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maoerjordan 发表于 07-12-25 15:10:20 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
这些东东,是平时搜集的,很有参考价值哦。
最近几年大作文都是考漫画,所以第一句一定不能错,尤其不能错在“数”上面,因为有的是两幅漫画,有的是一幅,所以大家要区分一下宝典中对一幅或几幅图作文时,开头的不同。
小作文,一定说话要有礼貌,客气,那些套话宝典里有,至于格式,我想大家早就谙熟于心了,我就不废话了。
各位,加油,冲刺了哦。

PS:原来我是新手,不能发附件,麻烦大家自己复制了哈,先是小作文



英语:应用文写作-咨询信

  咨询信

  1.写作攻略

  咨询信的主要目的是为了寻求所需的信息、资料和情况等。写这类书信时应注意礼节,切不可使用带有生硬或命令口吻的词句,也不可把别人的帮助视为理所当然。考生还要注意只能就收信人能够提供的信息进行提问。具体写作步骤:

  首段:简单叙述题目场景,说明写作意图,清楚表明写这封信的目的是要寻求什么样的信息。

  主体段落:询问具体问题。可以问一些与命题所设置的问题相关的内容,但这些问题必须是与题目本身要求获取的信息是有相关性的。考生也可以自己认为比较重要的问题单独列一个段落,将其内容细化。考生可以根据虚拟的自身情况提出相关的问题。

  结尾段:表明急切获取信息的心情,提供联系方式以便收信人与你联络,对收信人所能给予的任何帮助都要表示感谢,即使你知道这些帮助是收信人应该做的。

  在写咨询信时特别要注意使用句式的选择,在询问问题时要使用“Would you please tell me……”之类的正式疑问句式。

  2.必背模版句型

  I wonder if you could tell me the information about……

  我想请问您是否能告诉我有关……的消息。

  I am writing for the information about……

  我写信时想知道关于……的消息。

  I would be forever grateful if you could send me information concerning……

  如果你能将关于……的信息发给我,我将不胜感激。

  I would like to know whether you can provide me with information regarding……

  我想知道你是否能提供我关于……的信息。

  I wish to request materials for……

  我想要关于……的资料。

  I’d very much appreciate your advice on such matters as how to contact the officers who would be willing to assist……

  如何联络那些愿意帮助……的官员,请您提供建议,我将不胜感激。

  Would you be so kind to tell me……?

  你可以告诉我有关……?

  I look forward to your immediate response.

  我期待着你的及时反馈。

  Your attention to this letter would be highly appreciated.

  感谢你对此信的关注。

  I am waiting for your quick reply.

  我在等待你的快速答复。

  Thank you in advance for your cooperation/assistance.

  提前谢谢你的帮助。

  3.必背经典范文

  Dear Sir or Madam,

  I have talked to the Sunshine Travel Agency about their vacation package,which includes for $158.00 round trip air fare to San Diego,plus accommodations for four days and three nights at the Glorious Hotel,and one day’s use of a rental car with unlimited mileage. Therefore,I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following information.

  Please let me know whether you do indeed have such an arrangement with budget traveling of San Diego,the tour promoter. Are there any surcharges or time restrictions?We are tentatively planning to take our vacation in early June.

  Thank you in advance for your assistance and hope to hear from you soon.

  Yours truly,

  Diana Moore

  译文

  亲爱的先生/女士:

  我已经同阳光旅行社谈过了他们的旅行套装,158美金圣地亚哥双飞游,包括在光辉酒店4天3夜的住宿费及一天的不限里程的租车服务。因此如果你能为我提供以下信息,我将不胜感激。

  你们是否真的有圣地亚哥自助游的项目。阳光旅行社的收费是否过高?这个项目有没有时间限制?我们初步打算在6月初去度假。

  对于你的帮助提前表示感谢,希望能够尽快收到你的回复。

  你们忠实的:黛安娜·摩尔



英语:应用文写作-投诉信


  投诉信

  1.写作攻略

  投诉信也叫抱怨信。一般是当自己的正常生活受到骚扰、自己的利益受到侵害或当社会规范有失规范时,用来表达不满情绪和提出批评。所有的投诉信都有一个共同点,就是最终是要收信人解决问题,所以需要提出解决方案。考生应该注意如果题目中没有给出解决方案,那么就要根据投诉内容中的不满提出自己的解决方案。具体写作步骤:

  首段:表明来信所要投诉的问题,尽可能做到客观礼貌,给读者留下好印象,应该记住读信人不一定就是错误的责任人,他的合作对事情的最后解决有着非常重要的作用。

  主体段落:写明投诉的原因、问题的经过及产生的后果。可以说具体的理由,也可以说问题的具体体现方式。

  结尾段:提出解决方案,不需展开。这段应体现书信的礼貌原则,可以用类似“如果你能……,我将十分感激”这样的表达方式。还要注意做到公平、公正。

  2.必背模版句型

  I am writing to make a complaint about……

  我写信是为了投诉……

  I am most reluctant to complain,but……

  我非常不愿意投诉,但……

  One annoying aspect of your service is……

  你们的服务项目中一个令人不满的地方是……

  I have been pleased with your services for years,but now I feel very disappointed.

  多年来我一直很满意你们的服务,但现在我非常失望。

  I would like to draw your attention to the problem/fault……

  我想让您知道这个问题/错误……

  I am writing to inform you that I find…… unsatisfactory.

  我写信是为了告诉你我发现……令人非常不满意。

  I wish to express my dissatisfaction/disappointment about……

  我想表达我对……的不满/失望。

  It would be highly appreciated if you could……

  如果你能……我将万分感谢。

  I trust you will take my complaints seriously and……

  我相信你会认真对待我的投诉,并且……

  I hope you will give due attention to this matter.

  希望对此事你能给予足够的重视。

  I would like to get this matter settled by the end of this month.

  我希望能在月底解决这事。

  I could not be more satisfied if you can kindly……

  如果你能……我将会非常满意。

  I would appreciate it very much if you could……

  如果你能……我将非常感谢。

  3.必背经典范文

  Dear Sir or Madam,

  I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next semester. I would like to have a single room, because I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.

  I am dissatisfied with my present roommate because of his inconsiderate behavior. For one thing,his friends are constantly visiting him;for another,he regularly makes calls at night. In addition,he often uses my things without asking for my permission. Under such circumstances,I find it difficult to concentrate on my studies,and I am falling behind in my assignments.

  I believe you will agree that the only solution is for me to move into a room of my own,where I will be free from these kinds of distractions. I would be very grateful if you could arrange a single room for me,preferably not in the same building.

  Sincerely yours,

  Tom Williams

  译文

  亲爱的女士或先生:

  我写信来是告诉您下学期我想搬到一个新房间。我想要一个单独房间,因为我觉得现在这样合住非常不方便。

  我之所以对我现在的室友不满是因为他毫不顾及他人的行为。一方面,他老是有朋友来访;另一方面,他夜里经常打电话。另外,他经常不经过我允许就用我的东西。在这种情况下,我很难专心学习,现在我的成绩已经下降了。

  我相信您肯定同意惟一的解决办法就是我搬到单独的房间,那样就没有什么干扰了。如果您能帮我安排一个单独的房间,最好不要在目前这个楼里,我将万分感谢。

  您真挚的:汤姆·威廉姆


英语:应用文写作-建议信


  建议信

  1.写作攻略

  建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。建议信有可能是写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点;也可能是写给某个组织和机构,就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。建议信要写出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由,提出的理由要入情入理,语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。具体写作步骤:

  首段:表明写作意图。陈述事由,简单介绍自己,注意语气。

  主体段落:应该首先肯定对方的优点,然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉,而不是提建议。

  结尾段:对提出的建议进行总结,要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受。

  写作这类题目时,考生要注意不要跑题,因为这类题很有可能写成议论文,如“我认为一……二……,所以要如何如何”。考生应该时刻记得书信的交际功能,要考虑到收信人的感受。在给对方提建议时应该时时说到I和You,要让人时刻感受到这是一种交流。

  2.必背模版句型

  I would like to suggest that……

  我想建议……

  I am writing to express my views concerning……

  我写信来是要表达有关……我的看法。

  You have asked for my advice with regard to…… and I will try to make some suggestions.

  你问我有关……的事情,我会尝试着提出一些建议。

  If I were you,I would……

  如果我是你,我会……

  It seems to me that you could……

  我认为你可以……

  I think it would be more beneficial if you could……

  我想如果你能……,可能会更好。

  I believe you will take my advice into account.

  我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。

  I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.

  我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/有帮助。

  I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.

  如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。

  I will be ready for further discussing this matter into details.

  我时刻准备着就此事进行更详尽的讨论。

  3.必背经典范文

  Dear Mary,

  I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now. You have studied so hard that you have had no time for exercise. This is harmful for your health. You have been in poor health these years. I feel it would be more beneficial to your health if you could take more exercise in future.

  Do not think that time spent in exercise is wasted. Exercise can improve your physical constitution and refresh the mind. After one or two hours of exercise you can study better. Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without felling fatigue. Otherwise your study will be interrupted from time to time by fatigue or sickness.

  I am not advising you to devote all your time to exercise. What I want to say is that exercise is as useful and important as your study. I hope you can take at least one hour’s exercise every day after you are recovered. I would be more than happy to see you have a stronger body.

Sincerely yours,

  John

  译文

  亲爱的玛丽:

  听说你近来病了许多天,使我感到很不安。但愿你现在好些了。由于你平时学习太累了,缺乏运动的时间,这对你的健康很不利。这些年来你身体一直不好,我想如果你今后多参加体育活动肯定会对身体有很多好处。

  不要把锻炼看成是浪费时间。锻炼可以增强你的身体素质,使你更有精神。运动一两个小时可以增加你的学习效率。只有有了强健的身体才能高效的学习而不觉疲倦,否则疲劳或疾病就会影响学习。

  我并不是劝你把时间都用在锻炼上,我只是想说锻炼和学习一样,同是有益而且是重要的。我希望你复原后能每天至少锻炼一个小时。看到你有个强壮的身体,我会非常高兴的。

你的朋友:约翰



英语:应用文写作-申请信


  申请信

  1.写作攻略

  申请信是写信人就某一职位或学位等向收信人提出请求。作为一种公务性的正规信件,申请信的语言要求既有礼貌又有专业水准。考生在写作时还应该注意信息的可信性,在强调自身经历和优点时应把握尺度。具体写作步骤:

  首段:说明写信的目的,介绍自己是谁,对所申请职位或学位的单位或院校的了解以及自己将会为对方所做的贡献,信息的来源等,这一段要写的简短而又能吸引收信人的注意力。

  正文段落:介绍自己的学历或工作经历,本人的个性,已经取得的成绩,说明你为何对这一职位或学校感兴趣以及你对未来的打算等等。

  结尾段:表示感谢和期待对方给自己的申请以优先考虑。这段尤其要注意语气应礼貌而又自信,请求得到面试的机会。

  2.必背模版句型

  I am writing in response to your advertisement in Beijing Today of August 6……

  我看到了8月6日贵公司的招聘广告,于是写信……

  Your advertised position of sales manager interests me……

  我对你们招聘销售经理的广告很感兴趣,所以……

  The requirements outlined in your ad in…… for a general manager assistant appear to mesh almost exactly with my own.

