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宫东风讲考研英语写作与对策(一)
2004-12-24

考研英语写作与对策
宫东风

研究生入学考试英语写作部分占总分的百分之二十,是决定考研英语成绩优劣的重要因素。因此考生需要认真理解领会考研英语写作的每个细节,并且尽快掌握相应的应试对策,以便在考试最后的40分钟能够合理地控制时间,从容地完成较高质量的写作。

一、 大纲对写作的界定与最新评分细则
写作是全国硕士研究生入学考试英语试卷的第四部分。该部分考查考生的书面表达能力。共1题,20分。要求考生根据提示信息写出一篇约200词的短文(标点符号不计算在内)。提示信息的形式有主题句、写作提纲、规定情景、图表等。考生在答题卡上作答。

1. 大纲对写作的界定
《全国硕士研究生入学考试英语考试大纲(非英语考生)》在考试说明部分对写作有如下界定:
考生应能写不同类型的应用文,包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、摘要、报告等,还应能写一般描述性、叙述性和说明或议论性的文章。短文写作时,考生应能:
1) 做到语法、拼写、标点正确、用词恰当;
2) 遵循文章的特定文体格式;
3) 合理组织文章结构,使其内容统一、连贯;
4) 根据写作目的和特定读者,恰当选用语言。

2. 最新考研英语写作具体评分细则
20—17分
内容切题,包括题中所列的各项内容,清楚表达其内涵,文字连贯;句式有变化,句子结构和用词正确。文章长度符合要求。
16—13分
内容切题,包括题中所列的各项内容;比较清楚地表达其内涵,文字基本连贯,句式有一定变化,句子结构和用词无重大错误。文章长度符合要求。
12—9分
内容切题,基本包括题中所列各方面的内容;基本清楚地表达其内涵;句子结构和词有少量错误。文章长度符合要求。
8—5分
内容基本切题,基本包含题中所列各方面的内容;语句可以理解,文章长度基本符合要求。
4—1分 基本按要求写作,但只有少数句子可以理解。
0分 文不切题,语句混乱,无法理解。


二、 考研英语写作的高分标准
考研英语写作的高分标准涉及以下六个方面:
1. 内容切题。审题准、不跑题。文不对题会严重影响成绩,导致写作失败。
2. 表达清楚。语言要简洁、准确、条理清晰,主题明确。
3.
意义连贯。遣词造句得当,表达连贯平稳。论点论据展开合理(以因果、对比、分类、定义、列举、概括、详情、时间、空间、过程或综合等方法来展开)。
4.
句式有变化。采用适当的句式来表达相应的内容。常用句式包括简单句、并列句、复合句、主被动句、长句、短句、否定句、双重否定句、疑问句、反问句、倒装句、强调句、插入语、独立主格成分等。
5.
用词有变化。避免重复使用同一词汇,可适当使用代词、同义词、近义词、关联词使表达富有动感。同义词的使用是衡量考生语言运用能力的一个尺度。
6. 语言规范。符合英语的表达习惯,语法错误少,写出的英语不是中式英语。


三、 历届考研英语写作命题与启示
1. 历届考研英语写作命题总览

考试年代 考试题目 选题范围
1991年 WHERE TO LIVE—IN THE CITY OR THE COUNTRY? 环境
1992年 FOR A BETTER UNDERSTANDING BETWEEN PARENT AND CHILD 人际关系
1993年 ADVERTISEMENT ON TV 传媒
1994年 ON MAKING FRIENDS 人际关系
1995年 THE “PROJECT HOPE” 教育
1996年 GOOD HEALTH 健康
1997年 SOMKING 健康
1998年 BUSINESS PROMISE & GUARANTEE 诚信
1999年 HUMAN POPULATION & WILDLIFE PROTECTION 环境
2000年 WORLD COMMERCIAL FISHING 环境
2001年 LOVE 人际关系
2002年 CULTURE—NATIONAL AND INTERNATIONAL 文化
2003年 YOUTH DEVELOPMENT 教育


2. 历届考研英语写作试题类型
历届考研英语写作试题主要分为以下两大类型:
1) 1991—1996年:给出提纲或开头句的命题写作(writings based on given
outlines or opening sentences)
2) 1997—2003年:给出提纲的图画或图表写作(writings based on visual
information or pictures or graphs)


