【考研1号】“作文修改活动”——【第三期2013年真题+“论选择”】

考研1号编辑部 · 发表于 13-10-26 17:33:10

本帖最后由考研1号编辑部于 2013-10-26 17:49 编辑

本期活动提供两个题目，都和“选择”有关，大家可以选择其中一个来写。

题目一：2013年考研英语一真题作文“选择”

Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based onthe following drawing. In your essay, you should

1) describe the drawing briefly,

2) interpret its intended meaning, and

3) give your comments

题目二：《写作160篇》永恒哲理类——“论选择”　

Directions：

Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should
1. describe the drawing，
2. interpret its meaning， and
3. point out its implications in our life.
You should write about 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. （20 points）

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http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-840736-1-1.html

【第一期活动地址】

http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-840747-1-1.html

【第二期活动地址】

http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=841724&fromuid=2763297

悠弥北北 · 发表于 13-10-26 18:56:27

本帖最后由悠弥北北于 2013-10-26 22:35 编辑

总算能早点儿交作文了，多谢老师批改···感觉没话说···一直在绕···

All roads lead to Rome, which one belongs to you? There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper, in the middle of the picture has astriking road sign indicates two ways, which are running in the opposited irections. The road, which is symbolic of our different chosen in all aspects around our lives, careers, education, investment and the like. Simple as the cartoonis, the meaning behind it is as deep as ocean.

The phenomenon illustrated in this drawing is that the more possibility the moreconfusion. There is no doubt, if we want to go to destination as soon aspossible, we should first properly orientate ourselves. Correct option remainsto be an integral part in succeed. Whoever ignores this contributor will surelystray from success. For example, an increasing number of university graduates,chasing for jobs without a clearly plan. No matter how much times and effortsthey cost, they will hardly to find desired jobs because of lack of specificgoal.

Insummary, of all the ingredients of success, to make choice correctly and timelyseems to be the first within our control. As students faced with various possibility in modern society, we should always remind ourselves to follow the right direction. Only we are making efforts with the correct guidance, can we hope to realize our dreams of success.

辛苦老师啦~！

arthashao · 发表于 13-10-26 20:03:24

本帖最后由 arthashao 于 2013-10-27 15:07 编辑

Have you ever made choices in critical moments? Have you ever been anxious about which option in front of you is the best? If not, you must consider these two questions when you look at the picture above, in which there are two branches of the road that you have to choose, with a line going like this: only you can choose your direction.

The man who cannot make a correct choice but is very hard-working is pitiful, because these two traits will let him process too far on a wrong track. Just as an old saying goes: well begun is half one. You may get closer to the success only when you choose the way which is suitable for you. If Bill Gates didn’t choose to drop out from the college, there would not be Microsoft nowadays. If Yuminhong gave up the third College Entrance Examination, we would never see the rise of the New Oriental today. As the anticipation of this state in the future, we should draw the blueprints of the path of life early and spare no efforts to realize our great goals.

Take me for example, the reason why I take part in the graduate school exam is to obtain plenty of opportunities that can help me reach a higher level of the academic field. For other youngsters, you should make clear what you will do and get ready to deal with challenges.

我选的第二个题目，谢谢老师

Drift547 · 发表于 13-10-26 22:21:13

2013年考研英语一真题作文“选择”
In the above picture, four completely different roads diverge in front of us, who graduate from university this year, not knowing which to choose. To have a job, to be a postgraduate, to go abroad or to create your own business, that is a decision. It is obvious that each road may lead us to a different life.
The underlying meaning of the drawing can be illustrated as follows. On the one hand, life is a one way journey that one cannot come back to the original point and start again. Thus it is an enormous decision that you choose the most suitable one with considering. On the other hand, to some extant, one’s success depends more on the choices he makes than the efforts he works. With a wrong direction, the farther we go, the farther we are away from our dreams.
Therefore, a positive mental guidance must be popularized among young people to help them keep a sober mind and make wise choices in the life journey. Besides, an educational campaign must be launched to help every fresh graduate to realize his position and the reality and choose his goal in a down to earth manner. Only with a right direction and a suitable aim can the endeavour made towards our dream pay off.
以前一直根据图画内容来展开，现在先弄懂图画的含义，再根据含义来展开，不知道这样对不对呢？麻烦老师再改作文啦！！