  我本人的条件与你们刊登在XXX上的招聘广告中所要求的总经理助理的各种条件完全吻合。

  I think I am the right person for the job you advertised,because……

  相信我是你们招聘职位的最佳人选,因为……

  I am glad that I feel quite qualified for the position you advertised.

  对于你们在广告中所招聘的职务,我高兴地感到自己有资格申请。

  I would like to apply for the vacancy of……

  我想申请……这个空缺职位。

  I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the job of……

  我认为我是……工作的合格人选,所以我写信推荐自己。

  I welcome increasing responsibilities in a quick-paced setting.

  我愿意在快节奏地环境中承担更多的责任。

  Should you grant me a personal interview,I would be most grateful.

  如果你能给我面试的机会,我将不胜感激。

  Thanks for considering my application and I am looking forward to your reply.

  谢谢您考虑我的申请,期待着你的回复。

  If you need to know any more about me,please contact me at……

  如果你想了解我的更多信息,请……联系我。

  Any favorable consideration of my application would be appreciated.

  感谢您对我的申请的积极考虑。

  I have enclosed my resume.

  我已将简历附上。

  3.经典范文

  Dear Mr. Moore,

  Re:Secretary Position

  I am actively seeking a secretary opportunity in a demanding and fast paced office. And I believe five years experience as secretary to the president of an international corporation will qualify me for your executive secretarial position. In fact,the job described in your ad in today's Daily sounds tailor made to my abilities and experience.

  Throughout my career I have demonstrated for my employers an exceptional facility for meeting organizational objectives and demands. My duties as an executive secretary have included the routine obligations plus extensive experience in communication with and traveling to foreign countries.

  The attached resume details my business and academic background.

  I look forward to hearing from you. I can be reached at 6578-9988 during the days and 2220-0009 after 6 p.m.

  Thank you for your consideration of my application. Hope to meet you in the near future.

  Yours sincerely,

  Li Na

  译文

  亲爱的摩尔先生:

  回复:秘书职位

  我正在寻求一份秘书的工作。我相信外企5年秘书工作经验应该使我有能力胜任贵公司的秘书职位。事实上,贵公司的招聘广告上的要求我完全能够达到。

  在我工作期间表现出了良好的个人能力。我的工作除日常职责外,还包括与各方面的联系及出国业务等。

  附件中的简历详细描述了我的学业和工作经历。

  我期待着你的回复。我的联系电话:白天—6578-9988;6点后— 2220-0009.

  感谢您考虑我的申请。希望能尽快和您面谈。

  您的诚挚的:李娜



英语:应用文写作-介绍信


  介绍信

  1.写作攻略

  介绍信是社交书信中较常用的,一般是向收信人介绍第三者并希望得到他的支持、帮助或者照顾。根据介绍人、被介绍人与收信人之间的关系以及介绍的目的,可以分为普通社交介绍信和公务介绍信两种。公务介绍信往往比较正式,有一定的规律可循。介绍信一般都包括:第一部分详细叙述被介绍人的情况,如姓名、年龄、学历等;第二部分说明情由,即被介绍人此行的目的;第三部分写明被介绍人希望得到哪方面的帮助并向收信人致谢。

  2.必背模版句型

  I am writing to introduce Gao Jian,one of my college classmates in Beijing.

  我写信是要介绍我在北京时的大学同学高建。

  Please allow me to introduce one of my best friends to you.

  请允许我向您介绍我最好的朋友。

  I am very glad to have this chance to write to you……

  很高兴能有这次机会给您写信……

  The bearer of this is Mr. Zhang whom I personally know to be a most deserving person for your position.

  这里介绍的张先生,我个人认为是这个位置最好的人选。

  I take pleasure in introducing to you the bearer Mr. Huang.

  很高兴能向您介绍黄先生。

  Thanks for your attention and hope to receive your reply.

  谢谢您的关注,希望能收到你的回复。

  It would be appreciated if you can give her some help.

  如能蒙您帮忙将不胜感激。

  I would be most grateful if you could lend due attention to this letter and contact me at……

  如您能对此信给予一定的关注并用……和我联系,我将非常感谢。

  In addition,I want to express my sincere thanks for your attention.

  另外,真诚的感谢您的关注。

  3.必背经典范文

  Dear Mrs. Miller,

  I'm writing to introduce to you Mr. Wang,one of my high school classmates in Beijing. He is presently working for Lenovo Technologies and is going to be transferred to its branch in your city next month.

  Since this will be the first time for him to work in a foreign country,he will possibly be faced with many problems,and especially the housing problem. He hopes to obtain your guidance and help in finding a good apartment to live. You've been living there for more than 10 years,so you are surely familiar with things there. If you can kindly help find rental quarters for her,I'll be very grateful.

  Thanks for your due attention to this letter and hope to receive your reply soon. Many thanks to the trouble you will have to take for Mr. Johnson.

  Yours sincerely,

  Zhang Hua

  译文

  亲爱的米勒夫人:

  我写这封信是为了介绍我在北京的高中同学小王。他现在联想科技公司工作,下个月他将被调到您所在城市的分部工作。

  因为这是他第一次到国外工作,所以他可能会面临很多问题,尤其是住房问题。他希望您能帮他参谋并找到一个合适的公寓。您在那里已经生活了十多年,对那里一定非常熟悉。如果您能帮他找到住处,我将非常感谢。

  谢谢您对本信给予的关注,希望能尽快收到您的回复。烦劳之处,万分感激。

  您的诚挚的:张华谨上



英语:应用文写作-祝贺信

  祝贺信

  1.写作攻略

  英语中,祝贺信使用的频率很高。凡是遇到重大的喜庆节日,如圣诞节、新年、婚礼和生日等等,亲友间要写祝贺信。当亲友晋升、毕业、考试成功或出国留学时也要写祝贺信。祝贺信相对而言是比较容易写的,但用词必须亲切有礼、表达出真诚的喜悦感情。具体写作步骤:

  首段:表达听到喜讯的心情。

  主体段落:对喜讯进行积极评价。

  结尾段:表达衷心的祝贺之情。

  2.必背模版句型

  Congratulations,all of us feel proud of your remarkable achievements!

  祝贺你,我们都为您所取得的巨大成就感到骄傲。

  I am so pleased and happy to hear that……

  听到……我真的非常高兴。

  I write to congratulate you upon……

  我写信来祝贺你……。

  I offer you my warmest congratulations on your……

  对于你的……我表示热烈的祝贺。

  We are just as proud as can be of you and send our congratulations.

  我们为你感到由衷的自豪!祝贺你!

  I wish you still further success!

  预祝你取得更大的成功。

  We look forward to bragging about you in the years ahead.

  我们希望在未来的岁月中能骄傲地谈起你。

  Please accept our most sincere congratulations and very best wishes for all the good future in the world.

  谨向你表示祝贺和最良好的祝福。

  3.必背经典范文

  Dear Ruth,

  I offer my warmest congratulations on your promotion to Vice President of the company. I know how talented you are and how hard you've worked to attain this goal. No one could have been more deserving. How exciting it must be for you to realize your ambitions after all those years of hard working. It's been a real encouragement to me to see your efforts rewarded.

  Sincere congratulations to you. Your expertise and dedication will bring out the best of everyone on your staff. They're learning from a real professional.

  I wish you still further success.

  Sincerely yours,

  Ma Lin

  译文

  亲爱的鲁思:

  听说你当选了公司副总裁我表示热烈的祝贺。我知道你很有天赋,而且为了实现这个目标你付出了很大的努力。没人比你更应该得到这个职位。这么多年的努力终于得到了回报你该多么高兴啊。你的成功对我来说是个莫大的鼓励。

  真诚的祝贺你。你的专业和奉献将使公司所有员工都能发挥自己最佳水平。他们是在学习一个真正的专业人士。

  预祝你取得更大的成功。

  你的朋友:马林



英语:应用文写作-道歉信

  道歉信

  1.写作攻略

  道歉信主要是向收信人表明歉意,请求对方谅解自己的过失。写道歉信时要明确不是找借口为自己辩护,而是承认自己的过错并提出弥补过错的具体建议和方法。此类信件的关键是用词准确,表达真诚。具体写作步骤:

  首段:重述自己做错的事,表示歉意。

  主体段落:说明道歉的具体原因,应尽量详细描述做错事的经过。写信时应该注意在申述理由时要照顾读信人的感受,切忌强词夺理。

  结尾段:再次表明承认错误的态度,请求收信人的谅解。也可以提出补救的办法。

  2.必背模版句型

  I would like to give you my apology for……

  对于……我向你道歉。

  Please accept my sincere apology for……

  请接受我关于……的真诚道歉。

  I am indeed very sorry for what I said/did,but believe I had no intention to insult you.

  对于我说的话/做过的事,我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信,我并非要故意侮辱你。

  Let''s not put a little misunderstanding between us.

  可别让我们之间存在哪怕一点点的误解。

  Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.

  请原谅我的用词不当。

  I feel badly sorry about it and want you to know what happened.

  我为此感到非常内疚,所以想让你知道实情。

  Please accept my apologies for my oversight.

  请原谅我的疏忽。

  Please allow me to say sorry again.

  请允许我再次表示歉意。

  I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

  我真心希望你能理解我的处境,并接受我的道歉。

  Once again,I''m sorry for any inconvenience caused.

  再一次,我为所有的不便表示歉意。

  3.必背经典范文

  Dear professor Jackson:

  I am indeed very sorry that I missed the examination you gave on Moby-Dick last Wednesday. I feel badly about it and want you to know what happened.

  On my way to class that day,I had a flat tire,and I had to go with the mechanic when he repaired it. It took me more than one hour to get it done. A copy of the bill is enclosed.

  I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. I would appreciate your allowing me to take a make up examination. I will come to your office during your office hour on Monday to discuss this possibility with you. Once again,I''m sorry fro any inconvenience caused.

  Sincerely yours,

  Alice

  译文

  亲爱的杰克逊教授:

  对于上周三错过了《白鲸》一课的考试我深表歉意。我很内疚,所以希望您能知道到底发生了什么。

  那天上学的路上,我的汽车爆胎了。我不得不去找汽修工一起修理,花了一个多小时的时间才修好。我已经将账单放在附件中。

  我真心希望您能理解我的处境,并接受我的道歉。我希望你能给我一次补考的机会。星期一上班时间,我将到您的办公室和您谈这件事的可行性。我为造成的不便再次表示歉意。

  您的学生:艾丽丝



英语:应用文写作-感谢信


  感谢信

  1.写作攻略

  感谢信是对收信人的某一行为表示感谢。感谢信的使用频率非常高,在收到别人的邀请时,受到别人的表扬时,反正只要对方帮助过你,不管大小都应该表示感谢。感谢信带有浓厚的感情浓厚,所表达的感情必须真挚。具体写作步骤:

  首段:表明写作意图,让对方感受到你的谢意是发自内心的。

  主体段落:写明感谢的原因,要展开说明,可以说具体的理由也可以说接受帮助的具体事例。比如说你在一家旅馆住了一段时间,在那里度过了一段美好的时光,你就可以写信表示感谢。你可以从旅馆的服务、客房环境、饮食卫生等方面来说明感谢的理由。这样展开就使文章显得充实丰满,也符合正常交际的习惯。

  结尾段:再次表示感谢。

  2.必背模版句型

  I am writing to express my thanks for……

  我写这封信是为了表达我对……的谢意。

  I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for……

  在信中我要为……表达我真挚的谢意。

  Thank you so much for the gift you sent me. It's one of the most wonderful gifts I ever got.

