考研英语高分作文标志：
1、是否长短句交叉;2、是否会使用插入语;3、用词是否多样、准确、形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词;5、句型使用是否准确、地道。下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项： 1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观地反映事实。句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾的例子：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作为插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词、助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。举例如下： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如第一条的例子中，applicable替换proper; approaches替换ways; implement替换carry out; sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)。下面举一篇某位同学写的优秀作文的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法，精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替换 very;(个人认为替换成overwhelmingly更出彩)thrilling 替换 exciting;sth. exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth;google 替换 search;an army of 替换 a lot of。The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular;Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换 With …;Advancement 替换 development;Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into;Current ( currently )替换 now;Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.;Growing individuals 替换 more and more people;It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的。 (it goes without exaggeration that更好)For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替换 To begin with;We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法;our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动;Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides;Deliver 替换 send。There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型;其次however作为插入语;再次，function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to。Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing );Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词。(直接用 netizen更好)As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides;Computers do play ，使用do 表示强调;Positive 替换 important / good 等;A slice of 替换 a part of;Unfavorable 替换 bad;Impacts 替换 effects / influences;We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入语;Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage ) ;Facet 替换 aspect。好作文是“换”出来的，赶紧替换掉平凡不能再平凡的单词，让你的作文靓起来。 |
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