张剑 曾鸣《考研英语最后冲刺8套题》答疑专贴（已经开始作文修改了）

模拟3
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a student in Beijing university. I am now writing this letter to ask for some information about continuing my graduate study at your school.
I major in bridge design, in addition to required courses of my major, I take an active part in school life. I shall be obliged if you kindly tell me what is need to offer to apply for your university. And I want to know how many overseas students in your school. My complete resume is attached.
Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming

So vivid and thought-provoking is this extraordinary picture that we are tempted to take another close look and we find a boy’s hand in a computer screen. He need someone who can help him to far away Net surf. It can easily be seen that it is dangerous and harmful get into habit to Net.
There are many reasons to explain that drown in the web sea is harmful and the following are the typical ones. The first reason is that if a man takes a lot of time in Internet, he have no energy to do other things. It will result in he can’t pass exams. The second reason is that because some people get into the habit to Net, he can’t tell which is true between real word and Net word.
According is imperative for us to take concerned measures. First and foremost it is essential that the rules should be worked out to limit the young people to enter the public Net-bar. In addition, we should improve the awareness of people that it is important to have a good Net environment. The last but not the least the media should play a positive role in helping people have other recreation.

谢谢楼主

thank you !

thank you !

模拟七
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to recommend my foreign teacher, Bernard E.Hill, for your positon which is advertised in your website.

There are several reasons why I reconmmend him. First of all, as his student, I am confidence of his teaching English abilities and he is greatly responsible for everthing which he does. What’s more, he possesses rich experience and special methods on teaching English. In additon, he is a English man and speak oral English standards. So I think he is the person who you are looking for.

Thank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon..

Yours sincerely,
Li Ming


As is symbolically depicted in the picture, a man, standing on the top of a stack of inferior product, is blowing a balloon named advertisement. The sight brings about insight into the issue of false advertisement for low-qulify products among people who are concerned about the problem.

Under current circumstances where the rapid and remarkable technology reform brings new concepts into people’s life, perhaps no changes has characterized the past decade than that of advertising for products. It is generally acknowledged that the manufacturers do more advertisement for products,especially defective products. As the increase of people are pleasure to shopping and purchase cheap goods, the manufacturers whose products are unqulified and less famous are willing to spend more money on advertising to attract consumers’ attention. As a result, due to these products, the customers become ill. The milk of SanLu can best exemplify the view mentioned above. As is often reported by media, there are more unreal advertisement in our daily life.

From my perspective, it is imperative for us to take effictive measures. On the one hand, the authorities should make more strict laws and regulations to regulate the advertisment. On the other hand, customers should improve the awareness of d distinguishing false advertisement. Only in this way can we keep health and enjoy happy life.

非常感谢你的辛苦劳动

很好的创意！

怎么没有老师来批改啊！！！！！！！！

第八套大作文
It goes without saying that the drawing aims at revealing a common and serious problem in China: how to be honest in academic activity. Let’s take a closer look at the drawing. A well-dressed young man is cutting something from another book and then adding it to his own paper. A few weeks later, the cheating paper will be published in some well-known journals. As the caption reads, “Yours is also mine”.It is obvious that more and more young people ignore the honesty principle in reseaching activity.
Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking. With the speedy development of society and economy, a vast majority of adolescents are admitted by universities or institutions to pursue a higher degree. Superficially it seems somewhat reasonable, but when weighing in mind, we will find an apparent tendency underlying this phenomenon: the young always feel tired about experiments days and night, so they choose to copy the achievements of others to finish their own papers. This does more harm to the development of the academic and researching activity than to the young themselves.
Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to reverse this disturbing trend. To begin with, relevant regulations must be made to severely punish those who steal others’ achievements. In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of young people that being honest is of utmost significance to us. Only in this way can we make progress in the scientific studies.

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