(转)【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（第十九期）

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1.从四楼开始对前一楼的习作进行批改，建议大家使用“引用”格式，并将前一楼的错误用“颜色”标出
2.英译中
A famous thinker once wrote that " the greatest threat to mankind is mankind itself ! " If this is indeed the case , then the current situation should make us ponder our futuer existence. 。
答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
（一位著名的思想家曾经写道：“对人类最大的威胁是人类自身！”如果事实确实如此，那么，现状应该促使我们对我们未来的生存进行思索了。）
3.学习以下句型，要铭记于心啊！
If this is indeed the case , then ...

4.使用3给出的句型，写一段句子，题材不限
5.复习前一期：
许多年前,中国大街上的人都穿一样的灰褐色衣服。然而，今天的情况大不一样了，街上满是一个个身穿色彩艳丽的时髦衣服的人。出现这种变化的原因是什么呢？
答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉（Several years ago , Chinese streets were filled with people wearing identical drab clothing . Today , however , things are quite different and the streets are awash with people wearing fashionable bright colored outfits . Why has the change taken place ?）


6.把给出要求仿写的句子背诵下啦，下一期会要求大家中译英哦～[answerfly]1[/answerfly]





[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-10-27 12:30 编辑 ]

2、一位著名的思想家曾写过对人类威胁最大的就是人类自身。如果情况真是如此，那么现在的情况应该促使我们思考自己的未来了。

4、今天的句子好难造啊！
Someone said that \"the end point is another new start.\"If this is indeed the case, then everyone who has achieved his or her instant goal is supposed to keep going, not stop to enjoy celebrities.

[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-10-26 15:37 编辑 ]

1一位著名的哲学家曾经说过人类最大的威胁就是人类自己，如果真的是这样的话，那现状应该促使我们好好思考我们未来的生存了。
2. With  the speeding up of our pace of life ,competition goes increasingly fiercely in all walks of life,imposing tremedous presssure on all of us .If this is indeed the case ,then we must have powerful confidence in ourselves in  the  face of challanges  so as to survive and succeed.
3.  Several years ago,  Chinese streets  were filled with  people  wearing  identical  drabing  clothing.Today,however, things are quite different and  the  streets  are awash  with  people  wearing fashionable  bright colored outfits .Why has  the change taken place?

2、一位著名的思想家曾经写道：“对人类最大的威胁来自人类本身！”如果事情确实如此，那么时势应该促使我们对我们未来的生存进行思索。
3、If this is indeed the case , then
4、It is reported that world\'s economy may be just entering recession.If this is indeed the case , then the current situation should
make us ponder our futuer existence.我觉得后半句不改就用原句也可以，偷一下懒。
5、Several years ago , Chinese streets were filled with people wearing identical drab clothing . Today ,however , things are quite
different and the streets are awash with people wearing fashionable bright colored outfits . Why has the change taken place ?

一位著名的思想家曾经写到“人们最大的威胁来自于人们本身！”如果确实是这样，那么现在的情况就应该让我们对未来的生存进行思考。

Have early love caused very serious consequences?If this is indeed the case , then the society cannot escape its blame.

一位有名的思想家曾经写到“对人类最大威胁的是人类自己”，如果事实确实是这样，那么现在的情况应该使我们思考我们将来的生存问题。  

谢谢princewang提出的建议，今天前半句还好点，后半句还是有点僵硬，呵呵，慢慢改进

1.翻译：
有位著名的思想家曾讲：“人类最大的敌人就是其自身”。如果情况属实，那么现状应该引起我们对未来生存的深思。
2.造句：
As the proverb says:\"Time and tide wait for no man .\"If this is indeed the case , then we shoud  treasure  every  day, even  every  second  of  our life.
3.复习
Several years ago , Chinese streets were filled with people wearing identical drab clothing . Today , however , things are quite different and the streets are awash with people wearing fashionable bright colored outfits . Why has the change taken place ?

一个有名的思想家曾经写到:\"人类最大的威胁是人类自己!\"如果事实确实如此,那么当前的情况应该引起我们对未来生存的思考。

Hazlitt said that\"Easy come, easy go.\"If this is indeed the case , then a person want to success should make more power to him.

Several years ago , Chinese streets were filled with people wearing identical drab clothing . Today , however , things are quite different and the streets are awash with people wearing fashionable bright colored outfits . Why has the change taken place ?

1.一位著名的思想家曾经说过，人类最大的威胁是人类自己，如果事实的确是这样，那么面对现在的形式我们应给考虑一下我们未来的存在问题
2.with reform and open futher and futher ,we face great challenges and opportunities from every conner of the world,if this is indeed the case ,then we must focus on international fairs and open our mind to the new situation
3.
several years ago ,chinese streets were filled with people wearing the identical drab clothes,ttoday,however,things are quite different and the streets are awash with people wearing fasionable bright colour outfits,why has the change taken place

太详细了，很有用哦