（转）【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（第七期）

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事先声明：这次英语写作训练班共39期，一天一期！！！目的是对大家的写作水平提高有所帮助！！不管反响如何，我将一如既往地进行~~每天都要有收货！！！以下内容不是我原创，但觉得十分有用，就转帖在这里。每天一期！！

1.从四楼开始对前一楼的习作进行批改，建议大家使用“引用”格式，并将前一楼的错误用“颜色”标出
2.英译中
We ' re often told that the world is tethering on the brink of destruction . But is this really the case ?
答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉

我们经常被告知世界处于毁灭的边缘。但事实真是这样吗？

3.学习以下句型，要铭记于心啊！
We ' re often told that...
But is this really the case ?
4.使用3给出的句型，写一段句子，题材不限
5.复习前一期：
中译英：
越来越多的人通过互联网进入了“信息时代”。针对这一现象，一些人认为互联网消除了障碍，为人们提供了与世界即时链接的途径。但是，他们有没有意识到迅速发展的信息技术也能导致侵犯隐私？

答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
An increasing number of people are joining the " Information Age " via the Internet . In reaction to the phenomenon , some say the Internet has removed barriers and provided people with immediate access to the world . But do they realize that rapidly advancing information technology can also lead to intrusions of privacy ?
6.把给出要求仿写的句子背诵下啦，下一期会要求大家默写

[answerfly]1[/answerfly]大家一定要动手写啊，不要眼高手低。只有自己动手，才能知道自己的不足。

[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-10-17 19:49 编辑 ]

2、英译中  好惨，有不认识的词
我们常被告知这个世界￥#%￥#@#￥@，但是真是这样的吗？
积累生词：thether用绳子拴住；on the brink of    濒于

3、记句型

4、造句，用“人与自然”
We are often told that human beings are the host of earth.But is this really the case?

5复习
A increasing number of people are joining the \"Information Age\".In reaction to the phenomenon, some say Internet have removed the barriers and provided people with immediate access to the world. But do they realize that the rapidly advancing information technology could also lead to intrusions of privacy?

勘误：via the internet;去掉the

[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-10-14 14:55 编辑 ]

[s:10] [s:10]

我们经常被告知世界正处在破坏的边缘，但是这真是事实吗？

More and more people joined the information  age via the internet.The reaction to this phenomenon,some people think the internet removed the handicaps and provided the intermedia for people to access the world.But,do they conscious the quickly advancing infformation technoloqy can also lead to invision privacy?

We \' re often told that it is hard for students to find a job after graduated,But is this really the case ?

今天的造句比较简单哦，不过句型很好哈
We are often told that schools are carrying on the quality education in an all-round way .But is this really the case?

我们经常被告知世界濒临毁灭的边缘，这是真的吗？[s:8]

造句： 。。。 。。。

接近睡眠状态了脑子完全没有东西了

we are often told that we will find a better job but entering university.

是不是回的太晚了就没有奖励了？嘿嘿嘿 有点贪心

2.我们常被告知我们的世界处在毁灭的边缘，但这是真的吗？
3.We are often told that male are have more abilitys than females .But is this really the case?
4.An increasing number of people joining the \"information age\"via ihe internet  .In reaction to this phenomena ,some say ithe nternet has  removed barriers and provided people  with  immediate access  to the word.But do they realized that  rapidly advancing information  technolgy can lead to intrusions privacy?
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世界濒临毁灭的边缘，这是真的吗？