子书十二 · 发表于 13-10-26 22:50:09

本帖最后由子书十二于 2013-10-27 18:14 编辑

选的题二

The given photo makes an obvious perception that everywhere there must be a crossroad in front of us. Just like the slogan, left or right, it’s all about yourself, and only you can decide which one will be your direction and no matter how it looks like, bright or dark, varied or innocent, material or moral.
It is pretty clear that this picture wants to remind us life is full of choices. And when you confront millions of routes, it’s you, not anyone else, who have to be the one to undertake the responsibility to create a unique life. I believe that we all heard that some graduates complained they don’t like their major, they can’t find a job they truly love, and most of them blamed these on their parents who had “compelled” them to choose such things they don’t prefer.
Can you see anything ironic about it? I guess the answer will be positive. There is an unaware double-standard in some people’s minds. On the one hand, they desire to make their own life. On the contrary, it has become a custom to be guided by others, who are parents at most time. And when things can’t meet their expectations, they would like to roar hysterically: “it is not my fault.” And I consider it the most ashamed behavior. And as an adult who has an independent thoughts and soul, it is not valuable to live a life like that. We should remember that choice is always in our hand.

我又来了，这次稍晚一点，不知道能不能被选上改。

小椰 · 发表于 13-10-27 12:13:47

本帖最后由小椰于 2013-10-30 14:27 编辑

交作文，题2....改了好多次,还是感觉不切题，内容空洞.......

In the middle of the picture stands a direction board,indicating two distinct ways. In front of them, many might be confused and hesitate to make choices,especially when one road leads to high socioeconomic status while another to their original ideals.And a question might occur to them:Are we truly able to choose correct directions?

"only you can choose your directions", clearly illustrated in the caption,the answer seems self-evident. However, some argue that various social factors contribute to young people's ultimate choices. Youngsters graduate from colleges with nothing other than a few certificates, as well as their confusion and fear for the severe reality. Thus making choices becomes a mission difficult for them. In addition, lured by temptations of unreasonable material and power worship in our society, those young men easily choose to run after money and social status, ignoring their previous pursuit of spirit or morality.

Blaming the society is nothing new, but it is not as if youngsters are hardly responsible for their decisions of chasing material satisfaction other than noble ideals. In fact, the truth maybe just the opposite: youngsters, as independent individuals, do have enough discretion to make proper choices. When encounter tough selection dilemmas, it is their strong resolve of spiritual pursuit, deeply burned in their heart, eventually plays a crucial role in determining whether they can stay true to their original ideals.

令十九 · 发表于 13-10-27 15:16:06

本帖最后由令十九于 2013-10-27 15:19 编辑

选题一
   In the aboving depict,there are plenty of graduates faced with  four major choices,including getting jobs ,taking part in the postgraduate exam,going abroad and building up their business.Because of confronting too many options,these graduates have no idea which one is better and stop in the crossroad with going no further.
   It is apparently that the simple drawing reflects some profound meaning that too many choices make no choice.As the graduates halt in the crossroad,many people cease going further when they face more than one choice in their fields.They are comparing the choices with no stop but still can’t make decision,even losing the opportunities in the compare.
   In oder to make the right choice in time,we need to collect enough information about these choices, get some advices from consultants and reliable friends,and analyse current conditions.Besides,what’s more important is choosing the suitable one not the best one coupled with individual situation .Only in this way can we get the right choice.
麻烦老师在百忙之中修改下，谢谢！

govycm · 发表于 13-10-27 15:39:51

好火爆。支持一下

＊ST_陌颜ヅ轩 · 发表于 13-10-27 21:19:39

本帖最后由＊ST_陌颜ヅ轩于 2013-10-27 21:21 编辑

How to choose

As is shown in the picture, there are several roads before graduates, such as searching for a job, getting ready for the Postgraduate Exam, going abroad, trying to build your own entrepreneur.How do we choose?

Making a proper choice is noteasy, since every road has rough, and every cloud has its linen. What is more,every student has its own conditions, interests, and characteristics. Thus, there is no road that fits everyone. The result is, many graduates in the picture feel nervous, looking like a small boat on the sea.

Seen from the God, every road could lead you to Roma. Just try what you like, and go ahead. Searching for swifter, higher, stronger, never give up, and you would be outstanding. As a graduate,I choose to go for the Postgraduate Exam, because I have a dream to be a scientist. No matter what the last scores would be, I will try my best.

最后想请教老师：（1）choose和select，choice 和selecion，这两对词语有什么区别啊？我犹豫了很久，最后选用了choose和choice。（2）我知道考研作文一般是第二段最长，而我这次写出来的第三段比第二段还多7个单词，这样是不是不太好啊？

谢谢！

夏伤lanx · 发表于 13-10-27 23:34:57

[t:1]来晚了，打酱油来了，顶

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