对于考研英语，大家经常强调阅读理解的重要性。其实，写作部分也不容忽视，作文能否拿到高分完全可以决定到全局!对于想要冲刺名校，取得高分的同学们，一定要抓住作文。
考研英语作文是英语考试中得分较低的一种题型，究其原因，除了平时缺少练习之外，考生们还缺乏作文抓分技巧。同学们需要掌握一定的作文模板，除此之外，如果能在作文中设置一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定使你的作文如虎添翼。
考研英语高分作文标志：
1、是否长短句交叉;
2、是否会使用插入语;
3、用词是否多样、准确、形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;
4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词;
5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：
1. 适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观地反映事实。句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention shouldbe paid to. ) 举个经典结尾的例子：It is ,therefore, high timethat some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry likethat. By doing so，its competitive edge will besharpened effectively.
2. 善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作为插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如however / therefore/for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词、助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。举例如下： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad ,many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如第一条的例子中，applicable替换proper; approaches替换ways; implement替换carry out; sharpen one’scompetitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)。
下面举一篇某位同学写的优秀作文的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法，精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
I never forget the exceedinglythrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, whichexerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling anarmy of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classicmusic. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
exceedingly 替换 very;(个人认为替换成overwhelmingly更出彩)
thrilling 替换 exciting;
sth. exerts a tremendous fascination onsb 替换 sb.be interested in sth;
google 替换 search;
an army of 替换 a lot of。
The dawn of the new century witnessedthe increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement ofscience and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashionare appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have beensubmerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;
Increasingpopularity 替换 more and morepopular;
Coincidentwith … 非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换 With …;
Advancement 替换 development;
Pour into (flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into;
Current (currently )替换 now;
Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.;
Growingindividuals 替换 more and morepeople;
It is noexaggeration to say 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的。 (itgoes without exaggeration that更好)
For a start, we can, freely, searchdesired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will bewell enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we canget huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.
For a start 替换 To begin with;
We can,freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法;
our knowledge will be well enriched,and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动;
Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides;
Deliver 替换 send。
There is no denying that , however,computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especiallythe growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen ,which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.
There is no denying that , however,computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There isno denying that这个句型;其次however作为插入语;再次，function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to。
Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing );
Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词。(直接用 netizen更好)
As a classic proverb goes that nogarden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people'lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, takeadvantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
No garden hasno weeds 替换 Every coin has twosides;
Computers doplay ，使用do 表示强调;
Positive 替换 important / good 等;
A slice of 替换 a part of;
Unfavorable 替换 bad;
Impacts 替换 effects / influences;
We should,therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入语;
Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage ) ;
Facet 替换 aspect。
好作文是“换”出来的，赶紧替换掉平凡不能再平凡的单词，让你的作文靓起来。
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