一起来做几道翻译！（红包，截止到12月3日晚上11点）

一起来做几道翻译吧！只要认真参与，就有考元送上。回帖截止时间：12月3日晚上11点。
这次我们做的是汉译英，与考试的翻译形式正好相反。但，认真地做一下这个练习，对于各位写作文是有点帮助的。

题目：

1，人们普遍认为，孩子在家里的抚养与他们在学校所接受度教育密不可分。
2，简是《纽约日报》的人事科长，在这家报纸里她还负责公共关系方面的特约社论工作。
3，杰克两年前在他妹妹的生日聚会上认识了罗斯。从那以后，他们两人一直通过电子邮件联系。杰克越了解罗斯，就越喜欢她。
4，这个措施不仅有效地为下岗工人提供了就业机会，而且还有效地控制了物价上涨。
5，同样，他们对这一阴谋的政治和经济背景认识得不够充分。
6，大规模的货币投资，一方面满足了经济高速增长的需要，另一方面也造成了通货膨胀。

先占个楼再说

1，人们普遍认为，孩子在家里的抚养与他们在学校所接受度教育密不可分。
Generally speaking,（这个短语的意思是“一般说来”）the child who are raised in family inseparable  with them in school obtain knowledge.
2，简是《纽约日报》的人事科长，在这家报纸里她还负责公共关系方面的特约社论工作。
Jane is the <New York Dairy>affair chief,she also is （语序有问题） responsible  for the public relation in the special work.
3，杰克两年前在他妹妹的生日聚会上认识了罗斯。从那以后，他们两人一直通过电子邮件联系。杰克越了解罗斯，就越喜欢她。
Jack have kown Lucy at his sister\'s birthday party two years ago. From that ,they continuous each other through email.Jack more comprehend Lucy ,more likes her. （你想用the more...the more 句式吧？没用对。）
4，这个措施不仅有效地为下岗工人提供了就业机会，而且还有效地控制了物价上涨。
Not only the measure provided the opportunity for laid-off workers,but also control the price rise.
5，同样，他们对这一阴谋的政治和经济背景认识得不够充分。
Similarly, they kown（这个是什么词） the plot politic and economical background not full enough.
6，大规模的货币投资，一方面满足了经济高速增长的需要，另一方面也造成了通货膨胀。
The vary investment,on the one hand has satisfied economical high speed needs,on the other hand has also created the inflation.

  中国式英语严重，很多句子根本不符合语法，另外一些词语用得不对。我只指出了其中的一小部分，其他部分我也改不好。能够参与这个活动，已经说明你已经有一定实力，而你现在需要做得更好。——笔为剑

[ 本帖最后由 笔为剑 于 2008-12-3 23:20 编辑 ]

layman的翻译：

1，人们普遍认为，孩子在家里的抚养与他们在学校所接受度教育密不可分。
It is generally acknowledged that nurture which children derive at home has tight correlation with education which they receive from school.

2，简是《纽约日报》的人事科长，在这家报纸里她还负责公共关系方面的特约社论工作。
Jane is the personal sectional chief as well as the one who is responsible for special editorial on public relations of NewYork Daily.

1，人们普遍认为，孩子在家里的抚养与他们在学校所接受度教育密不可分。
It \'s generally believed that education/cultivation received by children in school has strong relationship with the their   nurturance at home.
2，简是《纽约日报》的人事科长，在这家报纸里她还负责公共关系方面的特约社论工作。(特约社论怎么翻啊？)
Jane,Newyork daily\'s personnel manager,is also responsible for Public Relations for  special  editorial work
3，杰克两年前在他妹妹的生日聚会上认识了罗斯。从那以后，他们两人一直通过电子邮件联系。杰克越了解罗斯，就越喜欢她。
Jack met rose in her sister\'s birthday party two years ago. they has been contacting by email since then,and as jack knows more about rose,the more he likes this girl.
4，这个措施不仅有效地为下岗工人提供了就业机会，而且还有效地控制了物价上涨。
The measurement would not only provide job opportunities for the unemployed,but also can restrain the ballooning of  market price effectively.
5，同样，他们对这一阴谋的政治和经济背景认识得不够充分。(这句是啥意思啊 没明白 他们对背景认识不充分还是对 政治和**背景不充分的啊)

Tn （这个词是什么？） the same way,they still don\'t get fully acknowledged about the political and  economic backdrop of this conspiracy.
6，大规模的货币投资，一方面满足了经济高速增长的需要，另一方面也造成了通货膨胀。
While on the one hand the large scale of currency investment satisfys（把y改为ie） the requirement of rapid economic growth, it also brings in inflation on the other hand.

翻译得不错！我给你改了两个小错误。虽然还有一些错误，但以我的能力已经不能帮你修改了。——笔为剑

[ 本帖最后由 笔为剑 于 2008-12-3 23:25 编辑 ]

1. it is said that chirdren growing in the home have  deeply acesseries with the education which the student had accepted

2.jane who is the directer of person department in the  News Daily has been engaged about of social article of public relation

3.Two years ago,jack had recogenized rose in his  sister\'s birthday party .From then on,they have  contacted with each other by email.The more he  understand ,the more he likes. （这个句子里为什么不用宾语？——笔为剑）

4.Not only adopting this measure can effectively  provide the enployment opportunities for the idleness  but also control price hike in effect

5.Likewise,the politic and economic context of complot  is identified by them inadequately

6. on the one hand ,The massive currency investment  suffice requirment to increasing economic ,on the  other hand ,it also bring about the inflation

谢谢笔为剑

[ 本帖最后由 笔为剑 于 2008-12-3 23:14 编辑 ]

1.It is generally believed that the upbringing at home has a strong relationship with the education at school.
2.Jane who is the chief of staff of the Newyourk Daily is also responsible for special editorial on public relations of it.
3.Jack met Rose at her sister\'s brithday party two years ago, they kept in touch by e-mail from then on.The more Jack knows  Rose,the more he likes her.
4.This measurement not only offers the chance to work the unemployed man, but also can control the prince inflation.
5.In the same way,they don\'t know the politic and economic context of complot clearly.
6.On one hand the large-scale currenncy investment satisfies the need of economic growth, on the other hand it causes inflation.


本人英文不好，不过快考6级了，也来参与下活动，多多指教

啊哦，原来今天是4号了~

哈哈，过时间了也有奖励，笔哥哥好好~
米有参考答案么？还是回帖的互相参考？

原帖由 princess616 于 2008-12-6 21:31 发表
哈哈，过时间了也有奖励，笔哥哥好好~
米有参考答案么？还是回帖的互相参考？

没答案，就是相互参考。