好了,下一楼开始正题作者: 海豚宝贝 时间: 08-11-15 17:23
Part B
Directions:
In the following article, some sentences have been removed. For Questions 41—45, choose the most suitable one from the list A-G to fit into each of the numbered blanks. There are two extra choices, which do not fit in any of the blanks. Mark your answers on ANSWER SHEET 1. (10 points)
The time for sharpening pencils, arranging your desk, and doing almost anything else instead of writing has ended. The first draft will appear on the page only if you stop avoiding the inevitable and sit, stand up, or lie down to write. (41)…………
Be flexible. Your outline should smoothly conduct you from one point to the next, but do not permit it to railroad you. If a relevant and important idea occurs to you now, work it into the draft. (42) …………Grammar, punctuation, and spelling can wait until you revise. Concentrate on what you are saying. Good writing most often occurs when you are in hot pursuit of an idea rather than in a nervous search for errors.
(43) ……………… Your pages will be easier to keep track of that way, and, if you have to clip a paragraph to place it elsewhere, you will not lose any writing on the other side.
If you are working on a word processor, you can take advantage of its capacity to make additions and deletions as well as move entire paragraphs by making just a few simple keyboard commands. Some software programs can also check spelling and certain grammatical elements in your writing. (44)……………… These printouts are also easier to read than the screen when you work on revisions.
Once you have a first draft on paper, you can delete material that is unrelated to your thesis and add material necessary to illustrate your points and make your paper convincing. The student who wrote “The A & P as a State of Mind” wisely dropped a paragraph that questioned whether Sammy displays chauvinistic attitudes toward women. (45)………………
Remember that your initial draft is only that. You should go through the paper many times – and then again – working to substantiate and clarify your ideas. You may even end up with several entire versions of the paper. Rewrite. The sentences within each paragraph should be related to a single topic. Transitions should connect one paragraph to the next so that there are no abrupt or confusing shifts. Awkward or wordy phrasing or unclear sentences and paragraphs should be mercilessly poked and prodded into shape.
[A] To make revising easier, leave wide margins and extra space between lines so that you can easily add words, sentences, and corrections. Write on only one side of the paper.
[b) After you have clearly and adequately developed the body of your paper, pay particular attention to the introductory and concluding paragraphs. It’s probably best to write the introduction last, after you know precisely what you are introducing. Concluding paragraphs demand equal attention because they leave the reader with a final impression.
[C] It’s worth remembering, however, that though a clean copy fresh off a printer may look terrific, it will read only as well as the thinking and writing that have gone into it. Many writers prudently store their data on disks and print their pages each time they finish a draft to avoid losing any material because of power failures or other problems.
[D] It makes no difference how you write, just so you do. Now that you have developed a topic into a tentative thesis, you can assemble your notes and begin to flesh out whatever outline you have made.
[E] Although this is an interesting issue, it has nothing to do with the thesis, which explains how the setting influences Sammy’s decision to quit his job. Instead of including that paragraph, she added one that described Lengel’s crabbed response to the girls so that she could lead up to the A & P “policy” he enforces.
[F] In the final paragraph about the significance of the setting in “A & P,” the student brings together the reasons Sammy quit his job by referring to his refusal to accept Lengel’s store policies.
[G] By using the first draft as a means of thinking about what you want to say, you will very likely discover more than your notes originally suggested. Plenty of good writers don’t use outlines at all but discover ordering principles as they write. Do not attempt to compose a perfectly correct draft the first time around.作者: 海豚宝贝 时间: 08-11-15 17:26
相信大家看过很多的辅导班或者攻略,上面都会说要注意看首尾呼应,做这样的题就会很简单。不用全文都看完,不用担心时间不够。
我不知道大家看到这样的说法的时候是什么感觉,不过我当时考研的时候可能也是对方法思考得不够多,所以还是全文读完了才选的,因为总觉得只看首尾句的话,还是觉得心里不够踏实的。可能现在有很多人有这样的想法。
在这里我们就看看这样的首尾呼应的方法是否可行,是否有效,怎样使用。海豚在这里说的方法,我希望大家不要误会,这个方法是正确的习惯而已,并不是所谓的捷径或者是做题的技巧。海豚是一个崇尚踏实学习的人,呵呵。
下面我们首先要做的工作就是通篇找一下文章每一段的头和尾,还有选项的前一句和后一句说了什么。
这样做题的时候再来看看是不是前后意思相连接,以此来判断答案是哪一个。作者: 海豚宝贝 时间: 08-11-15 17:36
The time for sharpening pencils, arranging your desk, and doing almost anything else instead of writing has ended. The first draft will appear on the page only if you stop avoiding the inevitable and sit, stand up, or lie down to write. (41)……………………
Be flexible.
