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As presented to us by the cartoon,two disabled men who have only one leg run quite fast by the cooperation. And their crutches are leaved behind them. The line at the bottom reads:helping each other,we can travel.
     What the picture coveys is a meaningful philosophy:the importance of cooperation.the phenomenon is by no means exceptional.Nowadays,With the rapid development of society, the competition in all kinds of industries becomes fiercer and fiercer.we,therefore, must learn to cooperate, to understand the importance of cooperation.
     In order to illustrate the point better,The reasons are chiefly as follows.First of all,Only by cooperating well with others countrys can a country achieve success in the international projects.Secondly, Hardly can anyone achieve success in his career without the assistance of his colleagues and partners.as the cooperation of life will be successful, success is a reflection of cooperation.Last but not least,it is universally acknowledged everyone has disadvantages. They,however,may be hided through the cooperation between each other.Therefore,from what has been mentioned above,we may reasonably draw a conclusion that the cooperation is vital not only to the people but also to the country.we can expect one day when the world is able to progress at peace and in harmony.