3. 历届考研英语写作命题的启示
从1991年至2003年共计13年的考题来分析,我们可以对考研英语写作命题有如下认识:
1)
写作题目忌偏忌怪。考研英语写作选题范围都是目前人们最为关注的问题,从子女与父母的关系到健康的重要性,从近年来泛滥的行业“承诺”到世界烟民的现状、从希望工程到电视广告、从环境保护到生物种类趋于灭绝,以及2002年和2003年的考题所涉及的国际文化交流与青少年成材的题目,无不反映了当前社会的热门话题。
2)
文体基本上是说明文和议论文。考这类体裁的写作比较符合形势发展的实际需要。在学习、工作和生活中,人们所书写的材料大多也是说明文或议论文。
3) 出题形式在平稳中逐渐趋于多样化。
4)
写作题目易于理解。写作题目无论以文字的形式还是以图表、图画的形式出现都会浅显易懂。考生不会因题目中出现生词或难以理解的短语而影响正常发挥。


四、 考研英语写作文章的常规整体构建模式
考研英语写作的文章一般包括一个开头段、若干扩展段和一个结尾段。开头段和结尾段一般比扩展段短。各种段落的作用、特点和写作方法如下所示。

1. 开头段
开头段一定要语言精练,并且直接切入主题。开头段一般不对主题进行深入的探讨,具体的论证或叙述应该在扩展段进行。一般在开头段写四、五句即可。考生应注意以下若干要点:
1) 开头段的作用
概括陈述主题,提出观点或论点,表明写作意图。
2) 写开头段时考生应该避免的若干问题
① 开头偏离主题太远;
② 使用抱歉或埋怨之词句;
③ 内容不具体,言之无物;
④ 使用不言自明的陈述。
3) 开头段的表达方法
① 使用引语(use a quotation)
使用一段名人名言,或人们常用的谚语、习语,以确定文章的写作范围和方向。
例:
“Great minds must be ready not only to take the opportunity, but to
make them.” Colton, a great writer once remarked. But it still has a
profound significance now. To a person, in whose lifetime opportunities
are not many, to make opportunities is more essential to his success.

② 使用具体详实的数字或数据(use figures or statistics)
引用一些具体详实的数字或数据,然后作出概括性分析,指明问题的症结所在。
例:
In the past 5 years there has been a marked decline in the number of
young married couples who want to have children, coupled with a growing
trend toward delayed childbearing. According to official statistics, in
2003, about 28 percent of married couples with wives under 35 gave no
birth to children, compared with the 1993 level of 8 percent.

③ 提出问题(ask a question)
提出有争议或探讨性的具体问题,然后加以简要回答或展开引导性简短讨论。
例:
What do you want from your work? Money? Promotions? Interesting
challenges? Continual learning? Work-based friendships? The opportunity to
develop your own idea and potentials? Though we are all individuals and so
our answers will differ, all agree that work provide more than material
things.

④ 给出背景(offer relevant background)
描述具体事件的时间、地点和发生背景等。
例:
Once in a newspaper I read of a crowd of people who remained
appallingly indifferent to the plea of a mother. As she failed to offer the
required amount of cash as a price to save her drowning son, the woman at
last watched her son sink to death. The story is not rare in newspapers
and on TV, and the casualness and detachment our people now have
developed has aroused nationwide concern.

⑤ 定义法(give definition)
针对讨论的主题或问题加以定义,然后进行深入探讨。
例:
Flexibility is defined as being adaptable to change. In the course of
your lifetime, it is essential that you learn to bend and flex around
every new circumstance, as rigidity deprives you of the opportunity to
see new possibilities. Paradigms change over time, and so must you. Your
company may restructure, and you will have to survive. Your spouse may
choose to leave the marriage, and you will have to cope. Technology
will continue to advance and change, and you must constantly learn and
adapt or risk becoming a dinosaur. Flexibility allows you to be ready for
whatever curve lies ahead in life instead of getting blindsided by it.

⑥ 主题句法(use of topic sentence)
文章一开始就以主题句点明全文主题,然后围绕主题内容进行发展。
例:
Now people become increasingly aware of the importance of acquiring a
mastery of a foreign language. To them, the knowledge of a foreign
language, say, English, often means a good opportunity for one’s career,
even a passport to a prosperous future. Many of them equate success in
life with the ability of speaking a foreign language.