  非常感谢你给我寄来的礼物,这是我收到的最好礼物之一。

  Many thanks for all the good things you have done in helping us to……

  非常感谢您为帮助我们……所做的一切。

  I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance.

  我谨借此机会感谢您给予我们的及时帮助和支持。

  On behalf of my whole family,I would like to extend my sincere gratitude for……

  我谨代表我全家对……表示真诚的感激之情。

  Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories,we will nurture them forever.

  没什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆,我们会永远铭刻在心。

  Thanks again for your kind help.

  对你的帮助再次表示感谢。

  My true gratitude is beyond any words description.

  任何语言都不能表达我的真挚谢意。

  Please accept my thanks,now and always.

  请永远记住我的谢意。

  Your help is very much appreciated by each one of us.

  我们每个人都非常感谢你。

  3.必背经典范文

  Dear staff,

  I am writing to show my sincere gratitude for all of you. Now that I am home and on my own again I feel extremely happy. During the time I lived at the Rehabilitation center and was under your tender care,I promised myself I would write a letter of thanks as soon as I was able.

  Abundant thanks to each one of you for your patience,expertise and genuine concern. It was you who helped me believe in myself and gave me assurance that I could walk again. I would never forget each word you said to me and the things you have done to me. Forgive me for the times I lashed out at you in frustration and thank you for understanding and remaining firm with me.

  Never stop your beautiful way of working with people. Your help really means a lot to me and anyone who in trouble as well.

  Affectionately,

  Wang Fang

  译文

  亲爱的全体工作人员:

  我写这封信是为了表达我对你们的真诚感谢。现在我又可以一个人在家了,我真的非常高兴。我在康复中心接受你们的关照时,就已经决心只要一有时间就给你们写感谢信了。

  对于你们每个人的耐心、专业精神和关心我表示深深地感谢。是你们使我相信自己能够站着走路。你们说的每一句话、做过的每一件事我都不会忘记。请原谅我在受挫时对你们大发脾气,谢谢你们的理解和对我的严格要求。

  继续你们美丽的事业吧。你们的帮助对于我和其他需要帮助的人来说有着非常重要的意义。

  你们的朋友:

  王芳



英语:应用文写作-邀请信


  邀请信

  1.写作攻略

  邀请信是写信人对收信人的一种盛情邀约,一般分为正式的和非正式的两种。格式与其他信函相同。具体写作步骤:

  首段:说明与收信人的相关性与写作意图。

  主体段落:具体交代情景:包括受邀请的人、邀请朋友要干什么、地点以及具体的时间等内容。并且强调为什么邀请收信人而不是别的朋友。

  结尾段:表示期待朋友的回复。

  就本质而言正式与非正式的邀请信并没有什么区别,只是正式的邀请信比较注意文采,而且往往需要表现出更大的热诚。邀请信一般都要求考生邀约朋友参加特殊聚会,共度假期,或者访问自己的家乡等,考生可以采用半正式文体。

  2.必背模版句式

  I am writing to invite you to……

  我写信是想邀请你……

  I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in……

  我想如果你能参加……将是一个非常好的主意。

  I wonder if you can come……

  我在想你是否能来参加……

  How would you like to join us in……?

  你想不想来参加我们的……?

  Would you please drop me a line to let me know if you can come to……?

  你可以打电话来告诉我你能否来……?

  My family and I would feel much honored if you could come.

  如果你能来我们全家都将感到不胜荣幸。

  I really hope you can make it.

  我真的希望你能来。

  We would be looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.

  我们高兴地期待着你的到来。

  I would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision soon.

  我希望能在那见到你,请早点让我知道你的决定。

  3.必背经典范文

  Dear Jane,

  I am going to have a dinner party at my house on July 14,2006 (Friday) to celebrate my mother's 60 year old birthday. It is an important occasion for our family,and as you are a close friend of us,my parents and I do hope you can come and share our joy.

  The party will start at seven o'clock in the evening. There will be a small musical soiree,at which a band will perform some popular and classical songs at first. At around eight o'clock,we will start our dinner,during which we can talk and laugh together. And then all the friends will take some photos together.

  I know you have been busy these days,but I do hope you can make it,my family and I look forward to the pleasure of your company.

  Yours affectionately,

  Gao Hui

  译文

  亲爱的简:

  我打算于2006年7月14日(星期五)在我家举行一个晚宴,庆祝我母亲60大寿。这对我们全家来说是一件大事,作为我们全家的好朋友,我们真诚地希望你能来参加,分享我们的快乐。

  晚宴将于7点开始。首先会有一个小型的演奏会,届时我们将欣赏到乐队演奏的流行和古典歌曲。8点左右我们开始用餐,朋友们可以随便聊天欢笑。最后所有的朋友们一起照相作为纪念。

  我知道你最近很忙,但我真的希望你能来,我们全家都在期待着你的光临。

  你的老朋友:高慧



英语:应用文写作-私人信函


  (Letter)是用以交涉事务、增进了解、联络友谊、交流思想的重要工具。英语信函主要包括私人信函(Personal Letters)和公务信函(Business Letters)两大类。公务信函,一般用来处理或讨论重要事务,包括邀请信(Invitation Letter)、感谢信(Thankyou Letter)、道歉信(Letter of Apologies)、祝贺信(Letter of Congratulations)等。按照一般的格式英语信函主要由六个部分组成:信头、信内地址、称呼、正文、结句、签名;有的信函还包括附言和附件部分(常用P.S.表示)。

  信头(Heading)

  信头由发信人地址和发信日期两部分组成,通常写在第一页的右上角。行首可以缩进去写,也可以齐头写;行尾可用也可不用标点符号。值得注意的是,英语书信中的地址与中文正好相反,应该由小到大,先写门牌号码、街名,再写城市名、州(省)名、邮编、最后再写国名。如:

  No. 256,Chaoyang Street

  Beijing,100069,China

  日期的写法英、美两种格式都可以,英国顺序为“日、月、年”,美国顺序则为“月、日、年”,如:

  27 Sep.,2006(英)

  Sep. 27,2006(美)

  信内地址(Inside Address)

  包括收信人的姓名和地址,一般置于信纸的左上角。在私人信函中,这一部分经常省略。其格式和发信人的姓名、地址一样。

  称呼(Salutation)

  称呼位于收信人地址之下的一至二行,顶格写起,自成一行。在私人信函中后面用逗号,在公务信函中则用冒号。

  正文(The Body of the Letter)

  信件的主要内容。

  结句(Complimentary Closure)

  类似于中文中的“此致”“敬礼”这类的话,主要是一些套语。一般是正文结束隔两行另起,独立成行,位于信纸的右角,也可以略居中右方。

  签名

  写信人的名字一般签在结尾语下面一至二行处。在私人信函中只需亲笔签名就可以了,而在公务信函中,发信人的亲笔签名应该写在结尾套语和打印的姓名之间。

  以上几点是英语信函的共同特征。为了考生更好地掌握英语信函的写法,下面几部分将详细讲解私人信函和公务信函的具体写法,并为考生提供了经典句型和范文。

  一、私人信函

  1.写作攻略

  私人信函是一个宽泛的概念,它既可以指公务信函以外的一切信函,也可以指与家人或朋友之间互通信息、感情这一特定类型的信件。这里我们指后者。

  私人信函与其他形式的信函最根本的区别在于,私人信函纯粹是出于自愿,就像是同远方的亲友聊家常一样。其内容可以是简短的几句问候、通报近期的情况、抒发对亲友的想念等等。私人信函的格式和其他信函基本一致,不过与其他信函相比,稍微随便一些。

  地址一般写在信纸的右上角,可用斜列式也可用齐头式,如果是收信人熟悉的地址也可以省略不写,但日期是不能省略的。称呼一般视与收信人的关系而定,一般来说应用比较亲近的称呼。正文部分尽量有感而发,写作时要十分注重感情的真挚。如果对方在上次的信中提出过什么问题,应该先回答,同时也可以问对方一些问题,以表示对他/她的关切。私人信函的基本写作结构为“问候及表达写信人的思念之情——询问收信人的近况——向收信人讲述自己的情况——以提议、建议或请求结尾”。在写给私人信函中可以常用的结尾套语如Yours,、 With love, 、With best wishes、Your affectionately, 、Yours sincerely,等等。当然在实际写作中,要仔细审题,弄清楚题目给定的情景,根据要求进行写作。

  2.必背模版句式

  How time flies!And it's five months since you left. Do you know how we have been missing you lately?

  光阴似箭!一晃我们分别已经5个月了。你知道我们最近有多想念你吗?

  Thanks for your letter on June 1st. I'm now answering your letter and telling you my opinion.

  感谢你6月1日的来信。我现在给你回信,说说我的看法。

  You have no idea how excited I was when I received your letter!I was nearly crazy!

  你一定想不到收到你的来信我是多么地激动!我几乎都快疯了!

  It is hard to believe two years have passed since I left Beijing for Japan. How are you going on these days?

  真没想到转眼间我离开北京来日本已有两年了。你最近怎么样?

  I am delighted to hear you will be coming to Beijing and will be able to visit my family.

  听说你要来北京,还要来我家玩我非常高兴。

  I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

  我期待着能够很快收到你的回信。

  Be sure to write soon. I am eager to hear from you.

  记得要早点回信,我很想早点收到你的来信。

  3、必背经典范文

  范文1

  Aug. 12,2006

  Dear Mum and Dad,

  I am sorry for not having written to you for such a long time. I am afraid you must think I have forgotten you and the whole family. Actually I really miss you,but I have been busy preparing my exam these days. And now I have passed the exam and feel very relaxed as if a heavy burden has been removed. I can't help waiting to write to you and so here I am.

  What about Dad's health?Is he still coughing at night?I have been worrying about it. The last day I saw an advertisement on a newspaper introducing a new kind of syrup which is said to have magic effect on coughing. I have bought one bottle and sent it back home by post. Have you received it?What about the effect?

  Please write to me soon,I am eager to hear from you.

  Your daughter,

  Li Hua

  译文

  亲爱的爸爸妈妈:

  我为这么长时间没有给你们写信而感到抱歉,恐怕你们都认为我把你们和家人都忘了吧。其实我真的非常想念你们,但这些日子我在忙着准备考试。现在考试通过了,我感觉如释重负,迫不及待地要提笔给你们写信。

  爸爸的身体怎么样?晚上还咳嗽吗?我一直非常担心。前几天我在报纸上看到一则广告,其中介绍了的那种咳嗽药,据说有奇效。我已经买了一瓶寄回去了。你们收到了吗?效果怎么样?