第一遍的草稿会出现在纸上,坐着、站着、躺着。
灵活一些。
作者: liying22 时间: 08-11-15 17:44
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Be flexible. Your outline should smoothly conduct you from one point to the next, but do not permit it to railroad you. If a relevant and important idea occurs to you now, work it into the draft. (42) ……………………Grammar, punctuation, and spelling can wait until you revise.
把它写在你的草稿上
语法、标点还有拼写都是可以等到你修改的时候再看的。
以上两个就是42空的头和尾。
在这里我们看到42题的前后是有关系的,都和写草稿有关。说明42题的答案,一定要首尾句都和这两句能衔接得上,才能成为正确答案。
学校居然web检测害我突然断网,只能重新写作者: 海豚宝贝 时间: 08-11-15 17:54
Concentrate on what you are saying. Good writing most often occurs when you are in hot pursuit of an idea rather than in a nervous search for errors.
(43) ………………Your pages will be easier to keep track of that way, and, if you have to clip a paragraph to place it elsewhere, you will not lose any writing on the other side.
好的文章通常出现在……
这样能时刻注意你的文章的动向
If you are working on a word processor, you can take advantage of its capacity to make additions and deletions as well as move entire paragraphs by making just a few simple keyboard commands. Some software programs can also check spelling and certain grammatical elements in your writing. (44) ……………………These printouts are also easier to read than the screen when you work on revisions.
有的软件可以检查你文章离的拼写和语法是否正确
打印出来的东西比在屏幕上看更容易。
44题的首尾句好像没有什么联系。一会儿44题的答案有可能是衔接首尾的,也有可能是只和其中一句有关的。作者: 海豚宝贝 时间: 08-11-15 17:58
Once you have a first draft on paper, you can delete material that is unrelated to your thesis and add material necessary to illustrate your points and make your paper convincing. The student who wrote “The A & P as a State of Mind” wisely dropped a paragraph that questioned whether Sammy displays chauvinistic attitudes toward women. (45)………………
Remember that your initial draft is only that.后面还有一些内容,我们就不看了。
学生很明智的删除了一段
记住你的初稿只是这样而已。
作者: 海豚宝贝 时间: 08-11-15 18:00
文章看完了,我们该看一下选项了。
知道文章大概说什么了吗?
其实看得囫囵吞枣,海豚也不知道这篇文章具体说的是什么,不过我们知道和写文章的稿子、草稿有关,对不对?
好了,看选项吧,一共7个作者: dilixat 时间: 08-11-15 18:00
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[A]To make revising easier, leave wide margins and extra space between lines so that you can easily add words, sentences, and corrections. Write on only one side of the paper.
为了使检查更容易,留出宽的边页或者行距
只在纸的一面写。作者: 海豚宝贝 时间: 08-11-15 18:02
[b After you have clearly and adequately developed the body of your paper, pay particular attention to the introductory and concluding paragraphs. It’s probably best to write the introduction last, after you know precisely what you are introducing. Concluding paragraphs demand equal attention because they leave the reader with a final impression.
当文章的主题清晰完整的整理好以后,需要注意引言和结尾。
结尾段需要平等的关注作者: l8424123 时间: 08-11-15 18:03
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[C]It’s worth remembering, however, that though a clean copy fresh off a printer may look terrific, it will read only as well as the thinking and writing that have gone into it. Many writers prudently store their data on disks and print their pages each time they finish a draft to avoid losing any material because of power failures or other problems.
值得回忆的是
存储他们的数据在磁盘上并打印出来,一次避免数据丢失作者: jsfcn 时间: 08-11-15 18:05
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[D]It makes no difference how you write, just so you do. Now that you have developed a topic into a tentative thesis, you can assemble your notes and begin to flesh out whatever outline you have made.
你怎样写都没关系
整理笔记和充实作者: 海豚宝贝 时间: 08-11-15 18:07
[E]Although this is an interesting issue, it has nothing to do with the thesis, which explains how the setting influences Sammy’s decision to quit his job. Instead of including that paragraph, she added one that described Lengel’s crabbed response to the girls so that she could lead up to the A & P “policy” he enforces.
尽管这个话题很有意思,它和主题没有关系(哪个话题?里面学生删掉的那一个吗?)
他强调the A & P 政策作者: 海豚宝贝 时间: 08-11-15 18:09
[F]In the final paragraph about the significance of the setting in “A & P,” the student brings together the reasons Sammy quit his job by referring to his refusal to accept Lengel’s store policies.
在关于XXX的重要的最后一段中
sammy拒绝了别人的请求作者: ck0098 时间: 08-11-15 18:09
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[G]By using the first draft as a means of thinking about what you want to say, you will very likely discover more than your notes originally suggested. Plenty of good writers don’t use outlines at all but discover ordering principles as they write. Do not attempt to compose a perfectly correct draft the first time around.