4) 开头段的常用核心句型
The arguer may be right about …, but he seems to neglect? (fail) to
mention (take into account) the fact that ….
As opposed to? (Contrary to) widely (commonly / generally) held
(accepted) belief (ideas / views), I believe (argue) that …
Although many people believe that …, I? doubt (wonder)whether the
argument bears much analysis (close examination).
The advantages of B outweigh any benefit we gained from? (carry more
weight than those of / are much greater than) A.
Although it? is commonly (widely / generally) held (felt / accepted /
agreed) that …, it is unlikely to be true that ….
There is an element of truth in this argument? (statement), but it
ignores a deeper and more basic (important / essential) fact (reason) that
….
It is true that (True, / To be sure, / Admittedly,) …, but? this is
not to say (it is unlikely / it doesn’t follow / it doesn’t mean / it
won’t be the case) that ….
The main (obvious / great) problem (flaw /? drawback) with (in) this
argument (view / remark) is that it is ignorant of (blind to) the basic
(bare) fact that ….
It would be possible (natural /? reasonable) to think (believe / take
the view) that …, but it would be absurd (wrong) to claim (argue) that
….
In all the discussion and debate over …,? one important (basic) fact
is generally overlooked (neglected).
There is? absolutely (in fact) no (every) reason for us to believe
(accept / resist / reject) that ….
Logical (Valid / Sound) as this argument and I? wholeheartedly agree
with it, it appears insignificant (absurd) when … is taken into
consideration(account).
To assume (suggest) that … is far from being? proved (to miss the
point).
A close (careful) inspection (examination /? scrutiny) of this argument
would reveal how flimsy (groundless /fallacious) it is.
On the surface (At first thought), it (this) may seem a sound (an?
attractive) suggestion (solution / idea), but careful weighing on the mind
(on closer analysis / on second thought), we find that …
Too much emphasis? placed on (attention paid to / importance attached
to) … may obscure (overlook / neglect) other facts ….
The danger (problem / fact / truth / point) is? that….
What the arguer fails to understand (consider / mention) is that? ….
We don’t have to look very far to see (find out) the truth (validity)
of? this argument (proposition).
However just (logical / sound / valid) this? argument may be, it only
skims the surface of the problem.
Among the most? convincing (important) reasons given (cited / offered /
identified) by people for …, one should be stressed (emphasized /
mentioned).
As far as I am? concerned, however, I believe that ….
I believe that the title statement is? valid because (of) ….
I agree with the above statement because I believe? that ….
Although I appreciate that …, I cannot agree with the title?
statement.
There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of ….? Those who
object to … argue that …. But people who favor …, on the other hand,
argue that….
Currently (In recent years / In the past few years / For many? years
now), there is (has been) a(n) general (widespread / growing / widely
held) feeling towards (concern over / attitude towards / trend towards /
awareness of / realization of / illusion of / belief in)….
Now it is? commonly (widely / generally / increasingly) believed
(thought / held / accepted/ felt / recognized / acknowledged) that …. But I
wonder (doubt) whether ….
These days we are often told that (often hear about) …, but is this?
really the case?


2. 中间段
中间段是文章的正文,其作用是从不同的层面对文章主题进行具体和详实的解释和论证。
1) 中间段的一般特征
① 篇幅一般比开头段和结尾段长。
② 每段有相应的主题句。

包含定义、解释、描写,说明主题思想的扩展句可以采用实例、数据或个人经历等写作手段。
④ 不同种类的段落采用不同的扩展手段。

2) 中间段的具体特点
① 所涉及内容应该准确、清楚,颇具说服力;
② 段落中一定具备主题句;
③ 段落内容应该保持完整、统一,没有说明不足之处或多余冗长的细节;
④ 内容顺序安排合理,逻辑性较强;
⑤ 段落之间连贯自然;
⑥ 段落中讨论的内容主次分明,材料比例适当;
⑦ 词与句型运用合理并且有变化。

3) 中间段展开的基本方法
① 列举法
例文:
There are a number of ways for us to keep fit. First, no matter how
busy we are, we should have exercise every day to strengthen our muscles.
Second, it is important to keep good hours. For example, if we are in
the habit of going to bed early and getting up early, we can avoid
overworking ourselves and get enough sleep. Finally, entertainment is also
necessary so that we may have some moments of relaxation. If we follow
those instruction. We will certainly be in good health.

