（转）【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（第十四期）

ksljy122 · 发表于 08-10-21 19:57:16

今天落后面了
句型是越来越精炼啦
A growing number of people are beginning to realize that salary is not the sole prerequisite for work.

ksljy122 · 发表于 08-10-21 19:58:15

还有谢谢楼主和版主推荐的歌曲哦，很喜欢

longman · 发表于 08-10-21 20:01:14

A growing number of people are beginning realize that test is not sole prerequisite for education

loubin · 发表于 08-10-21 22:16:34

xiexielea

tangshufang · 发表于 08-10-21 22:19:11

个人看法啊，study well 是动词性短语。它作主语，一定要是不定式，或者ing形式。建议用名词性短语作主语：比如high scores——高分不是衡量好学生的唯一先决条件。[s:3]

ksljy122 · 发表于 08-10-22 01:32:37

楼主好认真哦
我也发现咯
study要加ing啦，不过study well用的有点普通，我更倾向于楼主建议的high scores

xjyy · 发表于 08-10-22 08:27:55

越来越多的人开始认识到财富并不是快乐的唯一先决条件。

A growing number of people are beginning to realize that wealt is not the sole prerequisite for prosperity.

Perhaps it is time to reexamine the idea that college degrees are a guarantee of intelligence .

guoguogtj · 发表于 08-10-22 12:32:03

这样的话偶再重新来一个！以改正错误好了

A growing number of people are beginning to realize that the first impression is not the sole prerequisite for judging a person who is good or not.

等候审判。。

edoling · 发表于 08-10-22 13:04:47

越来越多的人开始认识到财富不是幸福的唯一前提
A growing number of people are beginning to realize that learning the words is not the sole prerequisite for learning English.

taishan5211 · 发表于 08-10-22 14:12:38

太感谢了！

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（转）【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（第十四期）

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