第一段紧挨41空的句子: The first draft will appear on the page
only if you stop avoiding the inevitable and sit, stand up, or lie down to write. D选项: It makes no difference how you write, just so you do. Now that you have developed a topic into a tentative thesis, you can assemble your notes and begin to flesh out whatever outline you have made. 第二段开头的句子: Be flexible. 作者: 海豚宝贝 时间: 08-11-15 18:18
42题,前面说的是写出草稿,这里可以挂上钩的,好像有B和G两个,我们来看一下后面是否挂上钩了。后面说的是语法等毛病是可以等会儿在修改的。B的最后一句和这句衔接上了吗?“Concluding paragraphs demand equal attention”结尾段需要平等的关注,显然和语法这个没什么关系,都扯到结尾段上了。看G,别想着你的稿子能第一次写就完美,是不是比B更合适?你别想着一次就能写出好东西,语法等小错误是可以留着以后在修改的。
答案是G
Be flexible. Your outline should smoothly conduct you from one point to the next, but do not permit it to railroad you. If a relevant and important idea occurs to you now, work it into the draft.
By using the first draft as a means of thinking about what you want to say, you will very likely discover more than your notes originally suggested. Plenty of good writers don’t use outlines at all but discover ordering principles as they write. Do not attempt to compose a perfectly correct draft the first time around.
Grammar, punctuation, and spelling can wait until you revise. 作者: 海豚宝贝 时间: 08-11-15 18:26 43题,发现43题其实和后一句关系比较大。因为前一句是上一段的了。 看看43题后面说的是“ will be easier to keep track ”,你的文章更容易留下痕迹,也就是你知道你都对你的文章做了哪些改动啊之类的。 那么在选项中哪一个和留下修改文章的痕迹有关呢? 是不是只有A?A说To make revising easier要在书的边页或者行间留距离,这样你可以进行改动。
Good writing most often occurs when you are in hot pursuit of an idea rather than in a nervous search for errors.
To make revising easier, leave wide margins and extra space between lines so that you can easily add words, sentences, and corrections. Write on only one side of the paper.
Your pages will be easier to keep track of that way, and, if you have to clip a paragraph to place it elsewhere, you will not lose any writing on the other side.作者: 海豚宝贝 时间: 08-11-15 18:34 44空前一句说的是有软件可以检查拼写,后一句说的是打印出来更容易看。 好,看看那个选项和软件,或者检查拼写或者和打印有关。 B和C,好像有点关系。 看B具体说的是什么?修改文章,注意引言和结尾。这里好像有一点不同,我们的原文离说的是拼写。 看C,数据存在盘里或者打印出来…… 是不是和44空的后面的打印出来的更容易看,相呼应了? 答案就是C
[B After you have clearly and adequately developed the body of your paper, pay particular attention to the introductory and concluding paragraphs. It’s probably best to write the introduction last, after you know precisely what you are introducing. Concluding paragraphs demand equal attention because they leave the reader with a final impression.
Some software programs can also check spelling and certain grammatical elements in your writing.
It’s worth remembering, however, that though a clean copy fresh off a printer may look terrific, it will read only as well as the thinking and writing that have gone into it. Many writers prudently 。store their data on disks and print their pages each time they finish a draft to avoid losing any material because of power failures or other problems.
These printouts are also easier to read than the screen when you work on revisions.作者: 海豚宝贝 时间: 08-11-15 18:44
45题
前一句说的是和学生删除某一段有关,那么我们就找和这个事情有关的选项来对比。
有E和F,虽然这件事很有趣(E),在最后一段(F)
从这里我们可以看出,E是已经通过上一个事例开始讲作者引用事例的目的了
而F还在说这个事例。
看看45题的后面说“Remember that your initial draft is only that.”初稿只是这样而已,这说明上一段是已经讲了一个道理了,这一句是总结。
那45题就不可能是继续讲故事了,应该是对故事展开讨论了。
所以45题应该选E
[E] Although this is an interesting issue, it has nothing to do with the thesis, which explains how the setting influences Sammy’s decision to quit his job. Instead of including that paragraph, she added one that described Lengel’s crabbed response to the girls so that she could lead up to the A & P “policy” he enforces.
[F] In the final paragraph about the significance of the setting in “A & P,” the student brings together the reasons Sammy quit his job by referring to his refusal to accept Lengel’s store policies.
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The student who wrote “The A & P as a State of Mind” wisely dropped a paragraph that questioned whether Sammy displays chauvinistic attitudes toward women.
Although this is an interesting issue, it has nothing to do with the thesis, which explains how the setting influences Sammy’s decision to quit his job. Instead of including that paragraph, she added one that described Lengel’s crabbed response to the girls so that she could lead up to the A & P “policy” he enforces.