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tangshufang 发表于 08-11-6 18:05:25 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
31期:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-333033-1-1.html


1.从四楼开始对前一楼的习作进行批改,建议大家使用“引用”格式,并将前一楼的错误用“颜色”标出
2.英译中

The harder you work, the more progress you make.

The more books we read, the more learned we become.





答案刷黑可见,先自己翻译再看,革命靠自觉
(1.你愈努力,愈进步 2.我们书读愈多,就愈有学问。)

3.学习以下句型,要铭记于心啊!
The + ~er ... the + ~er ...

The + more + Adj ...the + more + Adj...(愈...愈...)


4.使用3给出的句型,写一段句子,题材不限
5.复习前一期:
中译英
虽然我们的国家富有,我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意

答案刷黑可见,先自己翻译再看,革命靠自觉

(Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.)

6.把给出要求仿写的句子背诵下啦,下一期会要求大家中译英哦~

ps.cookie 的笔记:

1.佳句来源:《三十五个经典句型 帮你过写作关》
2.句子很简单,但这样的用法是不是经常被我们忽视了呢?

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[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-11-7 16:01 编辑 ]
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 楼主| tangshufang 发表于 08-11-6 18:07:03 | 只看该作者

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第一期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-322828-1-1.html
第二期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-323211-1-1.html
第三期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-323609-1-1.html
第四期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-324155-1-1.html
第五期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-324663-1-1.html
第六期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-324886-1-1.html
第七期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-325420-1-1.html
第八期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-325772-1-1.html
第九期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-326154-1-1.html
第十期的链接地址: http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-326660-1-1.html
第十一期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327038-1-1.html
第十二期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327411-1-1.html
第十三期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327599-1-1.html
前十三期小结,见附件:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327616-1-1.html
第十四期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327934-1-1.html
第十五期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-328200-1-1.html
第十六期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-328523-1-1.html
第十七期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-328829-1-2.html
第十八期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-329220-1-2.html
第十九期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-329519-1-1.html
第二十期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-329742-1-1.html
第二十一期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-330114-1-1.html
第二十二期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-330527-1-1.html
第二十三期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-330753-1-1.html
第二十四期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-331257-1-1.html
第二十五期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-331423-1-1.html
第二十六期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-331430-1-1.html
第二十七期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-331692-1-1.html
第二十八期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-332024-1-1.html
第二十九期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-332431-1-1.html
第三十期的链接地址:http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-332758-1-1.html
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 楼主| tangshufang 发表于 08-11-6 18:10:16 | 只看该作者

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视频:奥巴马竞选总统获胜后精彩讲话


我个人的一点感想:处于考研政治、考研英语的需要,把这个视频、这段讲稿贴在这里,希望大家能有收获。对于奥巴马本人,我比较佩服,两年前他不过是伊利诺斯的一个普通参议员,而昨天他,成了美国首位非裔黑人总统。尽管对于他年轻的从政历程有不少质疑声,但我相信他会给美国信心和力量从经济低潮中走出。他要面临的困境,不亚于当年罗斯福上台时面临的。希望他能给全世界带来不一样的惊喜。但是,身为中国人,在某些政治问题,敏感历史问题的争议上,如果小奥有丝毫不敬,俺们就用口水淹死他。

即将接任总统的小奥,在“蛊惑人心”“煽情”还是有不少造诣的,他出色的谈吐和坚毅的形象也为他拉了不少选票,所以,下面的这篇脱稿演讲,值得我们花20分钟去细读和学习。