  尽快给我回信好吗?我早就想收到你们的信了。

  女儿:李华

  2006年8月12日

  范文2

  June. 3,2006

  Dear Mr. Liang,

  It is almost half a year since you saw me off. I can still vividly recall the impressive scenes you gave. And I could never forget what affectionate care you showed me by helping me carry my suitcase. You can't imagine how I have been missing you these days.

  From a recent letter from Mr. Chin I am glad to learn that you have returned to the University. I hope you have been getting along well with your life and studies. I am sending you under separate cover a copy of the latest issue of Times. I hope you will find it interesting and useful for your English.

  I would greatly appreciate hearing from you soon.

  Yours sincerely,

  Wang Ning

  译文

  亲爱的梁先生:

  自从分别以来,已有半年时间。你对我的种种情谊,我至今记忆犹新。我永远都不能忘记你给我的友好照顾,如帮我拎皮箱。你肯定想不到这段日子以来我是多么地想念你。

  近日从陈先生的来信得知你又回到大学上学了,我非常高兴。希望你生活和学习都很满意。现另包寄上最近出版的《时代》杂志。相信你看后一定会觉得有意思,并对你的英语学习有帮助的。

  期盼尽快收到你的回信。

  王宁

  2006年6月3日



英语:应用文写作-备忘录


  备忘录

  1.写作攻略

  备忘录是一种录以备忘的公文,在机关或公司内部使用最多。主要用来通报消息(会议安排、情况报告、责任确认、问题处理)、回复来函、评估成绩等内部公务。

  备忘录一般包括以下几部分:

  * 收件人姓名、职务;

  * 发件人姓名、职务;

  * 保密级别:分为三类top secret,secret,confidential,一般备忘录不用保密,这一栏就空着;

  * 文件编号:发件人方文件编号和收件人方文件编号;

  * 发件日期;

  * 备忘录标题线;

  * 正文;

  * 签名、职务;

  * 誊写备忘录的人和打字员姓名首字母缩写;

  * 附件数目;

  * 抄送:如果送给收件人以外的人时要注明。

  写备忘录时要注意以下几点:

  (1)第一句话就要明白交代写此备忘录的目的。如果回复别人的备忘录要注明对方写备忘录的时间。

  (2)备忘录中交代的事情应该简明扼要,一段话说明一个意思。

  (3)如在备忘录中通知信息,语言一定要准确,避免产生歧义。

  (4)最后要用一句话总结,强调读备忘录的人要尽快做出反应。

  2.必背模版句型

  I have the honor to inform you that……

  我很荣幸地通知您……

  I would like to remind you that our office is in want of a new English typewriter.

  我想提醒您一下,我们办公室急需一部英文打字机。

  I have several proposals for cutting down the cost.

  关于降低成本我有几个建议。

  In response to your request for…… I have to inform you that we can not approve it.

  对于你……的请求,我不得不告诉你我们不能批准。

  This is further to your memo dated June 6,2006,in which you proposed that employees adopt the "punchin" system.

  回复你2006年6月6日关于员工实行打卡考勤制度的备忘录。

  The board of directors approved your proposal at the meeting last week.

  董事会在上周的会议上通过了你的建议。

  I believe these changes will decrease the product cost.

  我相信这些改革会降低成本的。

  Please let me know your response to these suggestions.

  我想知道你对于这些建议的看法。

  Please feel free to contact me if you need further information.

  如果需要更多信息请随时与我联系。

  I highly appreciate your considerations to these proposals.

  我期待你能考虑一下这些建议。

  3.必背经典范文

  To:Carl Fowler

  From:Jane Larson

  Subject:Scheduling the film

  Date:March 13,2006

  We'd better rearrange the showing schedule for next week's film.

  As you know,we are going to show the film,The Smiths,next week in the projection room,which holds only fifty people comfortably without overcrowding. It is not big enough for the whole staff to see the film at the same time. So I suggest we show the film in different times. For example,we can arrange 40 people to see the film there on Tuesday at 3:00 p.m.,and the remaining 40 on Thursday at the same time.

  If there's any problem about this arrangement,please let me know.

  Jane Larson

C. Stan Clark

  译文

  收件人:卡尔·福勒

  发件人:简·拉森

  主题:电影日程安排

  日期:2006年3月13日

  我们最好能够重新安排下周电影的播放时间。

  你知道我们打算下周在放映厅播放《史密斯夫妇》这部电影,但放映厅只能同时容纳50人。我们的员工不能同时看电影。所以我建议在将放映时间选在不同时段。比如,40人在周二下午3点在那里看这部影片,剩下的40人在周四同一时间同一地点观看。

  如果对此安排有什么问题请通知我。

简·拉森

  抄送:斯坦·克拉克



英语:应用文写作-摘要和报告


  摘要

  1.写作攻略

  摘要是对原始文献(或文章)的基本内容进行浓缩并写成语义连贯的短文。它以迅速掌握原文内容梗概为目的,不需加入任何主观评论和解释,但必须简明、确切地表述原文的重要内容。摘要写作要求简明扼要,用词准确。摘要题型写作是难度非常大的一种写作形式。随着考生英语水平的不断提高,这种题型引起考生的普遍重视。写作摘要时应该注意以下几点:

  (1)动笔之前,考生一定要认真仔细地阅读所给原文,力求抓住其大意,掌握原文要点。 如果一遍不能明白,可以多读几次,读的次数越多越容易明白文章大意。

  (2)摘要的长度不应超过原文的三分之一,一般是原文的四分之一或五分之一,考试时应遵守规定的字数限制。

  (3)在做摘要时考生切忌照搬原文,应该用自己的语言来写。一篇摘要应该是语言的再创造,而不是原文词语的简单堆砌。

  (4)摘要应与原文的观点保持一致,为了使摘要条理清晰,无特殊情况应按原文的逻辑顺序排列。

  (5)摘要要做到内容完整,没有大的遗漏,使读者无需查看原文就能够获得原文的主要内容。应重点反映主要观点,删除细节。

  (6)削除例子,简化描述。用简短的语句代替冗长的语句。

  (7)检查与修改时,考生应重点检查是否遗漏了原文的要点或包含了细节。

  另外,写摘要时应该使用简单的衔接词,如but,then,thus,yet,for等等,而不能使用at the same time,on the other hand 等。

  2.必背模版句型

  This paper mainly deals with……

  这篇论文主要是写……

  This article focuses on the topics of (that,having,etc)……

  这篇文章的强调的主题是……

  This essay presents knowledge that……

  这篇短文主要是讲关于……的知识。

  This thesis discusses/analyzes……

  这篇论文讨论/分析了……

  This paper provides an overview of……

  这篇文章综述了……

  This article compares……and summarizes key findings.

  这篇文章比较了……并总结了主要的发现。

  This paper presents up-to-date information on……

  这篇论文介绍了关于……的最新信息。

  This article not only describes……but also suggests……

  这篇文章不仅描述了……而且建议……

  This paper provides a method of ……

  这篇为……提供了方法。

  This paper introduces an applicable procedure to analyze……

  这篇文章介绍一种分析……的可行程序。

  This paper is devoted to examining the role of……

  这篇论文致力于研究……的作用。

  This paper reflects the state of the art in……

  这篇论文展示了……目前的情况。

  This article reviews the techniques used in……

  这篇文章综述了……领域采用的技术。

  The writer of this essay tries to explore……

  本文作者试图探讨……

  The aim/purpose/objective of this paper is to determine……

  本文的目的/目标是为了决定……

  3.必背经典范文

  将下面这篇约500词的原文按要求写成约150词的摘要。

  原文:

  How New York Became America's Largest City

  In the 18th century New York was smaller than Philadelphia and Boston.Today it is the largest city in America.How can the change in its size and importance be explained?

  To answer this question we must consider certain facts about geography,history,and economics.Together these three will explain the huge growth of Americas most famous city.

  The map of the Northeast shows that four of the most heavily populated areas in this region are around seaports.At these points materials from across the sea enter the United States,and the product of the land are sent there for export across the sea.

  Economists know that places where transportation lines meet are good places for making raw materials into finished goods.That is why seaports often have cities nearby.But cities like New York needed more than their geographical location in order to become great industrial centers.Their development did not happen simply by chance.

  About 1815,when many Americans from the east coast had already moved toward the west,trade routes from the ports to the central regions of the country began to be a serious problem. The slow wagons of that time,drawn by horses or oxen,were too expensive for moving heavy freight very far. Americans had long admired Europe's canals.In New York State a canal seemed the best solution to the transportation problem.From the eastern end of Lake Erie all the way across the state to the Hudson River there is a long strip of low land.Here the Erie Canal was constructed. After several years of work it was completed in 1825.

  The canal produced an immediate effect.Freight costs were cut to about one-tenth of what had been.New York City,which had been smaller than Philadelphia and Boston,quickly became the leading city of the coast.In the years that followed,transportation routes on the Great Lakes were joined to routes on the Mississippi River.Then New York City became the end point of a great inland shipping system that extended from the Atlantic Ocean far up the western branches of the Mississippi.

  The coming of the railroads made canal shipping less important,but it tied New York even more closely to the central regions of the country.It was easier for people in the central states to ship their goods to New York for export overseas.

  Exports from New York were greater than imports.Consequently,shipping companies were eager to fill their ships with passengers on the return trip from Europe.Passengers could come from Europe very cheaply as a result.

  Thus New York became the greatest port for receiving people from European countries. Many of these people remained in the city.Others stayed in New York for a few weeks,months,or years,and then moved to other parts of the United States.For these great number of new Americans New York had to provide homes,goods,and services.Their labor helped the city be come great.

  摘要

  How New York Became America's Largest City

  New York was once smaller than Philadelphia and Boston,but now it is America's largest city because of geography,history and economics.

  New York was located at the seaport where materials were imported to the US and the products of the US were sent abroad across the sea.The city was further developed when the Erie Canal was completed in 1825.This linked Lake Erie to New York via the Hudson River and the cost of transporting goods to those who had settled inland was cut down.In addition,the Great Lakes were soon linked to the Mississippi.Later,railroads tied New York closer to the central states,whose goods were exported via New York.Fewer goods were imported,so cheap passages were available from Europe.New York became the main port for receiving Europeans,many of whom stayed in the city and helped it become great.

  报告

  1.写作攻略

  报告是下级部门就某件事情向上级部门和领导回报工作、反映情况、提出建议等使用的上行公文。就其内容实质来说,可分为信息类报告和分析类报告。信息类报告在日常事务中经常发生,其目的是通报信息和情况,一般要求准确、正确、完整、简明扼要。分析类报告在语言和格式上则更加正式、复杂,其目的在于对某问题或情况进行调查、研究、分析、评估或论证后提出结论,篇幅一般较长。报告的写作主要有以下要求:

  (1)写好一份报告,撰写人首先要对所要写的内容有充分的了解。写作时,应尽量多用被动语态,少用第一人称,以免主观、冒昧。

  (2)一般英文报告都可采用书信格式。

  (3)报告要有明确的中心思想、清楚的段落层次和合理的结构安排。

  2.必背模版句型

  The report is hereby made to ask for the approval of the board for the solution of the problem.

