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【考研1号】“作文修改活动”——【第三期2013年真题+“论选择”】

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悠弥北北 发表于 13-10-26 18:56:27 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 悠弥北北 于 2013-10-26 22:35 编辑

总算能早点儿交作文了,多谢老师批改···感觉没话说···一直在绕···
All roads lead to Rome, which one belongs to you? There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper, in the middle of the picture has astriking road sign indicates two ways, which are running in the opposited irections. The road, which is symbolic of our different chosen in all aspects around our lives, careers, education, investment and the like. Simple as the cartoonis, the meaning behind it is as deep as ocean.

The phenomenon illustrated in this drawing is that the more possibility the moreconfusion. There is no doubt, if we want to go to destination as soon aspossible, we should first properly orientate ourselves. Correct option remainsto be an integral part in succeed. Whoever ignores this contributor will surelystray from success. For example, an increasing number of university graduates,chasing for jobs without a clearly plan. No matter how much times and effortsthey cost, they will hardly to find desired jobs because of lack of specificgoal.

Insummary, of all the ingredients of success, to make choice correctly and timelyseems to be the first within our control. As students faced with various possibility in modern society, we should always remind ourselves to follow the right direction. Only we are making efforts with the correct guidance, can we hope to realize our dreams of success.
辛苦老师啦~!




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悠弥北北 发表于 13-10-28 10:58:52 | 显示全部楼层
多谢桔子~
悠弥北北 发表于 13-10-29 13:40:42 来自手机设备或APP | 显示全部楼层
真是忧伤﹉越写越低什么情况﹉老师是不是我每篇文章都有点儿跑题啊?
悠弥北北 发表于 13-10-29 13:59:03 来自手机设备或APP | 显示全部楼层
考研1号编辑部 发表于 2013-10-29 13:54
分数仅供参考,没有实际的意义。“发现自己存在的问题并有针对地改善”才是我们的目的。
   
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嗯嗯,多谢老师,是为了抢楼有些着急﹉感觉自己脱不了模板,脱了模板都不知道写什么﹉可是写模板句又很不开心﹉
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