http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTE0NzE4NDQ=/v.swf



If there is anyone out there who still doubts that America is a place where all things are possible; who still wonders if the dream of our founders is alive in our time; who still questions the power of our democracy, tonight is your answer.
  It\'s the answer told by lines that stretched around schools and churches in numbers this nation has never seen; by people who waited three hours and four hours, many for the very first time in their lives, because they believed that this time must be different; that their voice could be that difference.
  It\'s the answer spoken by young and old, rich and poor, Democrat and Republican, black, white, Latino, Asian, Native American, gay, straight, disabled and not disabled – Americans who sent a message to the world that we have never been a collection of Red States and Blue States: we are, and always will be, the United States of America.
  It\'s the answer that led those who have been told for so long by so many to be cynical, and fearful, and doubtful of what we can achieve to put their hands on the arc of history and bend it once more toward the hope of a better day.
  It\'s been a long time coming, but tonight, because of what we did on this day, in this election, at this defining moment, change has come to America.
  I just received a very gracious call from Senator McCain. He fought long and hard in this campaign, and he\'s fought even longer and harder for the country he loves. He has endured sacrifices for America that most of us cannot begin to imagine, and we are better off for the service rendered by this brave and selfless leader. I congratulate him and Governor Palin for all they have achieved, and I look forward to working with them to renew this nation\'s promise in the months ahead.
  I want to thank my partner in this journey, a man who campaigned from his heart and spoke for the men and women he grew up with on the streets of Scranton and rode with on that train home to Delaware, the Vice President-elect of the United States, Joe Biden.
  I would not be standing here tonight without the unyielding support of my best friend for the last sixteen years, the rock of our family and the love of my life, our nation\'s next First Lady, Michelle Obama. Sasha and Malia, I love you both so much, and you have earned the new puppy that\'s coming with us to the White House. And while she\'s no longer with us, I know my grandmother is watching, along with the family that made me who I am. I miss them tonight, and know that my debt to them is beyond measure.
  To my campaign manager David Plouffe, my chief strategist David Axelrod, and the best campaign team ever assembled in the history of politics – you made this happen, and I am forever grateful for what you\'ve sacrificed to get it done.
  But above all, I will never forget who this victory truly belongs to – it belongs to you.
  I was never the likeliest candidate for this office. We didn\'t start with much money or many endorsements. Our campaign was not hatched in the halls of Washington – it began in the backyards of Des Moines and the living rooms of Concord and the front porches of Charleston.
  It was built by working men and women who dug into what little savings they had to give five dollars and ten dollars and twenty dollars to this cause. It grew strength from the young people who rejected the myth of their generation\'s apathy; who left their homes and their families for jobs that offered little pay and less sleep; from the not-so-young people who braved the bitter cold and scorching heat to knock on the doors of perfect strangers; from the millions of Americans who volunteered, and organized, and proved that more than two centuries later, a government of the people, by the people and for the people has not perished from this Earth. This is your victory.
  I know you didn\'t do this just to win an election and I know you didn\'t do it for me. You did it because you understand the enormity of the task that lies ahead. For even as we celebrate tonight, we know the challenges that tomorrow will bring are the greatest of our lifetime – two wars, a planet in peril, the worst financial crisis in a century. Even as we stand here tonight, we know there are brave Americans waking up in the deserts of Iraq and the mountains of Afghanistan to risk their lives for us. There are mothers and fathers who will lie awake after their children fall asleep and wonder how they\'ll make the mortgage, or pay their doctor\'s bills, or save enough for college. There is new energy to harness and new jobs to be created; new schools to build and threats to meet and alliances to repair.
  The road ahead will be long. Our climb will be steep. We may not get there in one year or even one term, but America – I have never been more hopeful than I am tonight that we will get there. I promise you – we as a people will get there.
  There will be setbacks and false starts. There are many who won\'t agree with every decision or policy I make as President, and we know that government can\'t solve every problem. But I will always be honest with you about the challenges we face. I will listen to you, especially when we disagree. And above all, I will ask you join in the work of remaking this nation the only way it\'s been done in America for two-hundred and twenty-one years – block by block, brick by brick, calloused hand by calloused hand.
  What began twenty-one months ago in the depths of winter must not end on this autumn night. This victory alone is not the change we seek – it is only the chance for us to make that change. And that cannot happen if we go back to the way things were. It cannot happen without you.
  So let us summon a new spirit of patriotism; of service and responsibility where each of us resolves to pitch in and work harder and look after not only ourselves, but each other. Let us remember that if this financial crisis taught us anything, it\'s that we cannot have a thriving Wall Street while Main Street suffers – in this country, we rise or fall as one nation; as one people.
  Let us resist the temptation to fall back on the same partisanship and pettiness and immaturity that has poisoned our politics for so long. Let us remember that it was a man from this state who first carried the banner of the Republican Party to the White House – a party founded on the values of self-reliance, individual liberty, and national unity. Those are values we all share, and while the Democratic Party has won a great victory tonight, we do so with a measure of humility and determination to heal the divides that have held back our progress. As Lincoln said to a nation far more divided than ours, “We are not enemies, but friends…though passion may have strained it must not break our bonds of affection.” And to those Americans whose support I have yet to earn – I may not have won your vote, but I hear your voices, I need your help, and I will be your President too.
  And to all those watching tonight from beyond our shores, from parliaments and palaces to those who are huddled around radios in the forgotten corners of our world – our stories are singular, but our destiny is shared, and a new dawn of American leadership is at hand. To those who would tear this world down – we will defeat you. To those who seek peace and security – we support you. And to all those who have wondered if America\'s beacon still burns as bright – tonight we proved once more that the true strength of our nation comes not from our the might of our arms or the scale of our wealth, but from the enduring power of our ideals: democracy, liberty, opportunity, and unyielding hope.
  For that is the true genius of America – that America can change. Our union can be perfected. And what we have already achieved gives us hope for what we can and must achieve tomorrow.
  This election had many firsts and many stories that will be told for generations. But one that\'s on my mind tonight is about a woman who cast her ballot in Atlanta. She\'s a lot like the millions of others who stood in line to make their voice heard in this election except for one thing – Ann Nixon Cooper is 106 years old.
  She was born just a generation past slavery; a time when there were no cars on the road or planes in the sky; when someone like her couldn\'t vote for two reasons – because she was a woman and because of the colour of her skin.
  And tonight, I think about all that she\'s seen throughout her century in America – the heartache and the hope; the struggle and the progress; the times we were told that we can\'t, and the people who pressed on with that American creed: Yes we can.
  At a time when women\'s voices were silenced and their hopes dismissed, she lived to see them stand up and speak out and reach for the ballot. Yes we can.
  When there was despair in the dust bowl and depression across the land, she saw a nation conquer fear itself with a New Deal, new jobs and a new sense of common purpose. Yes we can.
  When the bombs fell on our harbour and tyranny threatened the world, she was there to witness a generation rise to greatness and a democracy was saved. Yes we can.
  She was there for the buses in Montgomery, the hoses in Birmingham, a bridge in Selma, and a preacher from Atlanta who told a people that “We Shall Overcome.” Yes we can.
  A man touched down on the moon, a wall came down in Berlin, a world was connected by our own science and imagination. And this year, in this election, she touched her finger to a screen, and cast her vote, because after 106 years in America, through the best of times and the darkest of hours, she knows how America can change. Yes we can.
  America, we have come so far. We have seen so much. But there is so much more to do. So tonight, let us ask ourselves – if our children should live to see the next century; if my daughters should be so lucky to live as long as Ann Nixon Cooper, what change will they see? What progress will we have made?
  This is our chance to answer that call. This is our moment. This is our time – to put our people back to work and open doors of opportunity for our kids; to restore prosperity and promote the cause of peace; to reclaim the American Dream and reaffirm that fundamental truth – that out of many, we are one; that while we breathe, we hope, and where we are met with cynicism, and doubt, and those who tell us that we can\'t, we will respond with that timeless creed that sums up the spirit of a people:
  Yes We Can. Thank you, God bless you, and may God Bless the United States of America