  请董事会批准这件事的解决方案。

  This report will summarize……

  本报告将总结……

  The report provides an introduction to……

  本报告介绍了……

  The operation on…… is under smooth way.

  ……的运行很正常。

  This report only provides guidelines they can use to assess their own needs.

  本报告尽为他们评估自身需求提供一些指导。

  May I have your approval of……by the end of this month?

  月底之前我能得到您就……的批准吗?

  We will fulfill the task ahead of time.

  我们将提前完成任务。

  Upon the request of the committee,we have conducted the report.

  应委员会的请求,我们完成了这份报告。

  3.必背经典范文

  To:Mr. Johnson

  From:Li Nan

  Subject:Ship Accident off West Coast of The Yangtze River,No Casualties.

  Date:April.4,2005

  Yesterday evening two boats collided in thick fog in The Yangtze River not far from Wu Han. One was a cargo ship carrying lumber,apparently on its way to The Yangtze River. The other was a National ferry on its regular run from Jiu Jiang to Wu Han.

  However,because of the weather conditions,the captains did not realize the danger until a few seconds before the collision took place. Consequently,there was no time for them to prevent the accident.

  Fortunately,there were no casualties among the crews or passengers,but both ships suffered badly damages.

  A spokesman for the port authorities said that a committee would be set up to determine the cause of the collision.

  Sincerely yours,

  Li Nan

  译文

  收信人:约翰逊先生

  发信人:李楠

  主题:长江西岸撞船事故,无伤亡

  日期:2005年4月4日

  昨晚在距武汉不远处,长江上的两艘船在浓雾中相撞。其中一艘为装运木材的货船,正向长江驶来;另外一艘是国家渡船正从九江到武汉正常航行。

  但是由于恶劣的天气,船长知道撞击发生前几秒才意识到危险。 结果根本没有时间避免事故的发生。

  幸运的是船员和乘客都没有伤亡,但船的损害相当严重。

  船运部门发言人说会成立事故调查小组彻底调查事故原因。

  你诚挚的:李楠
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 楼主| maoerjordan 发表于 07-12-26 15:08:42 | 只看该作者
然后是大作文了哈:

选自权威模拟题的范文
06考试中心张剑八套题一
1)        describe the cartoon and interpret its implications,
2)        discuss the relationship between tradition and modernization,  
3)        offer your views and comments.
本题为图画加提纲式作文。漫画中是一个太监正伺候皇帝用咖啡的场景。题目是“紫禁城中的星巴克”。可见,漫画要表现的是传统与现代,东西方文化的融合。按照指导语的要求,文章必须包括三方面的内容;(1)描述漫画及其揭示的问题(2)讨论传统文化与现代的关系(3)提出你自己的观点、看法。
In the cartoon we see a servant bringing a cup of coffee for the emperor. The joke is that the idea of emperor and the idea of coffee do not usually come together. It is funny to think of the emperor drinking coffee. But the cartoon may yet have another meaning. It implies that emperor, if he were still there today, would learn to drink coffee. Modernization is a historical trend.
China is a country with a long history. It has special traditions and customs. They are the nation’s great treasures which we should do our best to preserve. However, as China opens up to the world, more and more foreign ideas and products come into country. How we take this western influence and what relationship should be established between the east and the west have become urgent questions for us to answer. For example, should we allow a coffee shop to be opened in the Forbidden City, a place which is thought to represent the essence of oriental life? Can the coffee shop integrate itself into the surrounding or will it from an eyesore?
I believe that we should be open-minded about western influence. If it is good, we should not refuse it. A coffee shop in the Forbidden City will not pose an threat to our traditional culture. It will instead provide a convenient resting place for visitors who have to walk through the huge palace. The spirit of the 21st century is one of cooperation and coexistence. We should allow different cultures to exist together and flourish together.

06考试中心张剑八套题二
Nowadays more people are buying lottery tickets. Study the following charts carefully and write an article on the issue of lottery. In your article, you should
1)        describe the phenomenon,
2)        analyze the phenomenon, and
3)        give your comments on it.
本题为图表加提纲式作文。写图表式作文的关键之一是把握指导语,因为它 给出了作文的基本要求,指出了写作方向;其次是对图表的相关数据进行描述、分析和评论,它们往往是写作的材料或论据。由本题的指导语可知:文章要求联系图表以彩票这一表象发表评论。作文的基本框架应为(1)描述现象(2)分析现象(3)发表你的看法。其次,两个图表显示的是两个调查结果。图表一反映了北京、上海、广州三个城市里梦想有一天中500万的人的比例,平均为70%,图表二反映了中奖后,人们想做的事。由此分析可知,图表一课用于描述现象,图表二可用于分析现象,作为考生论点(支持或反对买彩票)的论据。
Nowadays, more and more people, especially in big cities, become interested in buying lottery tickets(彩票). According to chart 1, averagely 70 percent of those polled in the survey, held in the three big cities, claimed to have dreamed of winning the big prize of five-million yuan. 85 percent of those polled in Guangzhou had had such a dream, compared with 65 percent and 60 percent, respectively, in Beijing and Shanghai.
The attraction of buying lottery tickets is obvious. The winner can get the biggest profit for the future with only a small investment. It realizes the beautiful dream of every participant—to be richer and to improve living standards. As is shown in Char 2, should they win a big lottery, 81.3% of  people  would buy a new house, 61.7% would buy save the money for their kid’s education. And a great proportion of people say they would put the money in the bank or use it for investment or touring. However, this phenomenon has also come under criticism. Some regard it as a kind of gambling, which is potentially addictive behavior.
In my opinion, buying lottery tickets is not so bad as some people think. Instead, it is good for society by creating new jobs and representing an important source of charity and sports causes. Of course, it is not a means of making money for individual we should encourage, because the result is hardly predictable. Therefore, we should take a positive but cautious attitude towards lottery buying behavior.

06考试中心张剑八套题三[推荐背诵]
Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should
1)        describe the drawing,
2)        interpret its implications
3)        give your comments
漫画内容:图画中,我们可以看到一匹抬起前腿、将要奔驰的骏马,题目为:千里之行,是从第一步开始的。可见,文章主题应围绕“第一步”语“千里之行”的关系展开讨论,可以讨论“起步”或“行动”的重要性。再看指导语可知,文章应以图画展开的内容为主题,(1)描述图画(2)阐述图画所要表达的含义(3)发表自己的看法。
As we can see in the picture, a horse is starting the first step in his journey vigorously. The prancing horse, together with the line of words beneath that every journey begins with the first step, implies the importance of beginnings, and the necessity of getting off to a right start in anything that one undertakes.
As we all know, the foundations of a building must be strong, or else the whole structure will fall down someday. The pioneering of any enterprise always contains the soul of it, in which is wrapped the whole motive, purpose and plan of the venture. The success of autumn crops depends on the initial steps taken in the spring. Therefore, it seems that the beginning point is dynamic and alive and often more important than any other point in the journey. When asked about the key to success, a successful author replied that the most helpful thing was to start writing. Without taking the first step, potential genius will contents itself with mediocrity. Only by trying, the first can produce the second, the second the third, and so on to the very goal.
In sum, there is a magic potential in the first step taken toward a successful end in view.            

06考试中心张剑八套题四
study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1)        describe the cartoon and problem it reveal,
2)        discuss the present situation in sports and other problems related to sports,
3)        offer you solutions
图画中,我们看到两个人在进行乒乓球比赛。而当比赛正酣的时候,其中一个选手把一边的球桌拉开,结果球没有碰到桌而落地。由漫画题目“如此取胜”可知,该漫画的主题是批评体育运动中选手为取得胜利而采用不正当手段的行为。接着,考生应按照指导语的要求,规划文章结构。文章可包括三方面的内容:1)描述漫画及其揭示的问题2)讨论体育运动的当前形式及其他相关问题3)提出你的解决方案。
The cartoon describes a table tennis match. One player launches a good attack, but his opponent pulls the table away and the Ping-Pong ball falls on the ground. The opponent wins, not by skill but by cheating. This cartoon reflects a general problem in the sports of today. Almost all Olympic Games are marred by scandals of cheating.
Take drug abuse(滥用药品) as example. Although the International Olympic Committee has forbidden the use of drugs and implemented urine and blood tests, there are still athletes who take risks, counting on their luck to escape the tests. It is probably the inevitable result of the change in the purpose of sports. Sports were once related with friendship and fair competition, but now more with nationalism, national anthems and national flags. People are encouraged not to appreciate individual’s skills and strengths, but to support their national teams. Sports are also related with personal success and money. If you win, you win fame and money. And for these, athletes will do anything, including cheating. This is long way off the original aim of sports of Olympics, which is to improve health, promote cooperation and teamwork, provide enjoyment and increase friendship.
To stop cheating in sports, it is not enough only to strengthen rules in competition. We should also highlight the original purpose of the sports and minimize negative influence of commerce and narrow nationalism. Moreover, those who stick to the spirit of sports should be rewarded even though they are not the winners.

¥¥06考试中心张剑八套题五¥¥[特别推荐]
         Now some Chinese college students are very dependent on their parents. Study the following picture carefully and write an essay, in which you should cover the following points:
1)        a description of the picture and the problems it reveals;
2)        the cause of these problems;
3)        your views on the phenomenon.
本题是图画加提纲式作文。本篇图画主题清晰易懂,指导语信息也很详细,所以审题较为简单。图画中,一位老父亲汗流浃背地抱着自己的大学生儿子在走,而儿子却无视父亲的辛劳,只顾自己在专心读书。再看指导语,可知作文的主题是:大学生缺乏独立性,给父母造成负担的问题。根据要求,文章应包括三部分内容:(1)描述图画及其揭示的问题,(2)分析引起的原因,(3)发表你对这一现象的看法。
How vivid and accurate the picture is in describing one of the most serious social problems concerning college students in China! As is shown in the picture, a college student, held in his father’s arm, concentrates on the book he is reading, whereas his father, sweating, carries him with great difficulty. It clearly reveals that in current China, college students are, more often than not, a burden for their parents to shoulder rather than independent young adults, as they should be.
It is widely known that recent years have witnessed a dramatic increase in various fees charged by the universities. High tuition fees, plus lodging and other expenses, have become a heavy burden for university students’ parents, many of whom are farmers or laid-off workers(下岗工人). Parents’ worries also come from the heavy dependency of today’s college students, many of whom are bookworms depending on their parents for everything, Some of them even send clothes home for their parents to wash. In their mind, it is indisputably parents’ duty to take care of them.
In my opinion, college students should be educated to stand on their own two feet. And government and education institutes should also help to relieve the parents’ economic burdens. Fortunately, some measures have been taken. For example, banks distribute loans to students; universities cut down charges on poor students and provide them with part time employment. As a result, we have witnessed some improvements but still there is a long way to go.
06考试中心张剑八套题六
Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should cover these points:
1)        a description of the picture;
2)        the problems it reveals;
3)        your views on the phenomenon.
本题为图画加提纲式作文。由于指导语对文章主题的提示较少,所以要确定主题,关键是看图。从图中我们看到,两个医生正若无其事地挤一条被单,但挤出来的钱而不是水。可见,作文主题是:医院缺乏医德,谋取暴利的问题。根据指导语,作文必须包括以下三点:(1)描述图画,(2)说明图画揭示的问题,(3)发表你对该现象的看法。
As is shown in this picture, two doctors are trying hard to squeeze a sheet, but out of our expectation(出乎意料), where they get from the wet sheet is not water but money.
Obviously, this picture implies a horrible phenomenon in China: what hospitals care most is earning money instead of saving lives. It is a secret from no one that some hospitals nowadays are making profits by prescribing more expensive medicine to patients or arranging unnecessary medical examinations for them. They get such a high profit hat it seems they’ve got the license to print money. What these hospitals forget is one crucial principle that should be observed as their doctrine—hospital should be the right place to save lives rather than somewhere to make undue profits.
Then how to avoid a further worsening of this tendency has become  hotly discussed topic in media. One measure is to make the purchasing process more transparent, thus to bring down the price of medicines. Moreover, the patients should be well informed so that they may buy cheaper medicine which has the same effects as the expensive one. We have confidence that, if sound measures are taken, hospitals will become a much purer place in the near future.

