(转)【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（36期）

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倒数第四期~

1.从四楼开始对前一楼的习作进行批改，建议大家使用“引用”格式，并将前一楼的错误用“颜色”标出

2.英译中

We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.


答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉

( 我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。 )
3. 学习以下句型，要铭记于心啊！
do one‘s utmost to + V = do one‘s best（尽全力去...）

4.使用3给出的句型，写一段句子，题材不限
5.复习 前一期：  
中译英：
我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。
答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
( We should spare no effort to beautify our environment. )
6. 把给出要求仿写的句子背诵下啦，下一期会要求大家 中译英 哦～

ps.cookie 的笔记:

1.佳句来源：《三十五个经典句型 帮你过写作关》
2. utmost  n.  极限, 最大可能, 极力  adj.  极度的, 最远的 [answerfly]1[/answerfly]



美人如花，花似爱人。四十年代，陈歌辛创作的“玫瑰玫瑰我爱你"不但走红全国歌坛，二战结束后,美国流行乐坛还有人把这首歌译成英文Rose Rose I Love You，改编成爵士乐。今天我们听到的是Frankie Laine演唱的版本。怎么听都有股三四十年代旧上海的风情。

1999年7月11日，中国女足在洛杉矶玫瑰碗体育场参加女足世界杯决赛时，虽以点球失利，但全场华人观众同声高唱《玫瑰玫瑰我爱你》，全场响彻“Rose rose I love you”的歌声，场面非常感人，却让人领略到另一种的壮丽。中国女足也因此被称为“铿锵玫瑰”。

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Rose, Rose, I love you with an aching heart
What is your future now we have to part?
Standing on the jetty as the steamer moves away
Flower of Malaya, I cannot stay

Make way, oh, make way, for my Eastern Rose
Men crowd in dozens everywhere she goes
In her rickshaw on the street or in a cabaret
"Please make way for Rose," you can hear them say

All my life I shall remember oriental music and you in my arms
Perfumed flowers in your tresses, lotus-scented breezes and swaying palms

Rose, Rose, I love you with your almond eyes
Fragrant and slender, 'neath tropical skies
I must cross the seas again and never see you more
way back to my home on a distant shore.

All my life I shall remember oriental music and you in my arms
Perfumed flowers in your tresses, lotus-scented breezes and swaying palms

Rose, Rose, I leave you; my ship is in the bay
Kiss me farewell, now there's nothing to say
East is east and west is west. Our worlds are far apart
I must leave you now, but I leave my heart

Rose, Rose, I love you with an aching heart
What is your future now we have to part?
Standing on the jetty as the steamer moves away
Flower of Malaya, I cannot stay

[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-11-13 13:33 编辑 ]

1 、我们应该尽我们最大的努力实现我们的人生目标
2、The  teachers must do their  utmost   to  teach  their   students   gasp   the  studying  method  
3、We  should  spare no  efforts to  beautfy   our   environmen.

2，英译中

We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.

我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。


3，学习
do one‘s utmost to + V = do one‘s best（尽全力去...）

4，造句
We should do our utmost to help the people in deed need.

5，复习
We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.

为什么没人解答我的问题呢？

2、我们应该尽全力实现自己人生的目标。
4、Little Prince will do his utmost to perform prominent programmes.
5、We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.

我们应该尽力去达成我们的人生目标。

这个可比do one\'s best感觉好多了。

He was resigned somewhy he did not do his utmost at his position.

We should spare no effort to beautified our environment.

昨天实在没赶上做题。。

我们应该竭尽全力去实现我们的人生目标。

I will do  my utmost to help the little boy who comes
from the west.

we  should  spare no  effort   beautiful  our  evironment

我们应该尽我们最大的努力去实现我们人生中的目标。
3、In a city  where the GDP has  incread to 17%,where people\'s life  quanlity has been dramatically enhanced, there is no  choise expect to our utmost to survive.
5、we should spare to no effort to enhance our environment .

1.我们应该尽最大的努力来实现我们人生中的目标。
2.We should do our  utmost to do  our work.
Because we earn  money from work.
But ,now i  also  do my  utmost to  learn  English,Math  etc.
Maybe  this is my life!
3.We should  spare no effort to  beautify  our  environment.

ps: i don\'t like today \'s song that maybe a good song.


顺便请教下大家，是不是不能说： The work give money to me ,这是不是要算CHINESE ENGLISH?
要想说工作给我们钱，怎么表达？

poor english ,help me!![s:10]

我们应该尽我们尽全力去完成人生的目标。
I do my utmost to achieve my goal in life.
we should spare no effort to beautify our environment.