② 比较对比法
例文:
The older form of communication is speech. In the beginning of human
history, people could only use direct verbal speech to communicate. But
it had many shortcomings. For instance, we could not speak to a person
far away when we needed. So distance was a problem. And the spoken word
could not be kept secret easily. So people wanted to invent a new
method of communication. The next big step forward in communication was the
invention of writing. Writing is one of human being’s most important
inventions. It solved the problem of distance and keeping secrets, but
it too had disadvantages. The written word could not be passed on
quickly, so people tried to find a new quicker method of communication.
The most recent development had been electronic means of communication,
including the wireless telegraph, radio, telephone and television. The
invention and use of electronic means has solved all the problems
mentioned above. They are the most effective methods of communication.
People will certainly try their best to invent even more modem and useful
methods.
沙发
 楼主| pengxiangbiao0 发表于 06-4-5 20:31:51 | 只看该作者
③ 因果法
例文:
The hamburger is the most popular food item in the United States. Every
year Americans consume billions of them. They are sold in expensive
restaurants and in humble diners. They are cooked at home on the kitchen
stove or over a barbecue grill in the backyard. Why are they so popular?
First, a hamburger is extremely easy to prepare. It is nothing more
than a piece of ground beef, cooked for a few minutes. Then it is placed
in a sliced bun. Nothing could be simpler. Even an unskilled cook can
turn out hundreds of them in an hour. Besides that, the simple hamburger
can be varied in many ways. You can melt some cheese on top of the beef
to create a cheeseburger. You can also add some grilled bacon for an
interesting flavor contrast. In addition, you can garnish the hamburger
with other things such as lettuce, tomato, onion, mushrooms, avocado,
pickles, hot pepper, ketchup, relish, mayonnaise, mustard or whatever you
wish!

④ 例证法
例文:
The saying “No pains, no gains” is universally accepted because of
the plain yet philosophical moral it teaches: if one wants to achieve
something, he has to work and tolerate more than others. The saying is
true of any pursuit man seeks. A case in point is boxing. While we heap
cheers on the winner, few happen to imagine that his gold belt is won at
the cost of his sweat, tears, blood, even life over years before the
arrival of that exciting moment.

⑤ 发展过程法
例文:
To build your own sunscope, get a carton and cut a hole in one side,
big enough to poke your head through. Paste white paper on the inside
surface that you will be facing. Then punch a pinhole into the opposite
side high enough so that the little shaft of light will miss your head.
For a sharper image you can make a better pinhole by cutting a one-inch
square hole in the carton, taping a piece of aluminum foil over this
hole, and then making the pin-hole in the foil. Finally, tape the box
shut and cover all light leaks with black tape.

⑥ 定义法
例文:
Diligence is the key to success. It means persistent work and does not
mean that we are to exert ourselves all day and night without rest,
without food and without sleep. The true meaning of diligence is the
careful use of time for the purpose of improvement, or to work persistently
without any waste of time.

⑦ 分类法
例文:
Nowadays the news media mainly consists of radio, television and
newspapers. Each type has its own advantages and disadvantages.
Newspapers are the oldest form for communicating the news. Today many
people still begin their day by reading the morning paper while having
breakfast, and end their day by reading the evening paper while having
dinner.
The invention of the radio has had a tremendous influence on the world.
It is able to bring up-to-minute news to distant places in a matter of
seconds. Thus the development of the radio has made the world a smaller
place.
Television is the most recently developed device for communication. It
allows us to see as well as to hear the news. The fact that it enables
people to see visual images has had a considerable effect on our
perceptions of world event.