06考试中心张剑八套题七
Nowadays, many female college graduates find it very hard to fine a satisfying position because the employers set extra requirements for them to meet. Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay which you should
1)        describe the picture;
2)        discuss the causes of the phenomenon;
3)        find some solutions.
本题是图画加提纲式作文。指导语提供了写作背景,即由于雇主的附加要求,许多女大学生难以找到称心的工作。图画所反应的正是这一社会现象:雇主招聘女职工时要求年轻、漂亮,但对她们的待遇却极低,致使很多女性对工作可望而不可求,找不到工作。可见文章主题是:雇主高要求,女大学生找工作难的问题。具体内容应包括:(1)描绘图画(2)分析引起这一现象的原因(3)找出一些解决方案。
I was profoundly shocked by what I have seen in this picture. As is shown in the picture, employers are particular about the female applicants for vacancies. They have extra requirements that women job seekers should be young and beautiful, but ironically, they only offer the low-paying positions without retirement pension, welfares, and weekends.
What is reveled in this picture is a prevalent phenomenon in contemporary society. Some employers set very high standards for their female employees who must be not only qualified in education, but also outstanding in personal appearance. Therefore, it is not strange to hear reports about female graduates from famous universities failing to find a job because of the prejudices and the high standard held by the employers.
Then what can we do to tackle this problem? One of the solutions, in my opinion, is that a positive attitude should be created in society towards female applicants. Women can over perform men in many aspects such as carefulness, patience, delicacy. On the other hand, female employers also should have confidence and the firm belief hat if they are really, they can surely find a satisfactory job despite all the prejudices.
06考试中心张剑八套题八
Write an essay with the title “reading books in Printed Form or on Computer” in which you should
1)        analyze the strong points and the weak points of each one,
2)  tell your own preference and your reasons
本题是一篇标题加提纲式作文。文章的主题和基本框架在指导语中给出了要求。文章要求以“Reading Books in Printed Form or on Computer(读印刷书还是电子书)”为题(同时也是文章的主题),(一)分析印刷书和电子书的优缺点;(二)说明你自己的喜好及其原因。

The popularization of computer has made it possible to read books on computer. With it, there is much discussion about whether e-books will replace traditional print-on-paper books.
Some people say they like only e-books, which are quicker and more convenient to get and use. To get a needed book, one has to spend much time or money in searching for buying it in bookstores, but one can just type in the title, author or other related information of the book to find it in minutes on internet. Sometimes one can even read the full content to a digitized book free of charge or instantly discuss about a book in an online forum. Moreover, a lot of information of books can be stored in small compact disc, which is easy to take.
Other people, however, think printed books are still necessary. In the first place, too much time in front of the computer can cause eyestrain or increase radiation risks. Second, a printed book can be read at your convenience .One can read in bed before sleep or during a boring journey, without fussing with a computer.
In sum, since e-books and printed books have their respective advantages and can complement each other, I would like to combine the two ways to meet different needs. For quick reference, a digitized book will probably be useful. To appreciate a poem or a novel, I prefer the traditional way of reading on printed books.

三、06毕金献冲刺试题解析十套题
06毕金献冲刺试题解析十套题模拟1
Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should
1)        describe the picture,
2)        interpret its implications in life, and
3)        support your vies with examples.
图画主要内容:一个穿黑色的人在雪山冰川上攀登。
  The picture presents us with a scene when a young man is climbing up a high and steep mountain. As there is no ready path leading up to the top, the climber is confronted with difficulties, obstacles, and even dangers. Without sufficient strength, iron will, enough patience and courage, it seems impossible for him to reach the summit.
  The case with the climber, I suppose, is true of people in all walks of life. Anyone who longs for a meaningful and successful life has to ascend from the starting point up to his/her goal as the climber does. Consequently, the fight for success can be won only by those who have strong resolutions and inflexible spirits. Successes can never be attained without painstaking effort and perseverance.
  Countless facts justify my arguments. Thomas A. Edison, who was once a paper boy on the train, would never have become a great scientist and inventor, hadn’t he made persistent endeavors to achieve success. As a college graduate, I’m resolved to pursue graduate studies and achieve something significant in my field despite of any troubles, hindrances, or even failures. I believe that there is nothing hard in the world only men lack a strong mind.
06毕金献冲刺试题解析十套题模拟2
Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should
1)        describe the picture,
2)        interpret its meaning, and
3)        state your plan to do so
图画内容:食指和拇指抓住一个硬币往一个小猪储蓄罐里投,储蓄罐上面有两顶学士帽。

  The picture shows that an adult hand holding a gold coin is going to drop it into a piggybank, on which two academic caps are represented. The picture is simple and its meaning is clear: young adults should manage to finance themselves for their higher education rather than rely on their families for support.
  The market economy and competitive society prompt most young people to drive themselves vigorously studying for higher academic degrees, and some of them are seeking opportunities to study abroad. However, great expense hinders them from their goals. In overcoming the financial obstacle, self-reliance is most advisable while dependence on parents or relatives is shameful.
  As an adult student, I am planning to pursuer graduate studies by work-study strategy. First, I shall go through my first two-year course by both winning scholarships with excellent academic achievements and taking part-time jobs. Then, I’ll interrupt my regular course to work for a certain organization or company for one or two years. This I shall do for the double purpose of saving enough money for further education and getting some knowledge of social conditions, which may help to turn my book learning into something practical. When I resume my graduate studies, I shall finish my program with a both creative and practical thesis.

06毕金献冲刺试题解析十套题模拟3

Study the following graph carefully and write an essay which should cover
1)        general situation of crime victims in U.S.,
2)        the most frequent victims and their implications, and
3)        your comment.

图表作文:年龄和犯罪种类的直方图。12-15岁中,暴力犯罪51人,偷盗126人;16-19岁中,暴力犯罪65人,偷盗119人;20-24岁中,暴力犯罪60人,偷盗119人;25-34岁中,暴力犯罪42人,偷盗88人;35-49岁中,暴力犯罪20人,偷盗73人;50-64岁中,暴力犯罪9人,偷盗44人;65岁以上,暴力犯罪6人,偷盗23人。

Although highly industrialized, the U.S. society is characterized by crimes of violence and theft. The crime victims, as the graph shows, cover a wide range of age groups, from teenagers to the elderly. People aged 12-15 are the most frequent victims of theft, and those aged 16-19 occupy first place in the violence victims. In general, youngsters under 24 are the prime victims of both crimes.
          It is obvious that the U.S. young generation is living in danger of suffering and committing crimes, which indicates the fatal wound of U.S, education and the deterioration of its social morality. Growing up in the circumstance filled with unchecked abuse of guns and drugs, violence on TV and in the movies, racial discrimination, etc. the American youngsters can hardly escape the destiny of being their victims.
          It is also clear that the safety of the U.S. people as a whole is seriously threatened by crimes. The American society, I am afraid, would be ruined if no drastic measures were to be taken to check crimes of violence and theft, and to strengthen both school and public education in morality and ethics.
06毕金献冲刺试题解析十套题模拟4

Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay entitled “after picnics”
in the essay you should
1)        describe the pictures,
2)        give your comment on the phenomena, and
3)        suggest possible measures to change them.
图画作文:野餐完后,有两幅图,左图上面到处是凌乱不堪的报纸;右图是下雪后的杂乱情景,到处是矿泉水瓶和罐头可乐瓶。
  The picture are true records of some people’s unhealthy behavior, in which we can see all the wastes discarded by the picnickers: refuse newspapers, plastic bottles, tin cans, food wrapping and leftovers. The litter in the public places witnesses certain people’s uncivilized conduce for lack of social morality and the sense of environmental protection. Obviously, their foolish behavior results in destruction of natural landscapes, violation of public sanitation, and pollution of environment.
  These people may be unconscious of their wrongdoings, but it is this unconsciousness that is most worrying and shocking, for it signifies a deep-rooted bad habit that could hardly be rid of without sufficient education and social supervision.
  Unfortunately, this phenomenon is not rare or occasional. Besides littering, many ill habits, such as spitting everywhere, making terrible noises regardless of time and place, rude or even violent manners toward others, etc., are all incompatible with modern civilization. Although such people are in minority, their bad behavior is causing serious problems.
The effective measures to be taken to change the situation may include strengthening public education, making related laws and regulations, establishing strict social supervision and penalty systems.
I believe our society will become more beautiful and healthful when everyone is consciously watchful of his/her behavior.

06毕金献冲刺试题解析十套题模拟5
study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should
1)        describe the picture,
2)        analyze the causes of the problem, and
3)        propose possible solutions.
图片描述了某城市塞车,车辆排长龙的情景。
The picture presents a real traffic scene in which endless columns of vehicles have jammed the road, making movement impossible. Much valuable time is wasted and many important businesses are delayed in the helpless waiting for progress. It’s no exaggeration to say that the inconvenience and losses caused by traffic jams are inestimable.
Traffic problem is an inescapable outcome of social and economical development, and therefore is common to most capital cities all over the world. The accelerated urbanization, the rapid increase of private cars, and the lag of road construction are responsible for traffic congestion.
As the traffic problem involves many factors, there is no single measure that can solve it once for all. For the present, realistic solutions may include:
To give priority to improving and developing mass-transit system, both ground and underground;
To set up proper limits to private vehicles;
To perfect traffic regulations and management, and
To advocate bicycling or walking between home and office.
However, any successful resolution of the problem depends not so mush on public concerns and appeals as on the initiative and determination of the local municipal administrations.
06毕金献冲刺试题解析十套题模拟6

Study the following chart carefully and write an essay in which you should
1)        analyze the chart,
2)        interpret its meaning, and
3)        suggest possible measure to take.
图表作文:关于劳动力的一些曲线。

The chart shows that the U.S. workforce, about 145 million in number, matched job demands well in 2000. However, the gap between workforce and jobs, especially skilled jobs, appeared soon after 2001. The shortage of skilled workers is estimated to grow to about 5.5 million in 2010, and 25 million in 2020.

The cartoonist warns that the supply of labor is about to fall seriously short of demand, which means that the economical development will be hampered by the scarcity of labor, especially skilled workers, over the next 20 years. The labor squeeze may result from the fact that the existing workforce is going to get out soon, and the feeder pool just isn’t coming up.

