(转)【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（第22期）

怪怪的，中国人说话的思路~~BBC报道时用的是milk scandal这个词。
Milk scandal will result in the nonconfidence towards public food security.[s:3] 可否？

1.从大量呈现的证据来看，我们能够很确定地得出这样一个结论：三峡工程将会永远改变无数人的生活。
2.Judging from the reams of evidence presented,we can safely conclude that we should keep pace of our life  rhythms and  strive perserveringly for excellent.
3. There has been undesirable trend towards worship of money.A recent survey showed that  X percent  of respondents  ranked getting rich as their top priority,compared to X a few years ago.Why did people fail to realize that wealth  dose not necessarily bring happiness?

Judging from the reams of evidence presented , we can safely conclude that the Three Gorges Project will change the lives of an untold number of people forever .
从目前的呈现的证据来看,我们可以放心的做出结论:Three Gorges计划永远的改变了不计其数的人的生活。
Judging from the reams of evidence presented , we can safely conclude that bamboo who must have done a lot of work is the help of our english.

从现有的大量证据判断,我们可以安全的下结论说：三峡工程将永远改变无数人的生活。

Judging from the reams of evidence presented , we can safely conclude that dogs are friends of human.

不错哦 , 加油哦 . 前进哦.  强大的亲门.

our english...english的e应该大写吧。。。English...

原帖由 edoling 于 2008-10-29 18:08 发表
根据现在的大量的证据，我们可以安全的得出结论：三峡工程将永远改变无数人的生活
Judging from the reams of evidence presented , we can safely conclude that  a good neighbor is better than a brother  ...

我也用了“安全”的说....

出23期啦！！！
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根据现有的证据来看，我们能切实的得出这样一个结论：难以估计数量人们的生活将会被三峡项目永远改变

Judging from the reams of evidengce presented,we  can safely conclude that smoking  is  harmful  to health.

There has been undesirable trend  in recent years  towards the worship of  money.A recent suyvey showed that  X% of respondents ranked getting rich as their top priority,compared X% a few years ago.why do people fail to realize that fortune does not necessarily  bring happiness?

晕啊，三峡没翻出来

怎么是这样啊？不懂