4) 中间段的常用核心句型
Although the popular belief is that …, a current? (new / recent) study
(survey / poll / investigation) indicates (shows / demonstrates) that
….
Common sense tells us that ….?
The increase? (change / failure / success) in … mainly (largely /
partly) results from (arises from / is because of) ….
The increase (change / failure / success) in … is? due to (owing to /
attributable to) the fact that ….
Many people would? claim that ….
One may attribute (ascribe / owe) the increase (decrease /? change ) to
…, but … is not by itself an adequate explanation.
One of the? reasons given for … is that ….
What is also worth noticing is that? ….
There are many (different / several /a number of / a variety of)causes?
(reasons) for this dramatic (marked / significant) growth (change /
decline / increase) in …. First, …. Second, …. Finally, ….
There is no evidence to? suggest that….
Why are (is / do / did) …? For one thing, …. For another,? ….
Another reason why I dispute the above statement is that ….?
It? gives rise to (lead to / bring /create) a host of problems
(consequences).
There are numerous reasons why …, and I shall here explore only a few
of? the most important ones.
It will exert (have / produce) profound? (far-reaching / remarkable /
considerable / beneficial / favorable / undesirable / disastrous) effect
(influence) on ….
A multitude of factors could account? for (contribute to / lead to /
result in / influence) the change (increase / decrease / success /
failure / development) in ….
In 2000, it increased? (rose / jumped / shot up) from 5 to 10 percent
of the total (to 15 percent / by 15 percent).
By comparison with 2002, it decreased (dropped / fell) from 10? to 5
percent (to 15 percent / by 15 percent).
It accounts for 15 percent of? the total.
There were 100 traffic accidents in April, an increase of 5? percent in
a five-month period.
By 2002, only (less than / more than /? almost / about / over/ as many
as) three quarters (40 percent of / one out of five / one in four)
college population (graduates / housewives) as against (as compared with)
last year (2002) preferred to (liked) ….
With the? development (improvement / rise / growth / general
recognition / acknowledgement / realization) of …, vast changes awaits this
country’s society.
Now? people in growing (ever-increasing / significant) numbers are
beginning (coming / getting) to believe (realize / recognize / understand /
accept / see / be aware) that ….
According to a(n) recent (new / official) study (survey /? report /
poll), ….
History (Our society) is filled (abounds) with the? examples of ….
The story (case / instance / situation) is not rare? (isolated /
unique), it is one of many examples (typical of dozens).
A? (one) recent (new / general / nationwide) study (survey / poll /
investigation) conducted (taken) at a university by (officials /
scientists / experts) indicates (reveals / suggests / shows / proves /
demonstrates) that ….
According to (As can be seen in / As is shown in) the figures?
(statistics / findings / data / graph / table) released (provided) by the
government (an institute), it can be learned (seen / predicted) that ….
There is (no) good (every / little / sufficient / considerable /
strong)? evidence (proof) to
Personal experience (Examples I heard / read of) leads? me to conclude
that ….
We must admit the undeniable fact that ….?
No? one can deny (ignore / doubt / overlook / obscure / brush aside)
the fact that ….
Experience (Evidence) suggests (shows) that ….?
Take for example …? who (that) ….
The same is true of ….?
As the saying goes,? “….”


3. 结尾段
结尾段的写作方法可以归纳为下列若干种:
1) 总结归纳
简要总结归纳文章要点,以便深化主题印象。
例:
In conclusion I would like to say that change is a problem confronting
most of us today. The changes which have already taken place in every
field of our life are irreversible. Continuation of the growth which has
already begun is inevitable. During this evolution there are great
rewards to be won — by those who are willing to take the opportunities
being offered.

2) 重申主题
再次强调和确定文章开头阐述的中心思想。
例:
Admittedly, science has created atomic bombs and produced pervasive
pollution. But it has transformed the lives of millions of people. It has
multiplied man’s energy, hopes, ambitions and understanding. It has
elevated and will continue to elevate man intellectually and spiritually.

3) 预测展望
立足当前,放眼未来。
例:
It is time that the government should speak out against corruption and
take strong action to punish whoever takes bribes or embezzles fund.
For present official corruption, if permitted to continue, will not only
tarnish the government’s popularity, but lead to its ultimate
downfall.
板凳
 楼主| pengxiangbiao0 发表于 06-4-5 20:32:01 | 只看该作者
4) 提出建议
提出解决问题的途径、方法或呼吁人们采取相应的行动。
例:
College athletics plays such a vital role that it deserves close
attention and persistent effort. It is suggested that physical training
should be regarded as a required course wedged into college curricula,
however crowded it may be, and that a fair share of college budget should be
devoted to athletic programs. We sincerely hope that this suggestion
will be a commitment that all colleges and universities will take up.