Possible precautions against the threat of labor shortage may include: providing effective job training for most employees, bidding up wages for skilled workers, tempting older workers to stay on the jobs they are skilled in, and lobbying the government to raise the share of skilled immigrants. Anyhow, what Americans are to do least is ignore the severity of the problem.

06毕金献冲刺试题解析十套题模拟7

Study the following map graph carefully and write an essay in which you should
1)        describe oil fields distribution,
2)        state the information the map graph tends to convey, and
3)        give your comment.
图画作文:一幅关于油田发展的地图。
The draft map shows the distribution of oil fields discovered over the five continents. As illustrated on the map, there are only five oil fields developed before 1950 that are located in Asia and America. The number of oil fields primarily developed between 1950-1980 is increased up to eight that are situated respectively in America, Asia and Africa. The new and potential oil fields marked with circles are much greater in number than the previous ones. They are scattered all around the globe except Africa.
The map graph tends to tell us the growing quantity of oil fields by which the location countries have made and will make fortunes because of the reliance of modern society on oil, without which our life and production would come to a standstill. The map graph presents us an optimistic picture showing that Asia and America have the greatest potential for new oil production. It might be logical to expect continuing falls in the price of oil throughout the world.
As a matter of fact, however, the world oil resources are limited and irreproducible. Endless oil exploitation and consumption would mean nothing but digging man’s own grave. The recent soar of oil price is the latest warning of the danger. The best way out seems to turn to renewable energy sources.
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06毕金献冲刺试题解析十套题模拟8

Read the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in which you should
1)        describe the cartoon,
2)        state its main idea, and
3)        give your comment.
图画作文:一个由灯泡机械等等组成的自由女神形象。

          The cartoon displays a robot shaped like the Statue of Liberty in New York, which is an emblem of the United States. His right hand holds high a glowing electric bulb while his left hand grips a notice board with a poster on it: “U.S. High Teach Drive”. On the left of the robot’s head are the words be uttered, asking people to send her programmers, scientists, electrical engineers, researchers, technicians, computer systems specialists, and so forth.

          The main idea of the cartoon is quite plain: in the intensively competitive era of high-tect, The contest for superiority focuses on technical personnel, especially scientific talents. The cartoon reveals the U.S. scarcity of highly qualified scientific and technical workers and its eager desire for them.

It would be no exaggeration to say that the 21st century is marked by the fight for educated elites.  Every nation, with no exception of our own, should put its personnel strategy before everything else if it is unwilling to lag behind in development. Now we can see that the worldwide struggle for winning gifted or outstanding scientists and technologists is become more and more intense.
   
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1)        describe the cartoon,
2)        state its main idea, and
3)        propose possible solutions
图画作文:两个人在骑自行车,往相反的方向骑,左边一个人后面有面旗子:能源;右边一个人后面有面旗子:环境。

          The cartoon depicts a vivid scene in which two strong cyclists riding two similar bicycle labeled  “ENERGY        “ and “ENVIRONMENT” respectively, ate furiously dashing head on against each other. The most striking feature of the cartoon may be the dripping sweat of the cyclists and the single front wheel shared by the two bikes, which shows the intensity and inevitability of their struggle.

        The main idea of the cartoon is apparent: the need to produce and consume energy comes into acute conflict with the need to preserve the environment. The rapid expansion of populations and their increasing demands for a better living lie at the root of deterioration of the natural environment. The steady augmentation of energy production and consumption required by unrestricted economic growth has led to the disastrous consequence of environmental pollution.

        Can we find a way to get out of the awkward situation? I presume it of vital importance for man to realize that he is an integral part of nature, the destruction of which means the perishing of himself. I also have confidence in modern technology and genius which will enable man to change present energy patterns to avoid environmental pollution. The appearance of ecological products promise a bright prospect of settling the energy-environment contradiction.
四、06恩波最后五套题[个人感觉范文都不大好]
06恩波最后五套题Test one
漫画大概意思是两个人相撞,一个人倒了坐地上的情景。
Life means interaction with people
The two men in the drawing seem to have bumped into each other head-on. One of them has dropped down to the ground. They are staring at each other in surprise.
I can’t help wondering what they would do next. How will they solve the issue? They are obviously two strangers who happen to bump against each other. It’s an accident, one we would come across on a daily basis. However, such an accident may develop into a bitter quarrel or an ugly fight. In some extreme cases, the loss of life can be caused.
In our daily routines, remember to say you are sorry if you do somebody else wrong, and be ready to be forgiving if you are offended. When you have an issue with somebody, try to find a nice way out. As the old saying goes, “Out of blow friendship grows.” Well, I hope the two men in the drawing can settle their “collision” in a friendly way. After all, life means interaction with people, though sometimes rather unexpectedly.
06恩波最后五套题Test two
漫画内容:有人要跳楼,后面有人要营救,下面却围了一大群人观看,甚至还有人出租望远镜赚钱。
Let love stay
In the drawing, we can see that a man is about to kill himself by jumping down from the tall building. Some rescuers are doing their best to save him. A large crowd has gathered on the ground, watching. What hurts me and makes my blood hot is the young guy. He is such a money maniac that he starts his moneymaking by renting out telescope there. And some people seem to be more interested in the spectacle than concerned about the death of a desperate person. What a heartless lot they are.
The picture reveals a saddening phenomenon in our society that the obsession of money in some people has driven away the humanity in them.
Look at the picture: a life is at stake. Let’s do something to save him. Encouraging remarks may cheer him up to give up the foolish idea. Heart-to-heart talks may remove the thought that has troubled him. The call of love will wake up the hope in his heart. The love from our society will certainly give him the courage to live. So I call to people to stretch out our helping hands. Let love stay and let life stay.
06恩波最后五套题Test three
漫画内容:一男孩开水龙头,水流了一地。
Let’s save our natural resources
What is depicted in the cartoon is not an uncommon phenomenon: the public tap is running non-stop and a man is about to fetch some water for his own use. Clearly the man has not the least intention of turning off the tap to save water. He seems to be enjoying the running of the water. The drawing reveals the wasteful disposition in some people.
We know that the world is faced with a great resource crisis. Time and again we red in papers about shortage of water, energy, grain, etc. With a huge population, China, in particular, is under even great pressure of natural resources. Statistics show that half of population in China suffers from water shortage. The guy in the picture should be ashamed of himself, for he is wasting a precious resource. Water means life to people in drought-stricken areas.
Now our country is striving for building an economical society, which calls on everyone to do his or her share to save the limited resources we have. Maybe we can begin with a good habit of switching off the light when we leave, and turning off the tap after using it. Let’s save our natural resources.
06恩波最后五套题Test four Are you well prepared?
漫画内容:一个戴眼睛的家伙,头戴学士帽,周围都是翻过来倒着的大碗,大碗的周围都是脚印。明显是说找工作的事情的。
In the picture a young man is wandering in a forest of bowls, leaving his footprints everywhere. Obviously he is looking for his rice-bowl—a job, and he hasn’t found what he wants. He feels frustrated, “Why so difficult for a college graduate to find a job?”
Look at the picture again: though he is surrounded by rice-bowls, he fails to pick up one. Yes, these bowls are overturned. If he only turned one of them over, he would be sure to have one. Clearly he is blind to the chance at hand, and is not prepared to take his chance. Or in other words, would he be able to have a real career? Clearly he is not well prepared in that aspect.
The point to find a job is to prepare yourself to identify and take the chance, more importantly, to prepare yourself well, mentally, intellectually and physically to take the challenge in front of you. Remember, “ Luck favors only the prepared mind.”
06恩波最后五套题Test five
漫画内容:两夫妇到龙王庙拜神。“求您保佑我孩子考上大学,这柱香可花了我9999元啊!”简直傻冒!!
“Heaven helps those who help themselves”
Parents are kneeling in front of a god, burning incense and praying for the future of their son. The irony about the cartoon is that while the couple spend ninety-nine hundred and ninety-nine yuan on an offer to god in the hope that their son could enter college, will god answer their prayer? I’m afraid not.
The drawing well illustrates the prevailing tendency among people, that is, to worship god. People seem to believe in the superpower of gods of various kinds. They pray for promotion, for marriage, for admission into university as is the case in the drawing.
But an old saying goes like this:” Heaven helps those who help themselves”. Therefore, to achieve what you want you have to work hard. It is wise of parents to understand their children and help them realize their dreams, rather than praying to god for children. Pray stop worshiping god! Your fate is in your hands.  
五、05索玉柱最后五套题
05索玉柱最后五套题一[背]
Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should1)describe the drawing, 2)interpret its symbolic meaning , and  3) give your comment.
图画内容:两人开着帆船在星空照耀下航行。文字:“理想如星辰---在星光的指引下,我们可像航海者一样,勇敢前行……”
What a thought-provoking picyure: two people are braving the world in their small boat at night, the waves roaring and the stars shinning. Inevitably there are dangerous rocks at sea, but with their ideals in mind, they pluck up their courage to forge ahead.
  What the cartoon symbolically reveals is that ideals, just like stars, can spur us to break through the darkness into our desired goal. Life is unimaginable without ideals. Helen Keller, without ideals inspired by her dearest teacher, would not have “seen ” so many things through mere touch, and hence would not have moved the world by her touching story. In the same way, Zhang Haidi, given her poor physical condition, would not have become a well-known writer without her ambition to rival life. With ideals encouraging us, we are moving forward more eagerly and confidently.
   As dark night is formidable, so is a life void of ideals. Ideals are stars overhead, leading us to plough the sea of difficulties. With ideals in mo\\mind, we can cure fatal diseases; tame the ocean and we have every reason to believe that the future can only be better.
05索玉柱最后五套题二[推荐背诵]
Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should
1.        Describe the drawing,
2.        Interpret its symbolic meaning, and
3.        Give your comment.
图片内容:三个登山者在雪山攀登,尽管环境险恶,仍然不断向前。

Vitality on Great Peaks
In the picture, we cannot simply see a quite snow-covered mountain, but a mountain of vigorous life. A hard indisputable reason remains: three mountain-climbers just represent “vitality on great peaks”, which is written at the bottom of the picture.
It is those people who dare to challenge the highest peaks that deserve the most fascinating sight of life. Only when you dare to burn the bridge, can you push forward whole-heartedly and win the battle wonderfully. Only when you are willing to leave the clam life of dwelling on your quiet farm, can you appreciate the overwhelming beauty of surging billows, which will inspires you to find the true meaning of life. And the true meaning of life lies in the challenging of the past, which is symbolized by the foot of the snow mountain when it comes to the picture offered above.
In reality, some people are inclined to be content with their present life and they are willing to pass their life in a steady lifestyle. Some others, however, are constantly aggressive, almost restless in pursuing their aims. It is hard to say the former way is dull but it is really the latter that will make our life as colorful and beautiful as the magnificent scenery. Put it the other way around, when the sightseer is standing on the top of a mountain, his sense of victory is beyond any limited description.
05索玉柱最后五套题三
Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should
1.descibe the drawing,
2.interpret its symbolic meaning, and
3.give your comments.
漫画内容:一家伙开着小车往阶梯上爬。四个阶梯,从下往上依次有中文写着:维修费,油价,车险,考证费。图下面有一行字:“车价降了,费用涨了”。是说目前小汽车费用人们难以负担。

