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[ 本帖最后由 笔为剑 于 2009-3-29 17:33 编辑 ]

Love is the foundation of marriage, love marriage is a guarantee。When someone looking for love at the time, ten thousand thousand election pick, always feel that there are other better。However, what finally are of no avail, because in the process of looking for the best missed。With this experience, in dealing with marriage, because of fear will continue to look for a miss, in order to not empty-handed, on a random rather than a poor makeshift。
    Of marriage are a lot of people have this attitude，Casual inappropriate because then married and separated from the other may be a lot of will lead to all kinds of questions，Waste a lot of time at the wrong people。
   Love is beautiful and marriage is heavenly.These are all part of a beautiful life.We should not waste the limited time,our love and marriage should be treated carefully.If you really love a person,marry him,Since there is no marriage as a result love will not last long.If you do not really love that person,do not make him an absolute commitment to marriage,course there is no foundation of love will be very painful marriage.
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原帖由 linjie21 于 2009-3-29 16:43 发表
Love is the foundation of marriage, love（这个词，你放在这里当形容词吗？去掉为好） marriage is a guarantee。When someone looking（这个地方不对，如果用someone就要加个is,或者直接去掉someone这个词）   for love at the time, ten thousand thousand election pick, always feel that there are other（要用复数形式） better。However, what finally are of no avail, because in the process of looking for the best missed（句子不通）。With this experience, in dealing with marriage, because of（because of 后面只能跟名词而不能跟句子） fear will continue to look for a miss, in order to not empty-handed, on a random rather than a poor makeshift（这句话缺少主语） 。
Of（改为In) marriage (加there)are a lot of people have this attitude，Casual inappropriate because then（they) married and separated from the other may be a lot of will lead to all kinds of questions，Waste a lot of time at the wrong people。
Love is beautiful and marriage is heavenly.These are all（用both更好） part（要用复数） of a beautiful life.We should not waste the limited time,our love and marriage should be treated carefully.If you really love a person,marry him,Since there is no marriage as a result love will not last long.If you do not really love that person,do not make him an absolute commitment to marriage,course there is no foundation of love will be very painful marriage.

全文中国式英语严重，语法错误太多。很多地方都不知道该怎么给你改……
不过很高兴看到你能够积极参与讨论交流，给你加分了。希望下次要有进步。

Nowadays, there is a sound voice that it\'s better to marry to a rich man than to have a good job for a girl. Then, a question comes up: what is marriage? Is it a tool for girls to live a good life? If so, what\'s the position of love? In my opinion, love is the foundation of marriage, though not every two persons who love each other can get married, and every girl should and can lead a comfortable life on her own.

We still remember Sister Carrie who aims at living in the upper-class  at the cost of her marriage, leaving her lover and getting married to a wealthy man, but what\'s the result of her story? Of course, she gets the fame and wealth. However, she cannot live happily because she doesn\'t have love any more. So, no matter when and no matter where I will insist that marriage should be on the base of love, otherwise the wedding may mean a start of a terrible life.

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原帖由 mini0112 于 2009-3-29 20:03 发表
你发春了。。。

为嘛是21点结束，俺才回来啊

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