5) 提出问题
提出具有发人深省的问题,从而突出中心思想。
例:
Old people may choose to live alone for themselves and even embrace
this living pattern. But in the deep part of their hearts, they must feel
lonely. They need their children to stay with, to talk with, and take
care of them. Why can’t young people think of the days when they are
getting old?

6) 引用格言
用格言、谚语或习语总括全文中心思想。
例:
Many yeas ago, a great philosopher Francis Bacon remarked that
“Knowledge … is power.” This can now be translated into contemporary terms.
In our social setting, “Knowledge is change”—and accelerating
knowledge-acquisition, fueling the great engine of technology, means
accelerating change.

7) 结尾段的核心句型
From what has been discussed above (Taking into account? all these
factors / Judging from all evidence offered), we may safely draw (reach /
come to / arrive at) the conclusion that ….
All the evidence? (analysis) supports (justifies / confirms / warrants
/ points to) a(n) unshakable (unmistakable / sound / just) conclusion
that ….
It is high time? that we place (lay / put) great (special /
considerable) emphasis on the improvement (development / increase / promotion) of
….
It is high time that? we put an end to the deep-seated (unhealthy /
undesirable / deplorable) situation (tendency / phenomenon) of ….
We must look (search / call / cry)? for an immediate action (method /
measure), because the present (current) situation (phenomenon / tendency
/ state / attitude) of …, if permitted (allowed) to continue
(proceed), will surely (certainly) lead to (result in) the end (destruction /
heavy cost) of ….
There is no easy (immediate /? effective) solution (approach / answer /
remedy) to the problem of …, but … might be useful (helpful /
beneficial).
No easy method (solution / recipe /? remedy) can be at hand (found /
guaranteed) to solve (resolve / tackle) the problem of …, but the common
(general / public) recognition of (realization of / awareness of /
commitment to) the necessity (importance / significance) of … might be the
first step towards change (on the right way / in the right direction).
Following these methods (suggestions) may not guarantee the? success in
(solution to)…, but the pay-off will be worth the effort.
Obviously (Clearly / No doubt), if we ignore (are blind to) the
problem,? there is every chance that ….
Unless there is a common realization of? (general commitment to) …, it
is very likely (the chances are good) that ….
There is little doubt (no denying) that serious (special / adequate /?
immediate / further) attention must be called (paid / devoted) to the
problem of ….
It is necessary (essential / fundamental) that effective (quick /?
proper) action (steps /measures / remedies) should be taken to prevent
(correct /check / end / fight) the situation (tendency / phenomenon).
It is hoped? (suggested / recommended) that great (continuous /
persistent / sustained / corporate) efforts should be made to control (check/
halt / promote) the growth (increase / rise) of ….
It is hoped that great efforts should be directed? to (expended on /
focused on) finding (developing / improving) ….
It? remains to be seen whether …, but the prospect (outlook) is not
quite encouraging (that rosy).
Anyhow, wider (more) education (publicity) should? be given to the
possible (potential / grave /serious / pernicious) consequences (effects)
of ….
To reverse (check / control) the trend (tendency) is not a? light task
(an easy job), and it requires (demands / involves / entails) a
different state of mind towards (attitude towards / outlook on) ….
For? these reasons, I strongly recommend that ….
For the reasons given above, I? feel that ….


4. 段落扩展中的常用词语
1) 总结关系过渡词语
generally speaking, generally, as a general rule, in general, on a
larger scale, to take the idea further, to take the above opinion to an
extreme, in a sense, in one sense, in a way, to some extent, in my
opinion, in my view, as for me, as far as I am concerned, obviously,
undoubtedly, in terms of, in conclusion, in short, in brief, in summary, in a
word, on the whole, to sum up, to conclude

2) 比较对比关系过渡词语
similarly, likewise, like, too, equally important, the same as, in
common, in the same way, on the contrary, on the one hand, on the other
hand, otherwise, in sharp contrast, whereas, rather than, conversely,
instead, in/by contrast, but, however, yet, nevertheless