Enjoy day, Accept Night
Currently, car price war in China contributes to the ever-increasing car sales. As the cartoon indicates, many people take the opportunity to realize their car dream, but without noticing the rising costs in maintenance, gasoline, insurance and training.[开门见山,描述图画内容,表明主题]
What the cartoon seems to suggest is that to afford the luxury, you have to be financially and psychologically prepared. There’s no denying the fact that a car provides you with comfort and convenience, but before buying a car you have to take into account its costs. In the wake of your owning a car, the annual cost May rang from several thousands to tens of thousands yuan. If relevant costs increase, you will have to face it as it is.[从正反两方面论证车价降费用涨的矛盾现象]
As far as I am concerned, I would rather take a taxi than buy a car myself. Besides the costs, you will have to take great trouble to find a parking lot, to worry about a possible accident, to guard against its being stolen…. Furthermore, you will find yourself lazy by owning a car: wherever you go, you are at the wheels; in the long run, it may damage your health. Anyhow, to buy or not to buy in the face of lowering car price and relevant rise of costs, the choice is yours.[从中得到的启迪]
—》时间不断向前,强者永攀高峰!《—
05索玉柱最后五套题四
Recently a newspaper launched a discussion: “A women’s career, particularly if it is successful, is often blamed of the break-up of a marriage, but never a man’s”, according to this, you can write an essay in which you should
1.        Interpret the saying,
2.        Give your comments on the asying, and
3.        Write a title for your essay.

Women are not Scapegoat
  A self-evident prejudice against is made clear by the given saying that a woman’s career, particularly if it is successful, is often blamed for the break-up of a marriage, but never a man’s. What I want to say as a comment is that women are not scapegoat.
This saying is a kind of prejudice. On the one hand, women should also have the rights to have their career. The prejudice lies in the fact that it has been branded in our mind that women should be inferior to men and they should be at home to foster children and help their husband. On the other hand, if there is a failure of marriage, it is a problem of the both sides’ feelings rather than anyone’s responsibilities. Or sometimes there can be one side that should be responsible for the failure but it is not necessarily women’s fault. Besides, though movements for women’s rights have achieved much in the past, there is still much room for improvement. Where there is room for improvement, there is such prejudice against women.
As a conclusion, what has been traditionally taken for granted in our mind should be replaced by more rational ideas. From now on, it should be prescribed in our mind as law of various nations that everyone is born equal and they should be on equal terms.

05索玉柱最后五套题五
Enormous changes tookl place in the last two decades of the 20th century, which is revealed in the changes on infrastructure construction in many cities. Here are two correspondent pictures. You are required to
1)        Compare and contrast the pictures,
2)        Interpret the causes of what has taken place in the pictures, and
3)        Make your own comments.
图片内容:左图是10年前的向阳街,破旧肮脏;右图是10年后的向阳街,笔直,干净,宽敞。
As two pictures features dearly, ten years ago, Xiangyang Street was a mess: broken road, dirty houses, and filthy water running everywhere. The years later, Xiangyang Street has taken on a new look: it’s now the straightest of streets without a trace of filth to be seen.
        What the set of pictures reveals is that the last ten years have witnessed enormous changes in infrastructure construction in many cities of china. Why does this happen? The past decade is a time when China has been booming at an unprecedented speed. With its GDP increasing over 9 percent, China’s economic advancement has in turn quickened the pace of fundamental constructions, including roads, sewage system and other public utilities. The new look of the city proves to be beneficial to the residents in more than one way: on the one hand, they have a better living environment, and on the other hand, their beautiful city can attract tourists from home and abroad, thus helping to boost the local economy.
        To develop is the ultimate truth. A wealthy country is the source of happiness for its people, so it is up to everybody to make every effort to make our city, our country a better place to live in.
七、05考试中心八套题
05考试中心八套题模拟一〈同06考试中心张剑模拟题三〉
05考试中心八套题模拟二
Read the following saying and write an essay in which you should
1) interpret the saying,
2) give your comments on the saying, and
3) write a title for your essay.
A woman\'s career, particularly if it is successful, is often blamed for the break-up of a marriage, but never a man\'s.
Who bears the blame?
    While people are shocked by the steady rise of divorce rate, many of them are seriously contemplating the causes of this tendency. Unfortunately, some of them are attributing it to the successful careers of the women. In their eyes, a successful woman devoted to her career will certainly neglect her duties to her husband, her children and thus results in the break-up of the family. This accusation is unfair and absolutely unacceptable.
    Shifting the blame to women\'s career, this accusation ignores the more fundamental factors that often underlie the disruption of a marriage, like sex problems, financial difficulties, some personal misfortunes or so-called \"affairs outside the marriage\". Actually, this accusation is deeply rooted in the traditional prejudice against women, which insists that a woman should stay in the kitchen, at home, taking care of her husband and children. And thus the woman spending too much time on her career will certainly bear the blame for the break-up of the marriage.
Clearly, to blame a career woman for the break-up of the marriage is groundless. The important point is that only when people probe the problems in the marriage in an objective way can they find the solutions to the problems.
05考试中心八套题模拟三[同06考试中心张剑模拟八]
05考试中心八套题模拟四[推荐背诵]
Write an article to an English newspaper discussing laid-off workers and re-employment in China. In your article you should
    1) describe briefly the present situation of unemployment.
    2) analyze the causes of it.
3) give advice on re-employment.
Recent years have witnessed a steady rise of unemployment rate in China. On the one hand, factories are either introducing more automated equipments or simply closing down. On the other hand, more and more workers are being laid off.
    The present situation of unemployment can be attributed to several factors. For one thing, intense competition from private and foreign enterprises is reducing many state-owned factories to bankruptcy, which renders a large proportion of workers jobless. For another, the arrival of information age and the rapid high-tech development are reshaping the factories, which means that fewer workers will do all the work and thus the unemployment.
   To solve this problem, the government should try to create more job opportunities for the workers. In the meantime, the workers themselves will have to \"go back to schools\" to receive reeducation or training so as to adjust themselves to the new requirements of the job market.

05考试中心八套题模拟五

Look at the following chart provided by the provincial consumers\' association. Write an essay to illustrate the information of the chart accompanied by your comments.              

People are more and more conscious of their rights as consumers. As the chart by the provincial consumers\' association shows, they are more concerned about the quality of products they buy. Nearly 60 percent of the claims they made in 2002 aim at it, in comparison with the claims to the other aspects like prices, measurements, sales contracts, safety and advertisements. And as expected, of all the categories of goods and sectors, daily commodities, service sector and household electronic and electrical appliances suffer higher rates of complaints from customers, the rates of which were 28.91%, 27.35% and 22.25% respectively in 2002. Complaints against other sectors are relatively fewer.
People show more attention to the quality of products and services because the false and fake products and products of inferior quality, plus inefficient and in many cases bad services are extremely common. The situation is not just harming the consumers\' rights and interests; it is damaging people\'s trust and confidence in our manufacturers and service providers as well.   
It is high time for both our government and business sectors to take action to improve their work. Otherwise, our national reform and economic development will suffer enormously.
05考试中心八套题模拟六   

Something is terribly wrong with this Chinese company. As illustrated in the table, of a total number of 160 staff, managers are 25, accounting for nearly 16 percent, while the 65 supervisors constituting almost 41 percent. The percentage of workers on the assembly lines only amounts to a little over 43 percent. On the other hand, the table indicates that, of the total amount of payment, manager gets 1.5 million, plus 1.95 million to the supervisors, which totaled 3.45 million, accounting for 83 percent of the entire amount. The workers who are the mainstay of the company get only 0.7 million, about only 16 percent.
    That kind of inverted hierarchy will have negative effects on the company, the most obvious of which is that more managers and supervisors will mean more departments and positions. And that will surely cause less efficiency. Meanwhile, the ill-balanced payment system will definitely dampen the workers\' enthusiasm and weaken their motivation for they feel they are being underpaid and exploited.
   It is highly imperative for the company to reform its structure and payment system. Otherwise it won\'t take long for the company to go into bankruptcy.
05考试中心八套题模拟七
Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay of 160--200 words. Your essay should meet the following requirements:
1) Interpret the meaning of the cartoon;
2)give your comments on the phenomenon

It is widely known that employers or leaders in factories, companies, schools and government departments usually have a larger say in almost all matters. As described in the cartoon, the over-bearing boss is punishing his employee because he wants to resign his job. Compared with the arrogant and dominant boss, the little employee looks so helpless and pitiful.
    Though exaggerated, that kind of phenomenon is present everywhere. In some people\'s eyes, their huge wealth or high positions give them an absolute power over all others\' decisions, choices and even ways of living. Anyone who defies their decisions or orders are simply punished. However, these powerful guys are denying other people their rights to make their own decisions and their behaviors are undermining the morals of a liberal and democratic society.
    It is my conviction that this is an equal and democratic society in which everyone is entitled to the rights to make his own choices. And everybody, powerful or powerless, rich or poor, should learn to respect each other and thus makes this world a better place to live in.
05考试中心八套题模拟八
     Write an essay that conveys the information in the following chart accompanied by your comments.

The two pie graphs give us a clear idea of the great changes in employment by major service sector taking place from 1980 through 1996. The largest employer in 1980 that shared more than 50% of the total employment gave way to wholesale, retail, import/export trades, restaurants and hotels, which took a share of nearly 35% of that in 1996. This was followed by community, social and personal services, whose employment percentage rose from 16.5% to 21.4%. Of particular note is the rapid growth in the employment by financing, insurance, real estate and business services, which ranked second in growth rates among the five sections. Transport, storage and communication also had a steadily rising share in the entire employment.
     It is clear that the growing consumption needs are the direct cause of the improvement in employment by service sector. It is also evident that the increasing orientation of Hong Kong economy towards services has played an important role. And with the continuously rapid expansion of the trade in services, Hong Kong\'s status as a major trade, finance and business services center in the Asia-Pacific region will be further deepened and strengthened.
     I am confident that with the support from mainland China, the prospects of Hong Kong\'s economy and employment will become brighter and brighter.
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 楼主| maoerjordan 发表于 07-12-26 15:15:08 | 只看该作者
因为现在我在论坛时间不长,还不能发附件,所以篇幅很大,大作文的有些图也没办法粘过来。不过向大家保证,能发附件的时候,补上。尤其是大作文,我的东东本来是有各种颜色字体和下划线划出了重点句的。
顺便请教大家,我要多少积分才能发附件上来呢?
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兰色天使 发表于 07-12-26 15:45:43 | 只看该作者
谢谢了,你辛苦,我也辛苦,呵呵
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zidance 发表于 07-12-26 16:02:03 | 只看该作者
50还是100吧。
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favor0315 发表于 07-12-26 17:05:02 | 只看该作者
[s:2] [s:2]
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sinpe 发表于 07-12-26 17:45:13 | 只看该作者

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谢谢楼主!!!辛苦了!!!
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