~~一男一女的组合，声音很好听。
附上歌词，权当英语学习！

I opened my eyes last night and saw you in the low light
Walking down by the bay, on the shore, staring up at the planes that aren’t there anymore
I was feeling the night grow old and you were looking so cold
Like an introvert, I drew my over shirt
Around my arms and began to shiver violently before
You happened to look and see the tunnels all around me
Running into the dark underground
All the subways around create a great sound
To my motion fatigue: farewell
With your ear to a seashell
You can hear the waves in underwater caves
As if you actually were inside a saltwater room

Time together is just never quite enough
When you and I are alone, I’ve never felt so at home
What will it take to make or break this hint of love
We need time, only time
When we’re apart whatever are you thinking of?
If this is what I call home, why does it feel so alone?
So tell me darling, do you wish we’d fall in love?
All the time, All the time...

Can you believe that the crew has gone and wouldn’t let me sign on?
All my islands have sunk in the deep, so I can hardly relax or even oversleep
I feel as if I were home some nights when we count all the ship lights
I guess I’ll never know why sparrows love the snow
We’ll turn off all of the lights and set this ballroom aglow

[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-10-21 13:55 编辑 ]

2、也许是时候重新审视大学学历是否真的是智慧的象征了。
3、Perhaps it is time to reexamine the idea that college degrees are a guarantee of intelligence.
4、造句
Perhaps it is time to reexamine the idea that wealth are a guarantee of happiness.
请教：wealth后面是用is还是用are啊？
5、复习
Never before in history has the issue on overpopulation evident than now.
昨天的功课没做好，认罚

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原帖由 duxingruoshui 于 2008-10-20 12:07 PM 发表
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这是干啥呢?

今天好早啊

交上作业
Perhaps it is time to reexamine the idea that this year’s graduates are short of the capacity for work.

个人觉得wealth后面是用is,感觉而已，哪位高人讲解一下。

也许该是重新审视大学学位证书是智力保证的观点了。

Perhaps it is the time reexamine the idea that the resource  in the planet will never been used out .

Never before in history has the issue of overpopulation been more evident  than now.
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wealth 是不可数名词

谢谢版主
记住了

谢谢王子[s:4]

歌好好听啊
很清新
好像感觉到海风了[s:7]