(转)【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（第22期）

tangshufang · 发表于 08-10-29 13:57:56

第二十三期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-330753-1-1.html

1.从四楼开始对前一楼的习作进行批改，建议大家使用“引用”格式，并将前一楼的错误用“颜色”标出
2.英译中
Judging from the reams of evidence presented , we can safely conclude that the Three Gorges Project will change the lives of an untold number of people forever .

答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
(根据现有的大量证据，我们可以有把握地得出这样的结论：三峡工程将永远改变无数人的生活。)
3.学习以下句型，要铭记于心啊！
Judging from the reams of evidence presented , we can safely conclude that ...

.4.使用3给出的句型，写一段句子，题材不限
5.复习前一期：
中译英：
近年来出现了对社会有害的拜金主义倾向。最近的一项调查表明，X%的调查对象把致富作为他们的首选，相比之下，就在几年前，只有X%的人这样想。为什么人们没能意识到财富不一定带来幸福呢？
答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
(There has been undesirable trend in recent years towards the worship of money . A recent survey showed that X percent of respondents ranked getting rich as their top priority , compared to X percent only a few years ago . Why do people fail to realize that wealth does not necessarily bring happiness ?)
6.把给出要求仿写的句子背诵下啦，下一期会要求大家中译英哦～

ps :　非常好的一个万能句,记住哦:)

[answerfly]1[/answerfly]

今天推荐的是一首纯音乐。引用推荐者的话：“这是我最喜欢的一版wedding，婚礼上放着恢宏气势的进行曲总觉得好怪的,咱们是结婚又不是去打仗,是吧? 呵呵. 也许这种简单清新的旋律更适合浪漫的气氛，充满甜蜜气质的编曲更是让我喜欢，决定了~ 以后结婚的时候就放这个啦!^0^ 别笑哦~”。

[fly]用这首干净明亮的歌陪伴大家做作业！[s:5] [/fly]

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[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-10-30 11:46 编辑 ]

tangshufang · 发表于 08-10-29 14:05:44

2、从现有证据判断，我们必然能得出一个结论：三峡工程将永远改变一些人的生活，而这些人的数量是无法估计的。
4、Judging from the reams of evidence presented, we can safely conclude that massive animals will die out own to global warming.

[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-10-29 17:20 编辑 ]

guoguogtj · 发表于 08-10-29 14:07:43

555，和我抢沙发。。。

guoguogtj · 发表于 08-10-29 14:28:10

从大量给出的证据判断，我们能有把握地推断出三峡工将能永远改变数不清的人的生活。

对他们表示同情，，

Judging from the reams of evidence presented , we can safely conclude that there has been increasing trend in recent years towards the strenth of China.

有米有有细心的朋友发现我用地是上期的句型吖[s:7]

相当优美滴旋律呀，找谱子去弹弹

[ 本帖最后由 guoguogtj 于 2008-10-29 14:38 编辑 ]

guoguogtj · 发表于 08-10-29 14:49:23

突然发现我居然升级了！！！

tangshufang · 发表于 08-10-29 17:21:58

顶一下，

edoling · 发表于 08-10-29 18:08:43

根据现在的大量的证据，我们可以安全的得出结论：三峡工程将永远改变无数人的生活
Judging from the reams of evidence presented , we can safely conclude that a good neighbor is better than a brother far off

呵呵，安全的翻译的很垃圾，但既然这么译的就写出来吧，要诚实嘛。看到正确翻译就记住了，不能老死译了

wuyongjiu9 · 发表于 08-10-29 18:12:23

2、从大量的现有的证据，我们可以做出确切的判断：三峡工程将永远地改变不计其数人的生活。

3 Judging from the reams of evidence presented , we can safely conclude that
4、Judging from the reams of evidence presented , we can safely conclude that human population must be put under control.
5、太长记不住哦

pradox2008 · 发表于 08-10-29 18:15:06

1. 翻译：
大量证据表明，我们可以肯定地认为：三?工程将改变无数人未来的生活。

2.造句：
Judging from the reams of evidence presented , we can safely conclude that the San Lu Milk Powder incident will panicked the public for food security.

3. 复习：
There has been undesirable trend in recent years towards the worship of money . A recent survey showed that X percent of respondents ranked getting rich as their top priority , compared to X percent only a few years ago . Why do people fail to realize that wealth does not necessarily bring happiness ?

pradox2008 · 发表于 08-10-29 18:17:08

[s:3] 俺的句子提交了才发现不大对劲哦~~ 大家帮改改吧~~

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(转)【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（第22期）

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