3) 列举关系过渡词语
for example, for instance, as an example, as a case in point, such as,
namely, that is, like, thus, first, second, third, finally, in the
first place, initially, first of all, to begin with, to start with, what is
more, furthermore, eventually, besides, in addition (to that), first
and foremost, last but not least, next, also, moreover, for one thing,
for another

4) 因果关系过渡词语
because (of), as, since, for, owing to, due to, thanks to, on account
of, as a result of, result in (from), consequently, for the reason that,
as a consequence, consequently, if follows that, accordingly,
therefore, hence

5) 让步关系过渡词语
although, even though, after all, in spite of, despite, granted that

6) 强调关系过渡词语
anyway, certainly, surely, obviously, to be sure, especially,
particularly, above all, in deed, in fact, even worse, needless to say, most
important of all, no doubt


五、 考研英语写作程序
由于时间的限制及题型的要求,考生必须遵循一定的写作程序并且合理地分配时间,以便从容地完成较高水平的写作。下面的考研英语写作程序及时间分配,供考生参考并灵活地加以运用。
1. 审题过程(2-3分钟)
所谓“审题”,就是仔细地研究、理解题目,即根据题目所提供的条件和要求,来确定文章的内容、体裁和写法。这一过程直接关系到写作的成败,即是否“切题”。审题应该包含下列四个方面:
1) 审文体
文体是对文章的一种规格要求,不同的文体,在写作上有不同的规格要求。命题作文一般采用议论文文体;规定情景作文通常以描写文、叙述文为主;图表作文通常采用说明文;然而,段首句作文,应视具体内容而定。
2) 审内容
了解题目在内容方面的要求决定写什么,这是审题的关键。
3) 审材料
审查考题在选材范围方面的要求,考题对材料有特定的限制,故考生应在题目限制的范围内选取材料。
简言之,选材的一般要点包含:
① 选择真实的材料;
② 选择典型的材料;
③ 选择鲜活的材料;
④ 选择最能展现主题的材料。
4) 审要求
审查考题在格式、字数、时间、内容等诸多方面的具体要求。
总之,如果审题不当,文章跑题;审题不周,文不切题;审题不全,遗漏重点。因此,考生一定要严把审题关。

2. 构思过程(5-7分钟)
一旦确定了主题,就开始构思选材。选材的思路围绕题目、提示、数据、图形和所给的提纲来进行。考生应从自己所熟悉的素材中筛选出最能表达和说明主题的内容,思路要灵活,想象要丰富,同时要有创新,避免落入写作俗套。在此基础上,草拟出作文提纲,提纲要简明扼要,能抓住段落主题。同时,考生对文章段落展开的方法、过渡句和句型等也要有所考虑。
从历年考研英语写作试题来分析,写作题目大多已给出了基本的提纲或相应的要求。在这种情况下,考生可将给出的提纲扩展成相应的主题句,这样便迅速地拟出了一个详细且完整的写作提纲。
拟出带有主题句的具体提纲,才能围绕主题句构思出要写的内容,选出展现主题的最佳素材,形成一条清楚的写作主线,然后根据主线具体地提出和回答what,
who, when, how, why 等一系列考题规定的问题。

3. 下笔创作过程(20-25分钟)
下笔创作过程即段落的展开,考生要用贴切的词与句将自己的所思所想所感一层层地明确表达出来。
考生要注意以下几点:
1) 段落应有段落的主题,并且段落中所涉及的内容都是为文章主题服务的。
2) 写初稿时要一气呵成,尽量不使用自己没有把握的词语或句型。
3) 在下笔创作的过程中可以适当修改提纲,注意不要脱离主题。
4) 注意利用过渡词和过渡句使句子和段落结构严谨连贯,也使内容更易于展开。

4. 检查与修改过程(3-5分钟)
初稿一定存在着某些不妥之处,故需要最后订正。
首先检查内容是否切题,论点是否明确,论据是否充分,结论是否合理,然后检查语法是否正确,语句是否通顺,用词是否贴切,数字是否准确,表达是否恰当,拼写是否正确,标点是否得当等等。


六、 考研英语写作常见题型
如果考生想在较短的时间内对考研英语写作有所认识、有所突破,首先应该了解考研英语写作常见题型,并弄懂各种题型的写作技巧,然后进行有针对性的练习,并且研读相关范文。考研英语写作中的常见题型如下:

