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【考研1号】“作文修改活动”——【第三期2013年真题+“论选择”】

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令十九 发表于 13-10-27 15:16:06 | 显示全部楼层
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选题一
     In the aboving depict,there are plenty of graduates faced with  four major choices,including getting jobs ,taking part in the postgraduate exam,going abroad and building up their business.Because of confronting too many options,these graduates have no idea which one is better and stop in the crossroad with going no further.
     It is apparently that the simple drawing reflects some profound meaning that too many choices make no choice.As the graduates halt in the crossroad,many people cease going further when they face more than one choice in their fields.They are comparing the choices with no stop but still can’t make decision,even losing the opportunities in the compare.
     In oder to make the right choice in time,we need to collect enough information about these choices, get some advices from consultants and reliable friends,and analyse current conditions.Besides,what’s more important is choosing the suitable one not the best one coupled with individual situation .Only in this way can we get the right choice.
麻烦老师在百忙之中修改下,谢谢!

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令十九 发表于 13-11-2 10:59:16 | 显示全部楼层
考研1号编辑部 发表于 2013-10-31 13:40
写作原文    In the aboving (改为above,其自身具有形容词词性)depict(改为depiction,d ...

谢谢,又交了新的一期,希望老师改改,语法忘得太多了。。。
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