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      This line graph shows the changes of thenumber of employees during the 12 years in YUTECH IT Services from 1991 to 2003.It indicates that the number increased marginally in the first 7 years and enjoyeda noticeable increase in the next 4 years, finally with a sharp drop in 2002.

         Inthe first 7 years from 1991 to 1998, there is a slight increase in the numberof employees in the number of employees YUTECH IT Services. In 1991, the numberwas stabilized at the number of 120,000, with a steady growth in the next twoyears to the peak at 160,000 at 1994. However, the figure remained constant at160,000 between 1994 and 1995. In spite of some fluctuation in the number inthe next 3 years, there were also around 140,000 employees in YUTECH ITServices

       However in the next 4 years, it rose substantially from 1998 and quicklyreached its highest point of 220,000, at which the number remained constant inthe following two years, and then fell dramatically to the number of 180,000 in2002.

       Overall,we can see noticeably that there is an obvious increase of employees during theyear 1998 to 2000 in YUTECH IT Services, which increased to the peak at 220,000and doubled that of the year 1991. Though the number dropped suddenly to180,000 in the year 2002, it was on an upward trend during the 12 years from1991 to 2003.  

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This line graph shows the changes of the number of employees during the 12 years working in YUTECH IT Services from 1991 to 2003. It indicates that the figure for the employees increases marginally in the first 7 years and then enjoys a noticeable increase in the next 4 years, finally with a sharp decrease in 2002.
        During the first 7 years from 1991 to 1998, there was a slight increase in the number in terms of employees working in YUTECH IT Services. In 1991, the number was stabilized at 120,000, followed by a steady growth in the next two years to the peak at 160,000 in the end of the year 1993. However, the figure remained constant at 160,000 between 1994 and 1995. In spite of some fluctuation of the number during the next 3 years, there were also approximately 140,000 employees in YUTECH IT Services. However in the next 4 years, the year 1998 has witnessed its substantial growth of the number, which quickly reached its highest point of 220,000 in 2000, at which the number remained constant in the following two years, and then fell dramatically to the number of 180,000 in 2002.
        Overall, we can see noticeably that there is an obvious increase of the number of employees during the year 1998 to 2000 in YUTECH IT Services, which increased to the peak at 220,000 and doubled as large as that of the year 1991. Though the number dropped suddenly to 180,000 in the year 2002, it was on an upward trend during the 12 years from 1991 to 2003.  

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This line graph shows the changes of the number of employees working in YUTECH IT Services during 12 years from 1991 to 2003. It indicates that the figure for the employees increases marginally in the first 7 years, which then enjoys a significant growth in the next 4 years and finally comes into a sharp decrease between 2002 and 2003.
During the first 7 years from 1991 to 1998, there was a slight increase in the number in terms of employees working in YUTECH IT Services. In 1991, the number of personnel leveled out at 120, 000, followed by a steady growth in the next two years, which peaked at 160, 000 at the end of the year 1993, then maintaining the same level at 160, 000 between 1994 and 1995. In spite of some fluctuation of the number during the next 3 years, YUTECH IT Services also covered employees at a number of approximately 140, 000 at least and 160, 000 at most.
The situation changed that much throughout the next 4 years. The year 1998 has witnessed its substantial growth of the number of the staff in the company, which quickly reached its highest point of 220, 000 in 2000, at which the figure remained constant in the following two years, and then fell dramatically to 180, 000 in 2002.
Overall, we can see noticeably that there was an obvious increase of the number towards the employees during the year 1998 to 2000 in YUTECH IT Services, which increased to the peak at 220, 000 and doubled as large as that of the year 1991. Though the number dropped suddenly to 180, 000 in the year 2002, it was in some case on an upward trend during the 12 years from 1991 to 2003.

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