魔女训练营之攻破长难句～～第四期（奖品已发完）

请大家跟紧海豚～
不要掉队哦～
众所周知，英语考试就是离不开句子，所有的考试都是在考大家对句子的理解和运用能力
而试题中的长难句成为了挡住大家英语进步的一道鸿沟
得阅读者得天下，得句子者得阅读
所以，拿下长难句，是考试获胜的关键

活动规则：step 1
                 看海豚给大家出的难句，然后运用初级教程里的方法，对句子进行分解，翻译～
                 step 2
                 将你的最后翻译出来的结果写出来（要是不好意思的话，可以设置版主可见～），只要参与，就有红包哦
                 step 3
                 再把你的分析过程写出来，可以获得额外加分， 这个内容不要设置版主可见，这样大家可以分享～

话不多说
请新人点击这里去进行我们初级班的培训～在这里有我们的肢解句子的初级技巧（还会补充～）
http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/viewthread.php?tid=138833&extra=page%3D1  
按照上述步骤认真分解我们今后每一期的句子，并把分解后的句子读熟甚至背过，则基本上可以解决考研长难句问题。
初级教程理解了吗？
okeydokey！let's show it on the road~~
好下面进入我们的训练营第四期，请大家认真完成作业
从28日开始，水帖一律扣分，－40

1. The transcription needs a certain amount of editing, as even if the computer can tell the difference between words of similar sounds such as write and right, it is still not yet able to do the work as well as an intelligent secretary.

2. If a needle is thrown at random on a sheet of paper ruled with lines whose distance apart is exactly equal to the length of the needle, how often can it be expected to fall on a line and how often into a blank space?

当您将你的结果写出来后，将再这里看到下面的解句方式及正确答案

1、分析
第一层： The transcription 主 needs 谓 a certain amount of 定 editing, 宾 as even if the computer can tell the difference between words of similar 状语从句
sounds such as write and right, it is still not yet able to do the work as well as an intelligent secretary.
第二层： (状语从句) as 引 even if the computer can tell the difference between words of similar sounds such as write and right , 状语从句1 it 主 is 系 still not yet 状 able 表 to do the work 宾 as well as an inte- lligent secretary . 状语从句2
第三层： (状语从句1) even if 引 the computer 主 can tell 谓 the difference 宾 between words of similar sounds 定 such as write and right 同位语
(状语从句2) as well as 引 an intelligent secretary 主
要点 本句中as引导原因状语从句,其中该句还带有一个由"even if"引导的让步状语从句；介词短语"between words of similar sounds"修饰"difference","such as write and right"修饰"words","as well as..."为同等比较状语从句,其中省略了与主句相同的部分。intelligent:有才智的；理解力强的。
译文 译稿需要一定量的编辑工作,因为,即使计算机能够区别同音异义词,如 write和right,它仍不可能把这项工作做得像有思维能力的秘书那样好。

2、分析
第一层： If a needle is thrown at random on a sheet of paper ruled with lines whose distance apart is exactly equal to the len- 状语从句 gth of the needle , how often 状 can 谓 it 主 be expected 谓 to fall on a line 宾 and 连 how often 状 into a blank space? 状
第二层： (状语从句) If 引 a needle 主 is 系 thrown 表 at random 状 on a sheet of paper 状 ruled with lines 定 whose distance apart is exactly equal to the length of the needle 定语从句
第三层： (定语从句) whose 引 distance apart 主 is 系 exactly 状 equal 表 to the length of the needle 宾
要点 这是复合句。在if引导的状语从句中,ruled with lines 是过去分词,作paper 的定语,whose...needle 是 lines 的定语从句,whose distance apart 的意思是"它们之间的间隔"。主句中and 后面是个省略句,省去了 can it be expected to fall。翻译时可将英文的被动语态译成汉语的主动语态。length:长度。rule paper with lines:在纸上划平行线。
译文 如果把一根针随机地投到一张纸上,纸上画了许多平行线,它们之间的间隔等于针的长度,那么针落在线上的几率是多少？落在空白处的几率又是多少？



下期内容预告：省略 (时间：拟定6月6日）
相关链接：初级教程  新的教程已在一楼更新
               训练营第一期
               训练营第二期
               训练营第三期
               训练营第五期

[ 本帖最后由 海豚宝贝 于 2007-6-11 06:53 PM 编辑 ]