[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-11-6 18:40 编辑 ]
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l3776210 发表于 08-11-6 18:31:48 | 只看该作者
谢谢
5#
wuyongjiu9 发表于 08-11-6 18:41:43 | 只看该作者
2你越努力,就越进步。     我们书读得越多就越有学问。
4、The greater the power ,the more dangerous the abuse.
5、Rich as our country is the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.
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s03211076 发表于 08-11-6 18:48:16 | 只看该作者
1.你越努力,你取得的进步就越大,我们读的书越多,我们就越有学问
2.  The  more  the  vehicles   release  emission ,the worse  the  atmosphere  will  become
The  more   we  get  in   touch  with  society ,the  more  we  acquire   communication  tools  and social  skills .
3.Rich  as  our  country  is  ,the  qualities  of  our  living  are  by  no  means  satisfactory
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wuyongjiu9 发表于 08-11-6 18:48:55 | 只看该作者

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谢谢,楼主提供小奥的讲话
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你让我难过 发表于 08-11-6 19:52:26 | 只看该作者
2.越努力的学习,你取得的进步就越大。
读的书越多,越博学。
3.The richer our country is,the higher quality of our life.
The more afraid you are and the more weakness you show, the more potential
of failure.
4.Rich as our country is ,the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory
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 楼主| tangshufang 发表于 08-11-6 20:04:16 | 只看该作者

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2、你越努力,进步就越大。
书读的越多,越博学。
4、The more question you ask, the more disgust you earn.
说给一个人听:你问得越多,我越讨厌你!
5、中译英,复习
Rich as our country is, our quality of our life is not satisfactory.简直是乱译一通。
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konggx 发表于 08-11-6 21:29:35 | 只看该作者
你工作越努力,进步就越快。
你读的书越多,就会变得越博学。
The further you go in your search,the more perplexing will come out.Anyway,don\'t worry about that an-d just deal with it.The more problem you resolve, The more progress you will make.
终于造完了,还是感觉不好,[s:10]
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