（转）【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（第十四期）

第一期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-322828-1-1.html
第二期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-323211-1-1.html
第三期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-323609-1-1.html
第四期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-324155-1-1.html
第五期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-324663-1-1.html
第六期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-324886-1-1.html
第七期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-325420-1-1.html
第八期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-325772-1-1.html
第九期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-326154-1-1.html
第十期的链接地址： http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-326660-1-1.html
第十一期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327038-1-1.html
第十二期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327411-1-1.html
第十三期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327599-1-1.html
前十三期小结，见附件：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327616-1-1.html
第十四期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327934-1-1.htm
第十五期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-328200-1-1.html

1.从四楼开始对前一楼的习作进行批改，建议大家使用“引用”格式，并将前一楼的错误用“颜色”标出
2.英译中
A growing number of people are beginning to realize that wealth is not the sole prerequisite for happiness .

答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉

（越来越多的人开始意识到财富不是幸福的唯一先决条件。 ）
3.学习以下句型，要铭记于心啊！
A growing number of people are beginning to realize that  ... is not the sole prerequisite for ...
4.使用3给出的句型，写一段句子，题材不限
5.复习前一期：
中译英：
也许现在是应该重新考虑以大学学位为智力的保证这种想法的时候了。
答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
(Perhaps it is time to reexamine the idea that college degrees are a guarantee of intelligence .)
6.把给出要求仿写的句子背诵下啦，下一期会要求大家中译英哦～


笔记:
1. A growing number of people,也可以说people in growing numbers,代替常用的more and more people.

2.  sole(单独的,唯一的,代替常用的only)
3.  prerequisite (首要必备的,词汇记忆:pre+require+site)

希望大家能多记忆一下这种精彩词汇,把简单词汇升级喔.[answerfly]1[/answerfly]


今天推荐的歌，是小红莓卡百利的zombie，这首反战歌曲也适合自己唱着发泄。特别是高潮~~in ur head,in ur head ……
反战的主题，爱尔兰花腔淋漓尽致
http://224.cachefile16.rayfile.com/c466/zh-cn/preview/8271beb2fc0f917a6fe955ed238a7f9d/preview.mp3

歌词有点血腥，反战的主题
another head hangs lowly.另一颗头颅谦卑地垂下.
child is slowly taken.儿童在缓缓死去.
and the violence caused such silence.暴行造成了可怕的安静.
who are we mistaken ?我们中谁做错了什么?
but u see it's not me.但你知道那不是我.
it's not my family.那不是我的家庭.
in ur head,in ur head !在你的头脑中!
they are fighting.他们在战斗.
with their tanks, their bombs.用他们的坦克和炸弹.
and their bombs, their guns.他们的炸弹和枪.
in ur head !在你的头脑中
in ur head they are crying.在你的脑中他们在哭泣.

zombie ! zombie ! zombie !僵尸!
what's in ur head,in ur head ?到底有什么在你的头脑中?
another mother's breaking.另一个母亲被夺去生命.
heart is taking over.灵魂被带走.
when the violence causes silence.当暴力造就了安静时.
we must be mistaken.我们一定做错了什么.
it's the same old theme since 1916.这是1916年以来从未改变过的话题.
in ur head they're still fighting.在你的头脑中他们在战斗.
in ur head they are dying.在你的头脑中他们已经死去




[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-10-22 12:59 编辑 ]

越来越多的人意识到财富不是快乐的先决条件。


A growing number of people are beginning to realize that study well is not the sole prerequisite for  all  children.

今天终于是沙发啦！！哇哈哈哈哈哈

2、越来越多的人开始意识到财富不是幸福的唯一象征。
不知道prerequisite的意思……
3、记句型
4、造句
A growing number of people are beginning to realize that marriage is not the sole prerequisite for love.
5、中译英
Perhaps it is time for us to think  the college degrees are a guarantee of intelligence.  
这几天都没好好复习……5555

不过，果果今天造的句，水平不算高哦。觉得chinglish而且，是这样翻译吗？——越来越多的人意识到学习好不是所有孩子的先决条件。
个人看法……[s:3]

听这首歌，会想起大学的舍友~~在宿舍唱着这曲~

原帖由 tangshufang 于 2008-10-21 14:30 发表
听这首歌，会想起大学的舍友~~在宿舍唱着这曲~

我机子上也有这首歌，就是曲调有点吓人^_^

推荐首Celine Dion 2002年的经典歌曲 A new day has come
曲调舒缓悠扬，歌词简单，放松的时候听听不错哦



A new day...
A new day...

I was waiting for so long
For a miracle to come
Everyone told me to be strong
Hold on and don\'t shed a tear

Through the darkness and good times
I knew I\'d make it through
And the world thought I had it all
But I was waiting for you

*Hush now
I see a light in the sky
Oh, it\'s almost blinding me
I can\'t believe
I\'ve been touched by an angel with love

Let the rain come down and wash away my tears
Let it fill my soul and drown my fears
Let it shatter the walls for a new, new sun
A new day has... come*

Where it was dark now there\'s light
Where there was pain now there\'s joy
Where there was weakness, I found my strength
All in the eyes of a boy

*Repeat*

Ohhh, a light
Hush now
I see a light in your eyes
All in the eyes of the boy
I can\'t believe
I\'ve been touched by an angel with love

[ 本帖最后由 princewang 于 2008-10-21 15:05 编辑 ]

1译句:    越来越多的人开始意识到：财富并非获得快乐的唯一先决条件.
2 造句： A growing number of people are beginning to realize that  intelligence is not the sole prerequisite for success.

3 复习：Pehaps it is time to reexamine the idea that college  degrees are a guarantee of intelligence.

1.越来越多的人开始认识到财富并不是快乐的唯一条件
2.A   growing   number  of  people  are  beginning  to realize  that certificaton  is  not  the sole prerequisite for  one\'s capacity.
3. Perhaps  it  is  time  to  reexamine the idea that college  degrees are a  guarantee  of  intelligence

2、越来越多的人开始意识到财富不是幸福的唯一先决条件.。
3、A growing number of people are beginning to realize that ... is not the sole prerequisite for ...
4、A growing number of people are beginning to realize that success is not the sole prerequisite for education.
5、perhaps it is time to reexamine the idea that colleage degrees are a guarantee of intelligence.

[s:8] 可能是我今天太过着急了。那阵子正好要出去。。

我的本意是“学习好并不是证明一个学生是好孩子的唯一条件”
虾面内，偶重新造一下下八~

A growing number of people are beginning to realize that  study well is not the sole prerequisite for a good student .

这会米有问题了吧~

HOHO~感谢楼主和斑竹吖！最喜欢能指出错误的行为！！

感谢你，我衷心谢谢你~~~~~~~~~ [s:103] [s:103]