1. The transcription needs a certain amount of editing, as even if the computer can tell the difference between words of similar sounds such as write and right, it is still not yet able to do the work as well as an intelligent secretary.
这份手抄本仍还需要进行大量的编辑工作,因为即使是电脑可以区分出诸如\"write and right\"这类读音相近的词,但它还是不能比一个聪慧的秘书处理的好!
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这句的主句就最前面的一小句,后面是由as引导的原因状语从句
2. If a needle is thrown ［at random］ on a sheet of paper（ ruled with lines）（ whose distance apart is exactly equal to the length of the needle）, how often can it be expected to fall on a line and how often into a blank space?
如果将一根针扔到一张上带有与该针长度等间距的平行线条的纸上，那么其落到线条上和空白处的概率会是多少？（这个是概率的一个经典习题，数学专业的应该都知道）————————————————————————————————
前面条件状语从句中有两个定语，难点在第一个paper的定语ruled with lines意为平行线，后面主句很普通由两个简单疑问句组成．
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1. The transcription needs a certain amount of editing, as ///even if the computer can tell the difference between words of similar sounds such as write and right, it is still not yet able to do the work as well as an intelligent secretary.
这种转录需要一些编辑，因为即使计算机能够分辨近音词如write和right的区别，它仍然不能像智能的秘书那样做这个工作。

2. If a needle is thrown at random on a sheet of paper ruled with lines whose distance apart is exactly equal to the length of the needle, how often can it be expected to fall on a line and how often into a blank space?
如果一根细线随机的放到一块纸板上，纸板上也画着线，线之间的距离等于细线，那末细线落于一条线或落到空白处的概率是多少？

1这份速记无疑还需要进行大量的编辑工作,虽然即使电脑可以区分出诸如\"write and right\"这类读音相似的词,但它仍然不如一个聪明的秘书处理的恰到好处!
2如果将一根针随意地扔到一张上带有与该针长度相等间距的平行线条的纸上，那么其落到线条上和空白处的机率会是多少？

1、这种改编需要一定数量的编辑，因为即使计算机能够区别象写和错误这两个（英文）读音如此接近的单词，它仍然不能象一个智能秘书一样好的完成这个工作。

2、如果一根针随机的扔向一张画着线并且这些线的距离与针的长度相等的纸上，这根针落到线上和空白地方的几率是多少呢？

你的短信通知确实不错，可是为什么你不把这个帖子置顶呢，经常找不到这个帖子！

1. The transcription needs a certain amount of editing, as even if the computer can tell the difference between words of similar sounds such as write and right, it is still not yet able to do the work as well as an intelligent secretary.
这个抄本还需要一定量的编辑，因为即使计算机可以分辨相似音的“write\"和\"right\"，但是它还不能像智慧的秘书那样做得好。
2. If a needle is thrown at random on a sheet of paper ruled with lines whose distance apart is exactly equal to the length of the needle, how often can it be expected to fall on a line and how often into a blank space？
如果一根针随便的扔到一张划有与该针长度等距的白纸上，那么它正好落在线上或者空白处的概率有多大呢？

1。翻译需要有一定的编辑工作能力, 因为即使电脑能分辨相似词的声音,如write and right, 但它还不能够做的像一个秘书一样好。
2.如果将一根针扔到一张纸上，纸上带有与该针长度等间距的平行线条，那么其落到线条上和空白处的概率会是多少？

原帖由 paladin__ 于 2007-6-3 08:09 PM 发表
1、这种改编需要一定数量的编辑，因为即使计算机能够区别象写和错误这两个（英文）读音如此接近的单词，它仍然不能象一个智能秘书一样好的完成这个工作。

2、如果一根针随机的扔向一张画着线并且这些线的距离 ...

我没有权限全局置顶的权限
没关系嘛，你们记住以后常来英语考研版看看就好了

1. The transcription needs a certain amount of editing, as even if the computer can tell the difference between words of similar sounds such as write and right, it is still not yet able to do the work as well as an intelligent secretary.
尽管计算机能够区分发音相似的单词如“write”和“right”，但它仍然不能像智能的秘书一样工作，所以抄本需要一定量的编辑。

2. If a needle is thrown at random on a sheet of paper ruled with lines whose distance apart is exactly equal to the length of the needle, how often can it be expected to fall on a line and how often into a blank space?如果把一根针任意扔到一张划有横线且间距等于针的长度的纸张上，那么它落在线上和空白处的几率各是多少呢？

1、抄本需要多次编辑，因为即便电脑能区别相似音的词，如write和right,但他仍旧不能做得像聪明的秘书所做的那么精密。
２、如果随机地把一跟针扔在一张纸上，纸上固定着一些线，这些线两两之间的距离等于针的长度，针落在线上的几率是多少？落在空白处的几率有什么多少？