(转)【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（36期）

tangshufang · 发表于 08-11-12 18:25:37

37期出来了http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-334657-1-1.html

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倒数第四期~

1.从四楼开始对前一楼的习作进行批改，建议大家使用“引用”格式，并将前一楼的错误用“颜色”标出

2.英译中

We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.

答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉

( 我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。 )
3. 学习以下句型，要铭记于心啊！
do one‘s utmost to + V = do one‘s best（尽全力去...）

4.使用3给出的句型，写一段句子，题材不限
5.复习 前一期：
中译英：
我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。
答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
( We should spare no effort to beautify our environment. )
6. 把给出要求仿写的句子背诵下啦，下一期会要求大家 中译英哦～

ps.cookie 的笔记:

1.佳句来源：《三十五个经典句型帮你过写作关》
2. utmost n. 极限, 最大可能, 极力 adj. 极度的, 最远的 [answerfly]1[/answerfly]

美人如花，花似爱人。四十年代，陈歌辛创作的“玫瑰玫瑰我爱你"不但走红全国歌坛，二战结束后,美国流行乐坛还有人把这首歌译成英文Rose Rose I Love You，改编成爵士乐。今天我们听到的是Frankie Laine演唱的版本。怎么听都有股三四十年代旧上海的风情。

1999年7月11日，中国女足在洛杉矶玫瑰碗体育场参加女足世界杯决赛时，虽以点球失利，但全场华人观众同声高唱《玫瑰玫瑰我爱你》，全场响彻“Rose rose I love you”的歌声，场面非常感人，却让人领略到另一种的壮丽。中国女足也因此被称为“铿锵玫瑰”。

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Rose, Rose, I love you with an aching heart
What is your future now we have to part?
Standing on the jetty as the steamer moves away
Flower of Malaya, I cannot stay

Make way, oh, make way, for my Eastern Rose
Men crowd in dozens everywhere she goes
In her rickshaw on the street or in a cabaret
"Please make way for Rose," you can hear them say

All my life I shall remember oriental music and you in my arms
Perfumed flowers in your tresses, lotus-scented breezes and swaying palms

Rose, Rose, I love you with your almond eyes
Fragrant and slender, 'neath tropical skies
I must cross the seas again and never see you more
way back to my home on a distant shore.

All my life I shall remember oriental music and you in my arms
Perfumed flowers in your tresses, lotus-scented breezes and swaying palms

Rose, Rose, I leave you; my ship is in the bay
Kiss me farewell, now there's nothing to say
East is east and west is west. Our worlds are far apart
I must leave you now, but I leave my heart

Rose, Rose, I love you with an aching heart
What is your future now we have to part?
Standing on the jetty as the steamer moves away
Flower of Malaya, I cannot stay

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tangshufang · 发表于 08-11-12 18:26:55

wuyongjiu9 · 发表于 08-11-12 19:02:30

板凳啊[s:9]

坐在对岸的企鹅 · 发表于 08-11-12 19:12:06

第一篇习作，O(∩_∩)O呵呵~
2.我们应该尽全力区实现我们的人生目标。
4.You should do your utmost to pass the examination.
5.We should spare no effort to beautify our environment

mh19810801 · 发表于 08-11-12 19:14:43

1、我们应该全力去完成人生的目标。
2、The govenment must do her utmost to protect the benefit of the people.
3、We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.

wuyongjiu9 · 发表于 08-11-12 19:16:08

2、我们应该倾尽全力去实现我们人生的目标。
4、we must do our utmost to reward the elderly who have endured all the sufferings and hardships in rearing their
children.
5、we should spare no effect to beautify our environment

蓝希 · 发表于 08-11-12 19:29:19

我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标
we must do our utmost to realize ourselves\' ideal.
we should spare no effort to prettify our enviroment.
[s:4] [s:4] [s:4]

sterygx · 发表于 08-11-12 19:49:36

我们就尽力达成我们的人生目标
You should do your utmost to achieve your work.
We should spare no effort to beautiful our enviroment.

s03211076 · 发表于 08-11-12 21:55:08

1.我们应该尽我们最大的努力达到我们的人生目标。
2. we should do our utmost to make our dream come true .
3.wo should spare no effort to beautify our environment

xingyi72640 · 发表于 08-11-12 22:09:23

呵呵，跟昨天短语意思相似。[s:5]
1.我们应该尽我们最大的努力达到我们的人生目标。
2. I will do my utmost to prepare for the exam.
3.we should spare no effort to beautify our environment

还有，7楼的environment 好像拼少个n

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