(转)【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（第22期）

tangshufang · 发表于 08-10-29 13:57:56

第二十三期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-330753-1-1.html

1.从四楼开始对前一楼的习作进行批改，建议大家使用“引用”格式，并将前一楼的错误用“颜色”标出
2.英译中
Judging from the reams of evidence presented , we can safely conclude that the Three Gorges Project will change the lives of an untold number of people forever .

答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
(根据现有的大量证据，我们可以有把握地得出这样的结论：三峡工程将永远改变无数人的生活。)
3.学习以下句型，要铭记于心啊！
Judging from the reams of evidence presented , we can safely conclude that ...

.4.使用3给出的句型，写一段句子，题材不限
5.复习前一期：
中译英：
近年来出现了对社会有害的拜金主义倾向。最近的一项调查表明，X%的调查对象把致富作为他们的首选，相比之下，就在几年前，只有X%的人这样想。为什么人们没能意识到财富不一定带来幸福呢？
答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
(There has been undesirable trend in recent years towards the worship of money . A recent survey showed that X percent of respondents ranked getting rich as their top priority , compared to X percent only a few years ago . Why do people fail to realize that wealth does not necessarily bring happiness ?)
6.把给出要求仿写的句子背诵下啦，下一期会要求大家中译英哦～

ps :　非常好的一个万能句,记住哦:)

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smilesky620 · 发表于 08-11-25 14:25:51

2,英译中
Judging from the reams of evidence presented , we can safely conclude that the Three Gorges Project will change the lives of an untold number of people forever .

从现在大量的证据来看，我们可以很有把握地得出结论：三峡工程将永远地改变无数人的生活。

3,学习

Judging from the reams of evidence presented,we can safely conclude that the ....

4,造句
Judging from the reams of evidence prensentd,we can safely conclude that the online trade will change the traditional buying habit of people in a near future.

5,复习
近年来出现了对社会有害的拜金主义倾向。最近的一项调查表明，X%的调查对象把致富作为他们的首选，相比之下，就在几年前，只有X%的人这样想。为什么人们没能意识到财富不一定带来幸福呢？
There has been undesireable trend in recent years towards the worship of money.A recent survey showed that X percent of respondents ranked getting rich as their top priority,compared to X percent only a few years ago,Why do people fail to realize that wealth does not necessarily bring happiness?

tangshufang · 发表于 08-10-30 14:14:32

有何不懂？
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拥有梦想的人 · 发表于 08-10-30 13:35:22

怎么是这样啊？不懂

wushimao · 发表于 08-10-30 13:33:28

根据现有的证据来看，我们能切实的得出这样一个结论：难以估计数量人们的生活将会被三峡项目永远改变

Judging from the reams of evidengce presented,we can safely conclude that smoking is harmful to health.

There has been undesirable trend in recent years towards the worship of money.A recent suyvey showed that X% of respondents ranked getting rich as their top priority,compared X% a few years ago.why do people fail to realize that fortune does not necessarily bring happiness?

晕啊，三峡没翻出来

tangshufang · 发表于 08-10-30 11:51:16

出23期啦！！！
第二十三期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-330753-1-1.html

xjyy · 发表于 08-10-30 08:07:23

原帖由 edoling 于 2008-10-29 18:08 发表
根据现在的大量的证据，我们可以安全的得出结论：三峡工程将永远改变无数人的生活
Judging from the reams of evidence presented , we can safely conclude that a good neighbor is better than a brother ...

我也用了“安全”的说....

xjyy · 发表于 08-10-30 08:05:55

our english...english的e应该大写吧。。。English...

1234500729 · 发表于 08-10-30 08:04:46

不错哦 , 加油哦 . 前进哦. 强大的亲门.

xjyy · 发表于 08-10-30 08:02:21

从现有的大量证据判断,我们可以安全的下结论说：三峡工程将永远改变无数人的生活。

Judging from the reams of evidence presented , we can safely conclude that dogs are friends of human.

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