【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（第十六期）

第一期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-322828-1-1.html
第二期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-323211-1-1.html
第三期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-323609-1-1.html
第四期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-324155-1-1.html
第五期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-324663-1-1.html
第六期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-324886-1-1.html
第七期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-325420-1-1.html
第八期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-325772-1-1.html
第九期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-326154-1-1.html
第十期的链接地址： http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-326660-1-1.html
第十一期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327038-1-1.html
第十二期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327411-1-1.html
第十三期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327599-1-1.html
前十三期小结，见附件：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327616-1-1.html
第十四期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327934-1-1.html
第十五期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-328200-1-1.html
十六期：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-328523-1-1.html
十七期：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-328829-1-2.html




1.从四楼开始对前一楼的习作进行批改，建议大家使用“引用”格式，并将前一楼的错误用“颜色”标出
2.英译中
Large families were once seen as a blessing . Today , however , things are changing and an increasing number of Chinese parents realize that fewer is better .

答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
(大家庭曾经被看做是一种福气。然而，今天，情况改变了，越来越多的中国家长意识到家庭成员越少越好。)
3.学习以下句型，要铭记于心啊！
... were once seen as ...Today , however , things are changing and an increasing number of ...realize that ...
.4.使用3给出的句型，写一段句子，题材不限
5.复习前一期：
中译英：
毫无疑问,必须立即采取行动彻底消除腐败的祸害.
答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
(There is little doubt that immediate action is required to eliminate the scourgeof corruption once and forever .)
6.把给出要求仿写的句子背诵下啦，下一期会要求大家中译英哦～


笔记:
1. an increasing/growing number of (越来越多的,代替常用的more and more )
2、十四期学过一个类似句型哦~


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今天推荐的歌，听了会让你全身每一个细胞都跳跃起来哦！

http://adoptedaustralian.net/glorylibertymix/seasons/summer/oeight/untitled/20 Eanie Meany.mp3

阿迪达斯可爱广告歌：Jim Noir - Eanie Meany

Eanie Meany选自来自曼彻斯特的旋律天才Jim Noir的个人首张专辑「Tower Of Love」，因为幽默的歌词“If you don’t give my football back， I’m gonna get my dad on you”(如果你不把我的足球还给我，我就叫我的老子出来对付你) 而被adidas挑中成为广告歌。


If you don´t give my football back
I´m gonna get my dad on you
I only kicked it over the fence
And broke a ceiling no more to
Eanie Meany run away
Eanie Meany run away
If you don´t give my football back
I´m gonna get my dad on you
I only kicked it over the fence
And broke a ceiling no more to
Eanie Meany run away
Eanie Meany run away
Eanie Meany run away
Eanie Meany run away
Eanie Meany run away
Meany run away
See you´re my football run away
Get it back someway
Eanie Meany run away
Meany run away

这支广告片中的足球明星真是超多。

比如：
Frank Lampard 蓝帕德
Michael Ballack 巴拉克
Zinedine Zidane 齐达内
Arjen Robben 罗本
Damien Duff 达夫
Kaka 卡卡
David Beckham 贝克汉姆
Steven Gerrard 杰拉德
Kevin Kuranyi 库兰伊
Jermain Defoe 迪福
Juan Roman Riquelme 里克尔梅
Patrick Vieira 维埃拉
David Trezeguet 特雷泽盖
Djibril Cisse 西斯

Shinsuke Nakamura 中村俊辅
Raul 劳尔
Oliver Kahn 卡恩
Bastian Schweinsteiger 巴斯蒂安
Shinji Ono 小野伸二

另外还有这两位传奇球员, 用电脑科技"复出":
Michel Platini 普拉蒂尼
Franz Beckenbauer 贝肯鲍尔

http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XMTMzNDM0MDA=/v.swf

[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-10-24 12:46 编辑 ]

做题咯做题咯


2、以前人们往往视大家族为有福气。但如今改变了，越来越多的中国家长意识到孩子越少越好。
丁克一族……

3、今天的句型好~！！大家习惯把however\\nevertheless等词放在句首，其实，夹在句中，能给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。大家都知道这个道理，可是很少有人去用。
...were once seen as ...Today ,however, things are changing and an increasing number of ...realize that...

4、造句 我用91年的考研作文题——乡村和城市哪个好，造一个吧
Living in metropolitan cities were once seen as a blessing.Today in U.S. ,however, things are changing and  an increasing number of citizens realize that country life affords people more pastoral pleasure .
这个句子是我从新概念3的41课积累到的。灵活运用一下。嘻嘻

5、复习
There is little doubt that immediate actions are required to eliminate the corruption.
忘了昨天的新词scourge……


今天的意外收获……如果你不把球还给我，我就叫我爸爸来打你[s:3]

[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-10-23 14:46 编辑 ]

顶一下吧。

Travlelling were once seen as luxury ,today,however,things are changing and an increasing number of  chinese people realize that travelling is great part of life
第一次来，相逢很晚阿

从中午等到现在啊

翻译：大家庭曾被视作是福气，但是现在情况改变了，越来越多的中国家长意识到孩子越少越好。
造句：school achievement was once seen as a sole qualification.Today , however , things are changing and an increasing number of schools and parents realize that students are required all-around ability.

4楼的朋友
开头travelling应该跟was
结尾加个a
a great part of life

每天都有一期哦，欢迎参与！英俊潇洒的青蛙王子会奖励你考元的！

小j好细心哦~~~
造的句也很好
学习新词组：school achievement——学业成绩！[s:9]

boys were once seen as a blessing ,today ,however,things are  changing  and an increasing

number of chinese parents realize that girls are better

1 翻译：过去人们觉得多子多福，然而，现在这种认识发生了变化，中国父母认为孩子少一些较好。
2 造句：The diploma  was  once seen as  a access. Today , however , things are changing and an increasing number of Chinese people realize that ability is more important.
3 复习：There is little doubt that immediate action is required to eliminate the scourge of corruption once and forever.