(转)【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（第十七期）

第一期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-322828-1-1.html
第二期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-323211-1-1.html
第三期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-323609-1-1.html
第四期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-324155-1-1.html
第五期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-324663-1-1.html
第六期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-324886-1-1.html
第七期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-325420-1-1.html
第八期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-325772-1-1.html
第九期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-326154-1-1.html
第十期的链接地址： http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-326660-1-1.html
第十一期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327038-1-1.html
第十二期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327411-1-1.html
第十三期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327599-1-1.html
前十三期小结，见附件：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327616-1-1.html
第十四期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327934-1-1.html
第十五期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-328200-1-1.html
第十六期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-328523-1-1.html
17期：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-328829-1-2.html
第十八期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-329220-1-2.html






1.从四楼开始对前一楼的习作进行批改，建议大家使用“引用”格式，并将前一楼的错误用“颜色”标出
2.英译中
People used to place total reliance on the government . The so-called " iron rice bowl " prevailed in the past , but things are quite different today .
答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
(过去，人们习惯完全依赖政府。以前盛行所谓的“铁饭碗”，但今天的情况有很大的不同。)
3.学习以下句型，要铭记于心啊！
People used to ... in the past , but things are quite different today .
.4.使用3给出的句型，写一段句子，题材不限
5.复习前一期：
中译英：
大家庭曾经被看做是一种福气。然而，今天，情况改变了，越来越多的中国家长意识到家庭成员越少越好。
答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
(Large families were once seen as a blessing . Today , however , things are changing and an increasing number of Chinese parents realize that fewer is better .)
6.把给出要求仿写的句子背诵下啦，下一期会要求大家中译英哦～




ps.笔记
这期的句子跟我们复习的上一期表达的意思是差不多的.因此大家要多注意同一个意思的不同表达方式,选出最适合自己的背牢,转化成自己的东西.[answerfly]1[/answerfly]

今天推荐的歌是Sean Kingston 的《beautiful girl》。

单曲《Beautiful Girl》 使得这个来自牙买加的17岁小子迅速在美国蹿红。Sean Kingston，牙买加人，现住美国迈阿密。虽年仅17岁，但机智聪慧的说唱技巧和十足雷鬼味的说腔让人不得不对其产生好奇与好感。而其家庭背景也相当优秀: 雷鬼艺人Buju Banton是他的叔叔，在牙买加为Bob Marley 和 Burning Spear录制专辑的Jack Ruby则是他的祖父。此次官方发行的单曲”Beautiful Girls”由着名音乐制作人Jonathan “J.R.” Rotem监制,该曲是Sean Kingston计划发行首张个人同名专辑中的一首。一起听听吧~超赞的哦！

http://www.west.club.tw/emily/SeanKingston-BeautifulGirls.mp3

歌词附上

You're way too beautiful girl
Thats why it'll never work
You'll have me suicidal, suicidal
When you say it's over
Damn, all these beautiful girls
They only want to do you dirt
They'll have you suicidal, suicidal
When they say its over

See it started at the park
used to chill after dark
Oh when you took my heart
Thats when we fell apart cause we both thought, that love lasts forever (lasts forever)
They say we're too young, to get ourselves sprung
Ooh we didn't care we made it very clear
And they also said that we couldn't last together (last together)
See it's very devine, you're one of a kind
But you mash up my mind, you haffi get declined
Oh lord, my baby is driving me crazy
(Chorus)
You're way too beautiful girl
Thats why it'll never work
You'll have me suicidal, suicidal
When you say it's over
Damn all these beautiful girls
They only want to do you dirt
They'll have you suicidal, suicidal
When they say its over
It was back in 99
Watching movies all the time
Oh, when I went away for doing my first crime
And I never thought that we was gonna see each other (see each other)
And then I came out
Mami moved me down south
Oh I'm with my girl
Who I thought was my world
It came out to be that she wasn't the girl for me (girl for me)
See it's very devine, you're one of a kind
But you mash up my mind, you haffi get declined
Oh lord, my baby is driving me crazy

[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-10-25 18:07 编辑 ]

2、过去的人们完全信任政府，所谓的铁饭碗在过去也很流行，但是如今这一切发生了变化。
4、造句
最近都在讲改革30年的今昔对比，我也来造一个。
People used to typically make watch, bycicle and sewing machine as the basic marriege portions. This custom prevailed in the past, but things are quite different today.
以前的嫁妆都是手表、单车、缝纫机，现在可不一样咯哦！
5、复习
large families were seen as a blessing. Today , however , a increasing number of Chinese parents realize that  fewer is better.

[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-10-24 13:55 编辑 ]

1.人们曾经习惯完全依赖政府。所谓的铁饭碗在过去很盛行，然而在今天看来情形已经完全不同了。
2.People  used  to  attach great  importance to  idol  worship . This  phenomena  prevailed  in  the  past ,but  things  are quite  different  today .
3.Large  families  were  seen  as  a  blessing . Today ,however  , a  increasing  number  of  Chinese   parents  realize  that  fewer  is  better .

造句不错，但是复习的时候打马虎眼哦。复制的本楼主的吧，标点位置都一样，错也错得一样的。

Large   families were  once  seen   as  a  blessing . Today,however ,things are changing  ang a increasing number of  Chinese parents  realize that  fewer is better.
不好意思被楼主发现了，特此补上

过去人们完全依赖政府，即过去流行的所谓“铁饭碗”但是现在情况相当不同了。
People used to  regard the gas is inlimited in the past , but things are quite different today .

1.人民曾经把所有的依靠都放在政府身上，这种被称为“铁饭碗”的情况曾流行于过去，但今天事情已经大大的不同了。
2.People used to like boy more than girl,but things are quite different today.
3.Large families were ongce seen as blessing,however,
today,things are changing and increaseing number of chinaess parents  relasize that fewer is better.

1.翻译：过去人们习惯于完全依赖政府，所谓的“铁饭碗”极其盛行，然而现在情况大大不同。
2.造句： People used to  follow the  authority  in the past , but things are quite different today .
3.复习：  Large families were once seen as a blessing . Today , however , things are changing and an increasing number of Chinese parents realize that fewer is better .   

2、在过去人们习惯于完全依赖政府。以前人们盛行所谓的“金饭碗”，但是现在事情已经大不一样了。
3、People used to ... in the past , but things are quite different today .
4、People used to live in a large family.This phenomena  in the past ,but things are quite different today.
5、 large families were once seen as a blessing .today,however,things are changing and an increasing number of chinese parents realize that fewer is better.

句子不通，我觉得这样更好。
过去人们习惯于完全依赖政府，比如当时盛行的所谓的“金饭碗”，但是现在情况已经大不一样了。