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蓝希 发表于 08-12-29 22:07:16 | 显示全部楼层 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
[s:5]    鄙人英语水平有限,现在拿出两篇作文来练笔,各位高人百忙中抽出些时间批阅一下 感激不尽。

题目:Directions:
  You are to write an essay according to the following situation within 40 minutes and with no less than 200 words.
  Situation:
  Some people agree that more private automobiles should be encouraged in China. Other people disagree with it. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific examples to support your view.

作文:   
In the past few years ,there was an obvious tendency that the private automobiles came forth everywhere in China,then people in mounting numbers used it as much as possible.However ,this is indeed a problem that we should not neglect any more.
Several factors should account for this problem that has led to encouraged or not.The most direct one is that the more private automobiles comes out,the more pollution and traffic accident it may cause.For example,the green house effect ,part of the reson is that the automobile exhaust emissons .And then,the traffic accident in my city occured fequently everyday.
Then what should we do to prevent the worsning of this problem!This is no easy task ,but some solutions may be very helpful. First of all,we use the bus rather than private auomobiles.Secondly,buy the electric automobile as far as possible. Last but not least,we should be careful to drving in order to take care others lives.
Following these recommendations,we are sure that the future of the private automobiles may be much nicer at all.

小作文题目: Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the editor for the magazine Designs fashions. But now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decision to quit. Write a letter to your boss Mr Wang.
  Telling him your decision stating your reason(s) and make an apology

Dear Mr Wang:
I am grateful to be employed  by you two months ago as an editor for your magazine  Design and Fashions. I appreciate the opportunity of having worked here with you and other colleague .The experiences will be unforgettable throughout my life.
However,as a young man whose primary interest is in psychology rather than design fashions.I find my present job dosen't fall in with my previous training and strength .I therefore decide to quit this job for someting else that may conform to my former preparation.
Please accept my sincere apologize for any inconveniences my leaving may occur.
Yours sincerely
LiMing
用时,一小时。排除找题时间。
沙发
 楼主| 蓝希 发表于 08-12-29 22:42:17 | 显示全部楼层

回复 #2 viewsnake 的帖子

谢谢版主指点。
那个貌似也是个短语。。。
==  我也不清楚了。。。。
板凳
 楼主| 蓝希 发表于 08-12-29 22:46:37 | 显示全部楼层

回复 #8 漠小未 的帖子

晕死。。。
莫同学,我看你比我更搞。。。
不过还是谢谢你哈~~ (*^__^*) 嘻嘻……
==!!! 我看我错的不少啊。。。。
那个worsening 我记得有这个形式,我背得的哪个文章的忘了。。。请核查一下吧。
地板
 楼主| 蓝希 发表于 08-12-29 22:47:56 | 显示全部楼层

回复 #10 漠小未 的帖子

哈哈哈!! 这点你看出来了!!
我必须把心理扯进去!!
5#
 楼主| 蓝希 发表于 08-12-29 22:51:01 | 显示全部楼层

回复 #14 nvzhan 的帖子

哎呀妈呀!!怪哥哥也来了!!
我给你Q你咋不给我回个呀!!
恩。 我第二段不知道怎么写了。就把那几个原因写出来没再加深。。  这点儿是得改。
哎。。。我还是中式英语比较浓厚。。。 真无语了。。。。
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 楼主| 蓝希 发表于 08-12-29 22:52:17 | 显示全部楼层

回复 #11 漠小未 的帖子

同学,你没被无视!你看,你的每个贴我都给你回了。。。
嘿嘿。。。
好好学习哈~~
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 楼主| 蓝希 发表于 08-12-29 23:29:00 | 显示全部楼层

回复 #17 漠小未 的帖子

哼哼哼。。。。
笔版。。。他哪点说得好。。。。你给他加分。。。。
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 楼主| 蓝希 发表于 08-12-29 23:30:29 | 显示全部楼层

回复 #18 k0k0k0k0 的帖子

恩。谢谢默默版主呢~~呵呵
语法错误我得继续改进了。。 要不就死挺惨了。。。
5555555555
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 楼主| 蓝希 发表于 08-12-29 23:50:05 | 显示全部楼层

回复 #21 笔为剑 的帖子

记住了,笔版。偶继续努力。。。
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 楼主| 蓝希 发表于 08-12-29 23:50:52 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 笔为剑 于 2008-12-29 23:37 发表


他那句“不为所动,步步为营。死猪不怕开水烫,更将剩勇追穷寇!!!”说得真好。

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