（转）【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（第三期）

[answerfly]1[/answerfly]今天起个大早，刚报完名，顺便把今天的学习班开一开~~[s:3]

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[s:5] 事先声明：这次英语写作训练班共39期，一天一期！！！目的是对大家的写作水平提高有所帮助！！不管反响如何，我将一如既往地进行~~每天都要有收货！！！以下内容不是我原创，但觉得十分有用，就转帖在这里。每天一期！！  



1.从三楼开始对前一楼的习作进行批改，建议大家使用“引用”格式，并将前一楼的错误用“颜色”标出
2.英译中
There is a general debate nowadays about the problem of itinerant workers . Those who object to the rising migrant population argue that increasing numbers lead to rising crime rates and harm social stability . They believe that strict limits should be placed on migrants entering China ' s cities . But people who favor the influx of the cheap labor force , on the other hand , maintain that migrants are needed to support the massive urban infrastructure construction program .答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉

目前，针对流动工人的问题展开了普遍的争论。反对流动工人增加的人认为这会导致犯罪率升高，从而危害社会稳定。他们主张应该严格限制进入中国城市的流动工人。但是，另一方面，支持廉价劳动力流入的人主张，为了支持大规模的城市基础设施建设规划，流动人口是必需的。

3.学习以下句型，要铭记于心啊！
There is a general debate nowadays about ....
Those who object to...argue that ... lead to...
They believe that strict limits should be placed on ...
But people who favor...,on the other hand , maintain that ...
4.使用3给出的句型，写一段关于“社会发展－环境破坏”的句子
5.复习前一期：
中译英：
涉及北京机动车使用量增加这一问题，有的人认为应该限制使用。另一些人持相反意见。也许双方的观点都有一定道理，但是，无论车辆多少，必须对废气排放实行控制。

答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
When it comes to the increasing use of motor vehicles in Beijing , some people think that use should be limited . Others argue that the opposite is true . There is probably some truth to both arguments,but emission controls must be instituted regardless of the number of vehicles.

6.把给出的句子背诵下啦，下一期会要求大家默写

大家一定要动手写啊，不要眼高手低。只有自己动手，才能知道自己的不足。

[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-10-17 19:56 编辑 ]

越来越难了，555，但是还是坚持做完~
1、我是二楼
2、英译中
对于外来务工人员存在广泛的争议。反对民工潮增长的人认为外来务工人员数量增加会导致犯罪率上升，危害社会稳定。他们认为应该对中国大城市的外来务工人员进行严格限制。但是另一方面赞成这些廉价劳动力的人们，声称大规模的城市基础建设需要这些人员。
3、记句型~~
4、造句
There is a general debate nowadays about the contradiction between economic development and balance of biosphere.Those who object to  the actions aiming at purely  rising of GDP argue that extremely financial progress lead to superficial views that  pursuing ongoing materials is based on the sacrifice of nature. They believe that strict limits should be placed on social developmental strategy. But people who favour higher quality of life, on the other hand, maintain that pollution can be removed after humans have enough financial supports.

5、复习
When it comes to the increasing use of motor vehicles in Beijing, some people think that  the use should be limited. Others argue that the opposite is true. There is probably some truth to both arguments, but emission controls must be instituted regardless of the number of vehicles.
6、背诵

终于做完了，挺费神~~还得加强造句练习！！5555有没有批改啊？

[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-10-10 10:24 编辑 ]

同志们，好好参与吧~~我都参与了，谢谢princewang奖励的考元！！！

There is a general debate nowadays about the contradiction between the social development and environmental protection. Those who object to the pursuing economy argue that increasing pollutions lead to suffering and disaster. They believe that strict rules and regulations should be placed on environmental protection . But people who favor the urban growth, on the other hand , maintain that the greatest economic boom will contribute to the environmental problems .

支持楼主~~~~

2，There is a general debate nowadays about the problem of itinerant workers . Those who object to the rising migrant population argue that increasing numbers lead to rising crime rates and harm social stability . They believe that strict limits should be placed on migrants entering China \' s cities . But people who favor the influx of the cheap labor force , on the other hand , maintain that migrants are needed to support the massive urban infrastructure construction program .
日前，对于流动人口的争议非常普遍。那些持反对观点的人认为那些日益涌入的外来人口将导致犯罪率的提升和危害社会的稳定。一些严格的限制措施应该出台。但另一些赞成这些廉价劳动力大军的人则认为支持城市的大规模基础建设的需要，流动人口是必需的。

3，学习句型
There is a general  debate nowadays about .......   
Those who object to  ....aruge that....lead to
They believe that strict limits should be  placed on .....
But  people who favor .........,on the  other  hand  ,maintaining that .........

4,使用3给出的句型 ，写一段关于“社会发展_环境破坏”的句子。
There is a general  debate nowadays about the  contradiction of  economic development  and  environmental   protection .Those who object to  speed up  economy argue that  the increasing needed raw materials   lead to  use  more nature  resourses ,breaking the balance of ecology. They believe that strict limits should be placed on nature exploictation .But people who favor the accelerating economy ,on the other hand ,maintain that  only  the economy developed can  our environment  be protected  properly.

5复习前一期
When  it comes to the increasing  use of motor vehicles in Beijing ,some people think that the use shoud be limited .Others argue that the opposite is true. There is probably some truth to both arguments.But emission controls  must  be instituted  regardless of the number of vehicles.

啊  考研累了

先下载下来看看，谢谢楼主

在今天对于农民工的问题有两个对立的观点。反对增加外来人口的人说：人数的增长会增加犯罪发生和危害社会的稳定。他们认为应该对外来人员进入城市进行严格的限制。但是另一方面，享受农民工廉价劳动力的人说城市的建设需要他们。
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长久以来,人们对于农民工的问题争论不休.反对增加外来移民的人说移民数量增加会导致犯罪率上升破坏社会稳定,他们坚信应该对外来移民施加严厉的限制.但是一些认同这些流动的廉价劳动力则认为这是城市的大规模基础建设的需要

当今对于。。工作者有一个通常的争论，那些反对提高移民人数的人认为增多的人数增加了犯罪率并且破坏社会的稳定性，他们相信严格的控制可以在中国城市的移民中适用，但是从另一方面说，那些喜欢廉价劳动力的人，认为移民对于支持大量的城郊基础设施的建设是 有必要的。
When it comes to the increasing use of motor vehicles in Beijing.Some people think that the use should be control .Others argue that the opposite is true .there are probabably some truth to both argument .But emmision controls must be instituted regardless of the  number .
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