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【考研1号】“作文修改”活动——【第四期2005年真题“养老足球赛”+“啃老族”】

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小椰 发表于 13-11-1 23:59:35 | 显示全部楼层
抢个沙发~~希望能有进步......选的第二题,辛苦老师了~

Isn't it ironic when a letter from a son to his father only covers one word—money? Just as the picture illustrates, the purpose of the brief letter written by a college student is nothing other than asking his father for more money. Given all this, I can’t help thinking of how upset the father might be.

Unfortunately, this kind of phenomenon is not uncommon nowadays among us college students. Young people go to universities, leaving their parents to run around for the tuition. However, their toil is easily neglected by their children who are so obsessed with the varied college life filled with societies, parties, and love affairs. Yet, are they actually too busy to spare any time for their parents? In general, the answer is no. At the time they are out of money after having fun, their parents who can be asked for money suddenly come up into their mind

It is imperative for us to take effective actions. Considering the complexity and specificity of this problem, enlightening youngsters’ awareness of respecting their parents might be a proper measure. To begin with, universities should offer students moral courses in order to cultivate their consciousness of caring for parents. In addition, related departments need to promote that keeping in touch with parents is a necessary way for young people to strengthen family bonds. Only by doing so can we curb this unharmonious phenomenon implicated in the picture.

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小椰 发表于 13-11-3 20:22:02 | 显示全部楼层
悠弥北北 发表于 2013-11-3 11:31
那好办啊~~~先压着他们的~~~改我的啊~~~也不枉咱们姐妹一场~~~

尘尘我们夫妻一场 不要这样对我 我作文还压在默默那呢
板凳
小椰 发表于 13-11-3 21:01:04 | 显示全部楼层
悠弥北北 发表于 2013-11-3 20:34
那让默妹先批你的,再批我的~其实我都没敢给他发﹉忽然发现﹉抢楼的都是心理版的﹉好忧桑

一眼望去...全是心理版的。话说那个实验设计的活动还在继续么..我想做做实验设计了
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小椰 发表于 13-11-3 21:36:14 | 显示全部楼层
悠弥北北 发表于 2013-11-3 21:16
你设计呗~设计完了我们帮你看看么

么~~前几个星期的可以做么~
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小椰 发表于 13-11-4 20:15:45 | 显示全部楼层
考研1号编辑部 发表于 2013-11-4 11:06
写作原文    Isn't it ironic when(此处用that较好,如若用when,则改为Isn’t it ironic w ...

老师辛苦啦~~还要继续加油[t:12]
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