1. 提纲题型写作
1) 写作要点
① 认真研究所给提纲
考生要注意领会提纲的含义,不要遗漏提纲要点或错误理解提纲的意思。
② 确定各段的主题句
考生应根据所给提纲写出各段的主题句,合格的主题句应具备以下四个要点:
?意义完整
主题句结构要完整,即结构符合语法规则;意义要完整,即主题句是一个符合逻辑的完整命题。
?表意清晰 主题句要清晰明确,不使用意思含混的词或句子。
?内容具体 主题句的内容要明确具体,否则不利于段落的拓展。
?用词贴切
主题句一定要用词准确,简明达意,使段落的拓展有一个良好的基础。
③ 逐步展开段落
段落写作应围绕自己列好的主题句进行,在写作过程中可稍加调整。
④ 检查与修改
检查考题所给提纲是否准确且完整地被表达于文章之中,如有偏差,应作出相应的修改。
2) 提纲题型写作试题实例
① 写作题目
Title: THE “PROJECT HOPE”
Outline:
1. Present situation
2. Necessity of the project
3. My suggestion

② 参考范文:

Education plays a very significant role in the modernization of our
country. There are, however, still a large number of school-agers in
remote and isolated rural areas who can’t afford to go to school because of
their financial predicament. This is a very serious problem which needs
to be resolved as soon as possible. Thus, the Chinese authorities have
worked out a plan to assist them financially, which is called “Project
Hope”.
This project, I do believe, is of most importance and necessity. To
begin with, as a developing country, China is unlikely to inject a huge
amount of money in education at present. So education has to turn to the
general public to find its way out. Secondly, with the financial
assistance of the general public, many of the poor children who have dropped
out of school can go back to go on with their schooling. This will, in
turn, contribute a great deal to the expansion of the rural economy in
our remote and isolated rural areas. Apparently, the Project Hope is of
profound significance for the modernization of our country.
As for me, a university student, my suggestions are as follows. In the
first place, our government should encourage more of the public in
cities to finance the project. In addition, it is most necessary to set up
a special foundation to receive the contributions donated by the public
at home and abroad. Last but not least, those in charge of the project
are supposed to make sure that the money is directly sent to the
families whose children have dropped out of school. In short, I am convinced
that the project will be fruitful and successful in the long run. (284
words)


2. 图画题型写作
图画题型写作是较难的题型之一,近两年考研英语写作试题均为图画题型,故考生应该认真对待。面对此类题型,考生应首先确定主题,然后再动笔。
1) 图画题型写作要点

详细查看图画。考生应对图画进行全面而细致的研究,尤其注意图画中人或物(人与物)的体貌表情特征和背景,确定人物之间,人物与背景之间的主要关系,以便正确掌握图画所传达的信息。

如果图画以系列形式(既两幅以上)出现,考生除了掌握每一幅图画的信息,还应该对图画之间的相应联系有所理解,从而在整体上把握图画所传达的信息。

面对图画题型,考生应该展开合理而丰富的联想,用生动而恰当的言辞抒发自己对图画的所思所想所感。

注意图画题型中的文字提示。文字提示非常重要,文字提示通常十分清楚地提供一些写作要点。

草拟提纲,合理组织材料。根据图画内容的不同采用不同的段落发展方式。如果画面内容是以描述为主,即按空间方位或时间先后顺序排列,可采用“开头——扩展——结尾”的写作方式。如果画面内容是以解释说明为主,写作时则先给出主题句,再围绕主题句完成各段落的写作,这是采用“主题句——扩展句——总结句”的写作方式。

系统且突出地展开段落。展开段落要根据画面内容进行,同时也要围绕每一段的主题句进行。

检查与修改。考生应重点检查图画内容是否准确地被表达出来,题目所给提示是否完整地反映在文章之中。如果存在与画面不相符的内容,或未能完全涵盖题目所给提示,考生应对文章做出相应修订。

2) 图画题型写作试题实例

实例1:

① 写作题目
Directions:
Study the pictures carefully and write an essay about 200 words based
on the following:
1. describe the set of drawings and interpret its meaning
2. point out its implications in our life
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