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endlessflight 发表于 08-7-27 11:20:25 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
对某种社会现象、倾向或社会问题进行剖析的文章往往在文章一开始首先引出这种现象或问题,然后评论。本节句型就适用于这种开头。



11  Recently the  rise in/phenomenon of/problem of/question of  ... has drawn/aroused public/popular/grave/world-wide attention caused /aroused wide/general/considerable/international concern arisen /loomed up /cropped up as controversial /as noteworthy/more distinctly for settlement

  11.1 Recently, the alarm about the problem of the use of genetic technologies on human beings have caused wide public concern, and understandably so. With nuclear energy threatening global catastrophe and with so many other technological advances visibly damaging the quality of life, who would wish to have scientists tampering with man's inner nature? Indeed, fear of such manipulation may amuse even more anxiety than fear of death.

最近,有关把遗传技术用于人类自身而产生的问题的警示已引起了公众的广泛关注。这是可以理解的。核能开发正威胁着全球的生存,其它许多技术进步也正明显地危害生活的质量。在这种情况下,谁还会希望科学家来任意改变人体内部机能呢?确实,害怕对人的操纵所引起的担忧可能会超过对死亡的害怕。

  11.2 Recently psychologists have found only about two percent of adults use their creativity, compared with ten percent of seven-year-old children. When five-year-olds were tested, the result soared to ninety percent! The findings set off many people thinking. Curiosity and originality are daily occurrences for the small child, but somehow most of us lose the freedom and flexibility of the child as we grow older. The need to follow "directions" and "do-it-right", plus the many societal constraints we put on ourselves, prevent us from using our creative potential.

  最近,心理学家发现在使用自己创造力方面,成人只有2%,而7岁的儿童竟有10%。如果在5岁的儿童中测试,这个数上升到90%。这些发现引起许多人思索。好奇心和创造性每天可在小孩子身上发现,而当我们逐步长大成人,多数人丧失了孩子的那种自由和灵活性。“按常规去做”,“按正确的去做”,以及种种社会的清规戒律把我们束缚住了,使我们无法发挥自己的创造潜力。



12   Recently the  issue/problem/question  of... has been in the limelight/brought into focus/brought to public attention/posed among the general public.

  12.1 The problem of development vs. environment has now been in the limelight. Nowhere is the clash more visible than in China, where the world's largest population faces pollution, deforestation and acid rain on a large scale.

  现在发展与环境的问题已成为人们议论的中心。在中国这对矛盾表现得尤为明显。这个世界上人口最多的国家正面临着大量的环境污染、森林减少以及酸雨的袭击。



13   In   recent/the past  5 years, many  cities/nations/people  have  been faced /plagued /troubled with/experienced/witnessed /undergone  the/a(n) serious problem of/acute shortage of/alarming increase in

  13.1 In recent years many factories of our country have been faced with the problem of how to make their workers more productive. Seeing many idle workers smoking, chatting, or playing cards during the working hours, some experts claim that the solution is to increase economic reward. Other people feel that "the iron rice bowl" should be roughly smashed. But does mere money lead to greater productivity?

  近年来我国许多工厂一直面临着如何提高工人的生产效率的问题。针对许多工人上班的无所事事,抽烟,聊天或打牌的现象,有些专家主张通过增加经济报酬来解决。另一些人认为应彻底打破铁饭碗。但是增加钱是否就能提高生产率呢?



  13.2 In recent years, China has experienced an alarming increase in juvenile crime ------ that is, crime committed by individuals who haven't come of age. Whether the category is murder or robbery, mugging or rape, the story is the same: juvenile crime is on the rise. Our society has traditionally treated the juvenile as a special kind of offender, one who warrants punishment different from that given to an adult, even though the crime may be the same. Now it is time we asked ourselves: Does the treatment work?

  最近几年,中国的青少年犯罪率急剧上升。不管那些没成年人的犯罪涉及到谋杀、偷盗、抢劫或是强奸,情形是一样的:青少年犯罪在增加。我们社会的传统做法是把这些青少年当成一种特殊的罪犯处理,尽管他们的罪行和成年人一样,但所给的惩罚和成年人不同。现在该是问一问我们自己的时候了:这种做法是否有效?



14   One of the searching/burning/pressing/interesting questions/problems facing/confronting our nation/society/world today is ...

  14.1 One of the basic questions facing our society today is: What promise or threat does new technology hold for our global future? Since the decisions our society makes about technological development will undoubtedly have tremendous consequences in the years to come, it is urgently necessary to explore this question, especially by examining science and technology in their relationship to the development of humanity.

  当今社会面临的基本问题之一是:新技术会给世界的将来带来什么样的希望或威胁?由于我们的社会所作出的关于技术发展的决定会毫无疑问对未来产生巨大影响,因此探索这个问题,尤其是通过检查科学技术与人类发展的关系来这样做就变得非常紧迫和必要了。



  14.2 It has become apparent to us that one of the biggest problems confronting our Chinese education today is the increasing vocationalization of our colleges and universities. Throughout the country schools are under economic pressure to become job-training centers and employment agencies. All courses are geared to cater to the business needs.

  很明显中国的教育现在面临的最大问题之一是高等院校职业化倾向。在经济发展的压力下,全国许多大学成了职业培训中心或就业市场机构。课程的设置都一昧迎合市场的需要。


[ 本帖最后由 princewang 于 2008-7-27 23:57 编辑 ]
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